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Re: Can I get feedback on my showcase

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Uncomfortably is not online. Uncomfortably
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09 Jul 2016 04:54 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/332912262/Peace-and-Quiet

I'm not afraid of ANY constructive criticism, so feel free to leave suggestions.
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fret13103 is not online. fret13103
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09 Jul 2016 05:50 PM
nice detail on the building.

add some more detail to the flora though, just put in some grass :)
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10 Jul 2016 01:50 AM
bump
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Salty_Onion is not online. Salty_Onion
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10 Jul 2016 02:05 AM
nice, still can use more details in the house


My models: https://www.roblox.com/users/36133282/inventory/#!/models
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10 Jul 2016 11:12 AM
much better than last time you posted about it


im just a grill and im on fire
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10 Jul 2016 02:58 PM
@mu

Thanks :)
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11 Aug 2016 04:14 PM
Bump
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11 Aug 2016 06:52 PM
1/10 absolutely horrible

jk nice detail


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13 Aug 2016 06:19 PM
Bump,

Added more to coffee table,
Made bees rotate a bit,
Fixed mountain blocks glitching.
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DerpyMcDerpell is not online. DerpyMcDerpell
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13 Aug 2016 08:42 PM
Great potential. The building is very nice, however, I think that the exterior walls of the house are a little bit...unsightly. Some more colour and a calm piece of music ought to do the trick. I see talent in you; I know this will turn out wonderful.
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13 Aug 2016 08:44 PM
May I also add some parts with the neon material are a little bit of...strange places to have neon, you know?
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13 Aug 2016 08:45 PM
Nice choice of rain graphics and sound effects as well. The trees and flowers are well built however the outside is a bit plain.
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13 Aug 2016 08:57 PM
Some calm music, with a jungle feel. I see you aimed for the rainy forest kind of feel, but left out the key features of it, big thick trees with leaves dropping and the rays of the sun shining through the wet leaves and tall grases, etc. House exterior is a little, well "impractical"... maybe make the bricks less thick.


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14 Aug 2016 10:17 PM
@Derp, Noob

Thanks for the feedback, I update almost daily so I'll try to get these done!
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03 Sep 2016 07:29 PM
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07 Sep 2016 07:06 PM
bump, my other thread got deleted :|


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07 Sep 2016 07:07 PM
Well made, did well with the effects too.


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07 Sep 2016 07:09 PM
@90,


Thanks! :)


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22 Sep 2016 04:12 PM
Bumppppp


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02 Oct 2016 01:01 PM
B-b-b-b-UMP


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30 Oct 2016 05:40 PM
Bummmp


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Salty_Onion is not online. Salty_Onion
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30 Oct 2016 05:41 PM
lol I remember this thread


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13 Nov 2016 02:05 PM
@Salty

So do I ;)

I would stop bumping, but I feel it needs more but I just can't put my finger on what it needs.


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30 Nov 2016 09:25 PM
Bump has appeared in the basement


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