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| 21 Aug 2016 06:08 PM |
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KJrcxB-6pISq2uNG9YFVxbnXYrZV_fHyR0rhAKUN9WU/pub
its a prologue to a story i'm working on, the only hint of it's name comes from the initials "WOTHB" in it's title
if you want, can you, the reader, also point out any mistakes i've made and what i need to improve on?
p.s it isn't supposed to be all grouped up like that
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| 21 Aug 2016 06:11 PM |
b
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| 21 Aug 2016 07:01 PM |
b2
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| 21 Aug 2016 07:57 PM |
final b
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