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| 26 Oct 2016 11:50 PM |
------------------------------------------- Enjoy--------------------------------------Ah, A Nice day at Kavra's hosted games. We have fans Awaiting to hear about the new admins. But one in particular Stood out the most. His name was Tony, Tony was a young lad, He had a long red shirt on, And some shorts, He wore a jacket almost all the time, it kept him away from The Crowding fans and the lag that they caused for him. Sadly due to that fact he never met Kavra, He grew jealous, Very jealous. Fan:1 "Wow who are the new admins" Fan:2"I dont know, But they sure must be cool!" Kavra then announced The new admins. He spoke Very dramatically to get the fans nervous. Kavra: The New admins are........- Every one grew with excitement then-- They all froze with fear, The User that had terrorized ROBLOX Before. Questions...was his name......-- ";Bring random" He exploited the command and as commanded it proceeded, Tony Then, was Next To Questions, Terror filled his eyes as if were As easy as filling up a water balloon, Questions Then grabbed Tony by the neck. Kavra:"Hey, Who's hacki-" Kavra then looked through the Players list and saw a name that scared him.. Questions: "You fools, Thought i'd die out this quickly?" He grabbed Tony And held him By the Throat. Kavra had no choice but to kick him, Kavra: ";Kick Questions" Questions: "What!, You'll see me In your nightmares!" He quickly vanished, Dropping tony on the ground, Kavra went up to tony and asked, |Kavra|:"What was that?" Tony: "I dont know....". Kavra grabbed tony and built a jail around him, Tony was worried he was going to get banned |kavra|: "Why did you troll us then hack?" Tony: What do you mean????" Kavra: Dont act stupid, Hacker! Tony the responded, "What! i never would hack!" Tony didn't know how to feel, he never met kavra before. |Kavra|: You're a hacking liar, Now leave my game. Tony: It wasn't me!!!-- But then, the sky turn dark as Night, and Two users Floated Down from it, A swirling Black cloud formed around them. The user names.
John Doe And Jane doe...User Number One and Two..
To be continued......
Written By iXxJustinxXi
Thanks for reading, Toon in for Part Two! "Unknown, The explanation" |
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| 26 Oct 2016 11:52 PM |
| Quick Reminders: This is not Related to the bully series of kavra, kavra has reviewed this, I will post more parts soon, Dont message me saying for you to be in it, Dont Rush Me with this series, Like the series? If i get enough views i Will make And place 2 users in this series(User chosen Randomly) , (I must get 200+ Views) Enjoy! |
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| 27 Oct 2016 12:33 AM |
| this story is very good, although i cant read it beccause it's long |
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| 27 Oct 2016 12:47 AM |
Well, to summarize:
A fan named Tony joins Kavra's Hosted Games to hear who the new admins are. A hacker, by the name of Questions, turns out to be in the server, and is standing right next to Tony. He grabs Tony by the neck and exploits the commands. He releases Tony after getting kicked by Kavra. Kavra then accused Tony as being the hacker and troller and kicks him aswell. At the end, Tony sees two users as he gets kicked.
Kind of confusing, ya' know?
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| 27 Oct 2016 03:01 AM |
| John and Jane were 2 and 3, the first was Admin, Who was replaced by roblox. Btw john and jane died (i belive) |
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| 27 Oct 2016 03:57 AM |
| Ya now what, I <3 THE YOUTUBER HIMSELF, THE 1 THAT MADE THE BULLY SERIES,YUP I HEARD OF HIM BECAUSE OF HIS BULLY SERIES, IT WAS THE BEST!!!! |
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| 27 Oct 2016 04:38 AM |
| Wow this is interesting :)❤️ |
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| 27 Oct 2016 06:03 AM |
I don't mind acting in this
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| 27 Oct 2016 06:13 AM |
| Very nice~waiting for part 2!! |
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| 27 Oct 2016 06:42 AM |
| Seems good to me I'd love a part I'm always active!!! but i live in the UK ;-; |
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| 27 Oct 2016 06:51 AM |
| hey ilive in the UK i can see ub #### |
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| 27 Oct 2016 07:27 AM |
| TBH I'm writing a story and it's longer, so you should be able to read it. Anyways, back to writing! |
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| 27 Oct 2016 08:57 AM |
| Its was cool I did like it I hope I see him agen I want to but no ### will. See him with they don't get in the game with its to full then keep going tell you get in th game |
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| 27 Oct 2016 10:11 AM |
This story is nothing compared to some of the RPs that used to grace this subforum. Trash compared to the wonders once written here.
You poor saps must be glad that the true RPers are no longer here. For now you may entertain yourselves with bad stories and worse reviews with what remains of the once glorious RPF. |
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| 27 Oct 2016 11:21 AM |
| This was AMAZING.Cant wait for part 2 =D |
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| 27 Oct 2016 06:56 PM |
It is a very good story! But I couldn't read it all because my eye sight started to get blurry but this is a fantasic story.
By the way, how did you thought of this story?
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