pepeyon
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cambo296
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:36 AM |
dont read the link. just dont do it
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henhut
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:40 AM |
thx
roses are red, violets are blue, sainsburys chocolate chip cookie review |
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:41 AM |
@Command
Very badly done, incorrect grammar and overall bad storyline.
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mil89er
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:42 AM |
TRY NOT TO LAUGH OR CRINGE!?!?!?!?!?!? 2016 EDITION (GONE WRONG) 2017, PEWDIEPIE
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kita35783
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:43 AM |
i will drink a bleach right now
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:43 AM |
0/10 trying to hard, cringe. ^
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:43 AM |
@Dragon
I don't know what you're even talking about, everyone read it perfectly, maybe you just can't see real grammar |
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:45 AM |
@Command For example, you don't use commas in the correct places, and instead use full stops, this leads to an awkward read.
Get educated please.
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:47 AM |
I read the link.
I'm dead inside. |
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| 04 Aug 2016 10:52 AM |
| THAT FAN FIC ENDED MY LIFE |
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pepeyon
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| 04 Aug 2016 11:18 AM |
Waht?
Boy, we are in some serious jelly! |
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pepeyon
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| 04 Aug 2016 11:22 AM |
dragon,
First, I am well educated, please do not bring my education into this. Secondly, that's the writing/dialogue style i chose, if you don't like it, you can just say that instead of saying I'm dumb... |
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| 04 Aug 2016 11:23 AM |
Hashtags are quite cringey. ;)
--SPK |
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| 04 Aug 2016 11:23 AM |
So incorrect grammar was apart of it? oh ok, sorry then!
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| 05 Aug 2016 07:49 AM |
There's nothing wrong with incorrect grammar :p There's something wrong if he has incorrect grammar and has auto-correct |
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| 05 Aug 2016 07:52 AM |
There is when you're trying to write a story.
That's like saying "It's okay to not use good grammar when writing a book"
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