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| 20 Sep 2016 07:03 AM |
https://www.roblox.com/games/179211679/Peaceful-Sweet-Home How is it? Anything wrong with the house?
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| 20 Sep 2016 07:34 AM |
I'm assuming you wanted constructive criticism with regards to your building?
My first piece of criticism is the scale of the house and assets used, in my opinion the house is quite big compared to your character, and half the models used appear to be scaled for a house the size that you've built, while the other half seem decent for an average sized roblox character. While building you may find it useful to have a scale model of a roblox character in your place while you edit so you can accurately scale what you're building. To add on to this because of how large despite how many assets you've used and tried to fill the place up with it still comes across as empty.
Secondly a lot of the assets you've used appear as though they've come from the free model catalogue, while there is nothing wrong with this and it is an excellent tool for teaching yourself to build/script it is generally frowned upon in the roblox community. My suggestion is if you think you have to use a free model, take one from the catalogue and draw inspiration from it by trying to build something similar yourself.
My next point is going to highlight your colour choice, mainly in the ceiling, wall, and floor. In most (not all) of the rooms the ceiling, wall, and the floor are all white. Very rarely will you see a house in real life have the same colour for these. To fix this I'd suggest that you look at colour-schemes of houses on google images and try implement them into yours, experiment with the colour pallet!
Those are my main criticisms for your place, there are a few smaller things I could nitpick but i feel most of these will come to you over time as you become more experienced (mostly detailing). Goodluck with your future builds!
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| 20 Sep 2016 07:58 AM |
Thanks for your reply,I also want opinions,ideas,and any criticism about this game too. How is it? It's an apartment,and I scaled it much better to ROBLOX character,and another similarity is the walls,ceilings and floor are white which I'm aware of. Just want to know any other problems,and whether this much better or not. Especially your opinion on how clever I am on putting the free models and arrange them neatly to make the apartment look cozy and comfortable. https://www.roblox.com/games/358357386/Peaceful-Residential-Apartment |
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| 20 Sep 2016 08:01 AM |
| I'll fix the sweet home to make it scale to ROBLOX character,and the wall/floor/ceiling problem MIGHT be fixed after I make it smaller until it matches the character. For the free models problem I don't know when it will ever be fixed because I think it's too hard to build all the furniture of my own ones from the beginning. |
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| 20 Sep 2016 09:40 AM |
"For the free models problem I don't know when it will ever be fixed because I think it's too hard to build all the furniture of my own ones from the beginning."
You're 100% correct in that regard, I think I may have misphrased it slightly in my original message. As you do get better at building though i do suggest you begin to build your own assets yourself. Also pushing your limits is one of the best ways to improve. |
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| 20 Sep 2016 09:41 AM |
| Can you play my apartment and tell me how is it too? |
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| 20 Sep 2016 09:51 AM |
| The scale is much better, my only quarrel still is colourscheme but it's definitely an improvement. |
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| 20 Sep 2016 10:16 AM |
For the apartment: Do you mean the window frame being white is wrong too? If yes,then for the window frame,it's meant to be white. However,if ROBLOX released a new color called "Silver" and a new material "Aluminium",I will do that for the window frames instead. Also,do you think it will nice if I remain all the walls and ceiling white,but just make the floor different by replacing them with tiles? I will also need to put up the wall tiles for the kitchen and bathroom. Agree? |
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| 20 Sep 2016 10:19 AM |
| Just experiment dude, do what you think looks good. |
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