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Re: Fall of Facloiter -- Is this Lore good?

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Brandon59 is not online. Brandon59
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18 Sep 2016 02:08 AM
Basically I've been thinking of making an RPG game that is story influenced...

Is this a good backstory to it..?


-- The gods all lived in harmony until a very huge disagreement over who will own what land rose. The God of all Gods, Cydar, decided that in his raising of Ebsus and Ebnus his two sons that whoever is stronger, they will make this decision. That one saying began a chain of hatred and competition. Ebsus and Ebnus grew up with different gods trying to manipulate them into winning their certain kinds of land. They were open to deceit, they were used to it, naturally after this. When Ebnus won this competition his brother Ebsus was named the God of Misfortune because of what'd happened, while Ebnus was named the God of Life because
his final decision determined the fate of the world. This spawned Ebsus' hate for Ebnus. Later, Hyhmis the Goddess of Jealousy came to manipulate Ebsus into fighting back at this,
and this is what Ebsus came to want to believe, that he could take over the world if he fought. But he did not want to look as if he was a sore loser because of the honor code his family had. He left the House of Gods abruptly, without a word. He made and lived in his own city with his powers. His city looked sorrowful much like his name, "The God of Misfortune" living there would definitely make you sad. This curse was ineffective on the Harbingers of the Pure. One night they lodged at the City of Sorrow and at a bar found the God of Misfortune who they then asked a bunch of questions. He coughed most of the answers up which was a bad thing because now the Harbingers of the Pure had a platform to start their attack on the world since he was on board. None of the gods knew and or were prepared for this attack but it is surely powerful, and none of the Gods can stop it. Soon or later the world will be from split by the Gods to taken over by the Harbingers of the Pure.
[Can the hero stop this..?]


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Cariole is not online. Cariole
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18 Sep 2016 02:34 AM
can i have a tl;dr?


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Brandon59 is not online. Brandon59
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18 Sep 2016 03:14 AM
Kind of hard to make it a TL;DR

TL;DR --

At birth, Ebsus and Ebnus a god's two children were told that their decision changes fate of world, and that they will be fighting eachother to achieve that decision. One wins, hatred begins, and a clan tricks the losing god into going against the world for their own self benefits


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Brandon59 is not online. Brandon59
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18 Sep 2016 03:15 AM
Also if you've actual read through the OP I appreciate you taking your time to do so, I really do.


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