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| 06 Aug 2016 07:39 PM |
1. yes I need a new thumbnail
2.this is just a testing server so the game passes are donations i have actual good ones on the real game
link:https://www.roblox.com/games/454451700/The-Treacherous-Jungle-DEMO
comment what you think! |
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LuaCodez
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| 06 Aug 2016 07:43 PM |
Definitely not.
That is not to bash you but it just doesn't have any content although the concept sounds good. |
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| 06 Aug 2016 07:50 PM |
It is not.
However, I like what you have so far. The effects are cool. Also, it's hard to make obbys that are "front page material". It just doesn't happen a lot anymore.
If you'd like, I consider myself decent at graphic art. PM me if you wanna see my work/request a piece. |
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| 06 Aug 2016 07:52 PM |
| ok :D ik it's short its just a glimpse |
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| 06 Aug 2016 07:54 PM |
| So yeah just PM me with what you want if you do. |
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| 06 Aug 2016 08:02 PM |
Dont take advice from people who haven't been on the front page, they aren't there for a reason.
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| 06 Aug 2016 08:13 PM |
Not necessarily.
I see plenty of really good developers who simply can't get the word out about their games.
Also, if you're referring to me as one of those people, that's because I haven't personally released a game yet. However, I do have experience. |
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| 06 Aug 2016 08:28 PM |
Add multiple spawns because every time I spawn it restarts me ;/
See my builds in-game https://www.roblox.com/games/444382485/My-Museum-of-models -- models: https://www.roblox.com/users/36133282/inventory/#!/models |
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| 06 Aug 2016 08:39 PM |
| Not front page, but i definitely can see this game getting quite a bit of visits. |
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| 06 Aug 2016 08:54 PM |
hmm ok
prob still gonna sponsor for 5k :D just see where it takes me |
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LuaCodez
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| 07 Aug 2016 12:05 PM |
re_clusive is online. re_clusive
Joined: 20 Nov 2015 Total Posts: 80 08-06-2016 06:02 PM Dont take advice from people who haven't been on the front page, they aren't there for a reason.
That is ignorant. The OP asked for criticism from the community and it was given.
Just because one is not on the front page, doesn't mean their opinion is invalid. There are many factors why they may not be on FP. Some may not have time, or want to but have the skills and knowledge to do so.
That thinking will never get anyone anywhere in life. It's like saying because you are not god, you cannot judge someone. Hence a judge in court is invalid or criticism is invalid.
Your comment is very ignorant, and my apologies for my rudeness. I highly recommend you rethink what you said. |
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| 07 Aug 2016 12:12 PM |
So I liked the demo and went ahead and bought paid access. The scenery is nice and I like the amount of detail you put into it. Some parts of the obby are challenging, which is good. I maybe could see it getting quite a few visits, but unless you add a storyline and extend the game quite a bit, I wouldnt see it getting to the front page. I thouroughly enjoyed it though. I cant wait to see the final product!
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| 07 Aug 2016 12:24 PM |
| there is going to be a storyline also purchasable so you can defend your self against animals |
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| 07 Aug 2016 12:25 PM |
Not yet, but I like what you have done so far.
Hi |
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| 07 Aug 2016 12:28 PM |
| kk ig ill just have to keep updating or add more gameplay |
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| 07 Aug 2016 01:15 PM |
It's quite attractive, but needs a bit more put into it in terms of gameplay.
Try spreading the obstacle path around the same areas a little bit (but not so that players can skip or fall back to a point they've already been on) so you can see what's ahead. This might add a bit more to the life of the jungle if you can see other players screwing up in the background.
Also consider checkpoints with little dinging cues so players know they've hit a checkpoint.
Maybe also place an invisible killing brick a distance above the floor so players ragdoll before they hit the ground. This is so they don't always just flop over lamely.
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