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| 14 Jul 2016 11:00 AM |
Rate my first trench coat /bsvnk4 |
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Recogic
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| 14 Jul 2016 11:09 AM |
make the shading less disorganized/bubbly and more sharp
idk how to explain it
however for a first time this is really damn good |
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| 14 Jul 2016 11:42 AM |
| For your first one, it's a solid 8/10. As it appears, your inspiration came from STHHXX's trench coat; older shading style, and the tie. Not necessarily a big fan of the ties on trench coats, but other than that it is very well done. Keep it up. |
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| 14 Jul 2016 11:52 AM |
| Ima go with a good solid 9/10 |
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| 14 Jul 2016 05:29 PM |
would help if you say what image website it is.
if you respond to this post for it I can give my opinion :l |
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| 14 Jul 2016 10:11 PM |
solid 9 for first job that is just unexplainable
I might even for for a 9.5-10
LMaDer Since 2013 | R$-9999 | Illuminati-333 |
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| 14 Jul 2016 10:32 PM |
as it's your first time its 11/10 - ign
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| 14 Jul 2016 10:44 PM |
hmm not bad, try making the lines more curved. i like curves. work on shading and the belt and it'll look better.
7/10
hey~ |
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| 14 Jul 2016 10:49 PM |
| Make it feel more natural and realistic, work with colors and shading, nice work tho |
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