Nomadn
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| 10 Aug 2016 02:29 PM |
Read my profile for examples and more information. PM if interested.
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Nomadn
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Nomadn
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Nomadn
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| 11 Aug 2016 05:04 PM |
| https://www.roblox.com/games/388170339/Quarantine-EARLY-ACCESS |
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Crashee
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| 11 Aug 2016 05:42 PM |
@Russian That game is beautiful. I see potential in it.
10/10 |
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Nomadn
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| 12 Aug 2016 07:04 AM |
The visuals on that game look outstanding, there are obviously a lot of bugs such as the guns not working properly or the zombies and so on but the final product I cannot wait for.
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Mada754
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| 12 Aug 2016 08:22 AM |
https://www.roblox.com/games/465989522/The-quest-Open-pre-alpha
Doesn't compare to Russian's in the slightest bit, because I'm a beginner scripter and intermediate builder.
wizard of GC&D|( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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Nomadn
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| 13 Aug 2016 07:28 AM |
One of my newest: https://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=195980375
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| 13 Aug 2016 10:16 AM |
https://www.roblox.com/games/457080612/hope-despair it's not yet close to finished, but i'd like some tips on what should be added |
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| 13 Aug 2016 10:59 AM |
| https://www.roblox.com/games/454451700/The-Treacherous-Jungle-DEMO |
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Nomadn
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| 13 Aug 2016 11:00 AM |
Ice, I sent you a message.
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Nomadn
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| 13 Aug 2016 11:01 AM |
@Voo, I'll look when I have a chance.
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Deve1op
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| 13 Aug 2016 11:19 AM |
Here's my game its not nearly finished i need to add more game play and story but i would like to know what you think about the setting,mood,building.
https://web.roblox.com/games/474714425/Game-Dev#carousel-game-details |
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Nomadn
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| 13 Aug 2016 11:28 AM |
I'll PM you about improvements and what can be added.
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Nomadn
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| 13 Aug 2016 03:08 PM |
Can't message you so I'll say it here.
The sounds go well with the environment, an emo sort of room. The materials used also fit the theme, concrete and brick. The leg lengths on the bed and the chair do well to make the player seem small which is clearly a theme trying to be implied. It looks the same pretty much wherever you look, a very nice use of the colours black and grey.
Changes to be made: I don't think the player should be able to jump because this gnaws in a bit of novelty. The walk speed should be slowed down so the footsteps seem heavier and of course, the player goes slower. The white door at the back is out of place and should be changed to a normal garage door to fit the colour scheme.
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Nomadn
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Deve1op
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| 14 Aug 2016 05:24 AM |
| Thank you for the feedback |
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Deve1op
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| 14 Aug 2016 05:25 AM |
| and Btw what do you mean by a normal garage door? |
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Nomadn
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| 14 Aug 2016 02:53 PM |
and Btw what do you mean by a normal garage door?
Search "garage door texture", I mean the metal industrial type with repeating lines.
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| 14 Aug 2016 02:58 PM |
what about my game? https://www.roblox.com/games/477018506/WIP-Team-Mining-Tycoon
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Deve1op
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| 14 Aug 2016 03:08 PM |
| Oh ya i have that on the outside ill do it on the inside and i also disabled jumping :) |
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| 14 Aug 2016 04:16 PM |
https://www.roblox.com/games/452012471/lolo-MOVED#!/about ty
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Nomadn
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| 15 Aug 2016 03:29 AM |
@richarro123
Reminds me of those old ride the cart to win games, since it's so early in the making I can't give an opinion though.
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Nomadn
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| 15 Aug 2016 03:34 AM |
@Weirdraidercs35
The "follow a friend" feature is really nice to see. The GUI is user-friendly. Instead of using "pls", aim to use proper grammar to seem more professional. The character customization has a lot of variety. The zombies make too much weird noise. Guns work nicely along with picking up items. And the only other problem is that you've completely stolen apocalypse rising. Make your own game.
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