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ThatChickenGirlYeah is not online. ThatChickenGirlYeah
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26 Jun 2016 03:43 PM
I just want to say thank you for taking the time to review over this story! I really hope you enjoy. Please leave suggestions and criticism in the forum comments, that would be greatly appreciated! Now, here is DREAMLAND..

***DREAMLAND***

Terri Perez stood at the large double doors that lead into Hearthwood Elemenatary School. She pushed open the doors and strolled in casually. Terri found her locker and entered the combination, swinging open the door.

Terri hugged her textbooks, walking to science class. She turned the doorknob and walked in, taking a seat at her desk. She placed her books on the surface of her desk and listened to the teacher's lecture.

"Psst! Terri. Terri!" a voice hissed from beside her.

She glanced at the teacher, who was busy writing things on the chalkboard, and then turned to the voice.

"What is it, Kayla?" Terri whispered.

Kayla McAllister had been Terri's best friend since kindergarten.

"Do you know the answer for #3 on our geometry homework yesterday?"

"I ain't telling you!" she said playfully.

"Awh..oh, and Terri! Jack and I walked home from school together yesterday!" Kayla squealed quietly.

Terri rolled her eyes teasingly, knowing Kayla's romantic trait.

"Girls in the front row," the teacher warned from the front of the room, narrowing her eyebrows.

"Sorry, Mrs. Robinson," they apologized in unison, folding their hands on their desks and batting their eyelashes innocently in a Little Goody Two-Shoes manner.

The clock ticked and ticked and ticked, while all the students waited and waited and waited for the bell to ring. After what seemed like an eternity, it did. Everyone stampeded out of the room, Terri and Kayla nearly getting trampled. They didn't care, for they were eager to get out of the boring class.

The two girls walked home together, their houses being almost right next to each other, so it would be the same trip for both of them. Terri waved to Kayla and opened the door to her house.

"Mom, Dad, I'm home!" she called up the stairs. No answer.

"They must be at work," Terri assumed and went up the stairs.

She flopped on her bed and turned on her iPad. Terri played a game for half an hour and checked the time.

Her watch read 4:30, so Terri decided to have a quick nap-- or, what SHE called quick. It usually always ended up in being a 3-4 hour nap.

Terri snuggled up under her covers after closing her blinds and shutting off her lamp. She rested her head on her pillow and closed her eyes.

Mere words cannot describe what she found as she lulled herself into dreamland..
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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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26 Jun 2016 03:44 PM
wrong forum
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littlegamer07 is not online. littlegamer07
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26 Jun 2016 03:44 PM
Why would you want hate?

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ThatChickenGirlYeah is not online. ThatChickenGirlYeah
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26 Jun 2016 08:05 PM
why do people always just say "wrong forum"
will you ppl never shut your mouth for once..
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26 Jun 2016 08:06 PM
0/10


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thelegoboy8732489 is not online. thelegoboy8732489
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26 Jun 2016 08:07 PM
story sucks and tl;dr tbqh


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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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27 Jun 2016 12:39 PM
@that You must be new, OT isn't the most niced forum post..Please


Wrong forum.
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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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27 Jun 2016 12:40 PM
*sub-forum
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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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27 Jun 2016 12:41 PM
I wanna make a big deal out of this because she said

"why do people always just say "wrong forum"
will you ppl never shut your mouth for once.." BECAUSE ITS THE WRONG FORUM, why don't you shut your mouth, and go on a other thread, jesus.
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ThatChickenGirlYeah is not online. ThatChickenGirlYeah
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01 Aug 2016 02:22 PM
im guessing you fools are CrysisAfair's little idiot squad?
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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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01 Aug 2016 03:02 PM
"squad" sorry OT doesn't have squads,

also I told this girl to go to "roleplaying"

But she said that, that has nothing to do with the arguement, and blocked me.


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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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01 Aug 2016 03:03 PM
Also

>implying I even know those other people


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WarbossBoneStompa is not online. WarbossBoneStompa
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01 Aug 2016 03:12 PM
As someone from the role-playing forum, this belongs there. The subforum is for roleplays and stories.


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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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01 Aug 2016 03:13 PM
Also you realize that the description of the Role-Playing subforum saids "for story telling and imagination" Who's the idiot now? Hon.


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COOLPUP12345 is not online. COOLPUP12345
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01 Aug 2016 03:13 PM
"idiot squad"

peopl who are joining this thread are disliking you because you are rude tbh
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rapunzeal is not online. rapunzeal
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01 Aug 2016 03:18 PM
@ThatChickenGirlYeah I NEED HELP PLEASE I CAN'T WATCH THIS VIDEO!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NuONuafxwk
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twainprice is not online. twainprice
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01 Aug 2016 03:18 PM
telling us to shut up doesn't change how it's in the wrong forum
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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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01 Aug 2016 03:20 PM
@twan, You put it in such a simple and amazing way, you said it better than I could ever



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Agent_DiNozzo is not online. Agent_DiNozzo
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01 Aug 2016 03:20 PM
She lulled into a dreamland where she got flamed for thinking THIS BELONG SIN OFF TOPIC AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH


DiNozzo is on the case. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jRQAF3CLQ84
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Agent_DiNozzo is not online. Agent_DiNozzo
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01 Aug 2016 03:22 PM
belongs in*
god damn it


DiNozzo is on the case. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jRQAF3CLQ84
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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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01 Aug 2016 03:29 PM
We all make mistakes Agent, DreamLand was just a very big one


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twainprice is not online. twainprice
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01 Aug 2016 03:30 PM
agent that name and siggy combo is amazing
i need to watch ncis more
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Creepcruncher is not online. Creepcruncher
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01 Aug 2016 03:30 PM
wrong forum this belongs in roleplay or something


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Creepcruncher is not online. Creepcruncher
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01 Aug 2016 03:31 PM
"idiot squad"

no we're the OT bandwagon

classic newbag mistake hah


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CrysisAfair is not online. CrysisAfair
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01 Aug 2016 03:32 PM
creep, I tried making a Jacket avatar, but I didn't have the tools, and now my character looks like this.


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