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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
Joined: 11 Nov 2015
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06 Aug 2016 07:39 PM
1. yes I need a new thumbnail

2.this is just a testing server so the game passes are donations i have actual good ones on the real game

link:https://www.roblox.com/games/454451700/The-Treacherous-Jungle-DEMO


comment what you think!
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LuaCodez is not online. LuaCodez
Joined: 21 Jun 2016
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06 Aug 2016 07:43 PM
Definitely not.

That is not to bash you but it just doesn't have any content although the concept sounds good.
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CheckYourFacts is not online. CheckYourFacts
Joined: 26 Jun 2011
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06 Aug 2016 07:50 PM
It is not.

However, I like what you have so far. The effects are cool. Also, it's hard to make obbys that are "front page material". It just doesn't happen a lot anymore.

If you'd like, I consider myself decent at graphic art. PM me if you wanna see my work/request a piece.
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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
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06 Aug 2016 07:52 PM
ok :D ik it's short its just a glimpse
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CheckYourFacts is not online. CheckYourFacts
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06 Aug 2016 07:54 PM
So yeah just PM me with what you want if you do.
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re_clusive is not online. re_clusive
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06 Aug 2016 08:02 PM
Dont take advice from people who haven't been on the front page, they aren't there for a reason.


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CheckYourFacts is not online. CheckYourFacts
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06 Aug 2016 08:13 PM
Not necessarily.

I see plenty of really good developers who simply can't get the word out about their games.

Also, if you're referring to me as one of those people, that's because I haven't personally released a game yet. However, I do have experience.
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Salty_Onion is not online. Salty_Onion
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06 Aug 2016 08:28 PM
Add multiple spawns because every time I spawn it restarts me ;/


See my builds in-game https://www.roblox.com/games/444382485/My-Museum-of-models -- models: https://www.roblox.com/users/36133282/inventory/#!/models
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CrimsonBeatz is not online. CrimsonBeatz
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06 Aug 2016 08:39 PM
Not front page, but i definitely can see this game getting quite a bit of visits.
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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
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06 Aug 2016 08:54 PM
hmm ok


prob still gonna sponsor for 5k :D just see where it takes me
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LuaCodez is not online. LuaCodez
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07 Aug 2016 12:05 PM

re_clusive is online. re_clusive

Joined: 20 Nov 2015
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08-06-2016 06:02 PM
Dont take advice from people who haven't been on the front page, they aren't there for a reason.




That is ignorant. The OP asked for criticism from the community and it was given.

Just because one is not on the front page, doesn't mean their opinion is invalid. There are many factors why they may not be on FP. Some may not have time, or want to but have the skills and knowledge to do so.

That thinking will never get anyone anywhere in life. It's like saying because you are not god, you cannot judge someone. Hence a judge in court is invalid or criticism is invalid.

Your comment is very ignorant, and my apologies for my rudeness. I highly recommend you rethink what you said.
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dude170652 is not online. dude170652
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07 Aug 2016 12:12 PM
So I liked the demo and went ahead and bought paid access. The scenery is nice and I like the amount of detail you put into it. Some parts of the obby are challenging, which is good. I maybe could see it getting quite a few visits, but unless you add a storyline and extend the game quite a bit, I wouldnt see it getting to the front page. I thouroughly enjoyed it though. I cant wait to see the final product!

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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
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07 Aug 2016 12:24 PM
there is going to be a storyline also purchasable so you can defend your self against animals
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VirtuaI_Riot is not online. VirtuaI_Riot
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07 Aug 2016 12:25 PM
Not yet, but I like what you have done so far.


Hi
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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
Joined: 11 Nov 2015
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07 Aug 2016 12:28 PM
kk ig ill just have to keep updating or add more gameplay
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qqtt991 is online. qqtt991
Joined: 14 Dec 2007
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07 Aug 2016 01:15 PM
It's quite attractive, but needs a bit more put into it in terms of gameplay.

Try spreading the obstacle path around the same areas a little bit (but not so that players can skip or fall back to a point they've already been on) so you can see what's ahead. This might add a bit more to the life of the jungle if you can see other players screwing up in the background.

Also consider checkpoints with little dinging cues so players know they've hit a checkpoint.

Maybe also place an invisible killing brick a distance above the floor so players ragdoll before they hit the ground. This is so they don't always just flop over lamely.


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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
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07 Aug 2016 03:10 PM
nice ideas!
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