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| 28 Jul 2016 03:51 PM |
https://twitter.com/Noelzilla1/status/758766305444966401
Now I need a name, I'll think about it later, any thoughts on the artwork? :D |
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| 28 Jul 2016 04:00 PM |
i'd say like, a 7/10 on the artwork. while your anatomy is alright,some of the coloring is a bit weird (like the hair) and the white shading lines.
as for the name i'd suggest to go with something that relates to the main-character or the universe itself. good job
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| 28 Jul 2016 04:12 PM |
@Mystic alright. :D
I honestly like the color for some reason, idk why but it appeals to me. |
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| 28 Jul 2016 04:19 PM |
| great stuff , as always noel |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:17 PM |
Forgot the link
https://twitter.com/Noelzilla1/status/758786397767503872 |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:22 PM |
looks great dude i never read comics but i can't wait to read this one |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:40 PM |
| @In This is my first time making a comic, expect some flaws. :) |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:46 PM |
| great job on the artwork man |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:48 PM |
| @WIsdom thanks. Hope u saw my second version where I added better lighting. |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:54 PM |
Yeah, I saw it.
Well for my preferences I would say that the darker version was better but yeah, the lighter one seems good as well |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:55 PM |
| name of the main character? |
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| 28 Jul 2016 05:57 PM |
just saw some of your work on your twitter
you're really good |
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| 31 Jul 2016 07:58 PM |
| @Jl Well... it's a short. The real story starts once I have a team set up... or a writer |
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| 31 Jul 2016 09:46 PM |
if it is a short, you might want to make the series title really specific
because comics with real stories have simple titles |
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| 01 Aug 2016 08:10 AM |
| @Jl The series name is going to be called "The Augmented Series" |
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