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| 26 Jul 2016 10:21 AM |
| Start Off: (Helicopter is riding with a crew of 6 Navy Seals) - [Radio] “Brother AH-56, there is a ‘Bogey’(unidentified) Helicopter in your radar, do you copy Brother AH-56?” [Pilot] “Copy that Alpha Bravo 621, we’ll check it out, over and out. [Pilot] (puts heli in autopilot and goes back to the back) “Ya’ll listen up, there is a unidentified Helicopter in the area. Be aware at all times, make sure you are near the M60 at all times to!(Goes back to the cockpit)-” [Commander Smith] (Standing up) “Ight, so if yeh didn’t just hear that… we need to be ready at any minute because that daggone heli is unidentified. So do me a favour, don’t shoot at it until your told to.” [Everyone] (complaining)| [Radio] “Brother AH-56, Birds Affirm, do you copy?” [Pilot] (shocked) “Y-yes, I copy Alpha Bravo 621”. (puts auto pilot on again and goes to back)…(goes to Commander) “S-Sir, we have a problem” [Commander] “spit it out Johnson, what is it?” [Pilot] “I just got word that that unidentified Heli aren’t unidentified anymore. [Commander] “What are were they identified as then or did you get a cap- (An orbit at a specified location)? [Pilot] “They were identified as a Mikoyan MiG-29 Fulcrum and no I didn’t get their location…” [Commander] “Mikoyan… That’s Russian, why would Russia be in this territory? [Pilot] “I have no clue, but tell the crew to get on the guns. [Commander] Ok. (Pilot goes back to cockpit) [Commander] Ya’ll, we just got word that were gonna have a fight. [Everyone] (shouting FINALLY!) [Sergeant Bradly] “Do you guys here that?” [Everyone] (silent)| (BOOM) (left side of the Heli is shot) (Seargent Bradly Dead) [Lieutenant West] (looks into cockpit and sees the pilot is dead) (passes out) |
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25ways
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| 26 Jul 2016 10:23 AM |
| this is something im making with my friends... so yah lOl |
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skullsten
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| 26 Jul 2016 10:24 AM |
| dialog is good but it needs spacing |
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| 26 Jul 2016 10:32 AM |
press "Do not allow replies to this post" at the bottom of your thread next time so people can't reply to this, thank you
Welcome to ATR, may I take your order? https://www.roblox.com/ITS-JUST-A-PRANK-BRO-item?id=318480818 |
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SageDave
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| 26 Jul 2016 10:35 AM |
Lock it next time, also if you might want to make it neater
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