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Re: Can I get feedback on this building showcase?

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Uncomfortably is not online. Uncomfortably
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08 Jul 2016 06:03 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/332912262/Peace-and-Quiet

I've decided to start updating it again, so here we go. I'm not afraid of ANY constructive criticism.
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Uncomfortably is not online. Uncomfortably
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08 Jul 2016 11:31 PM
Bump ;)
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USArockssoccer15 is not online. USArockssoccer15
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09 Jul 2016 12:13 AM
I remember this place. Looks much better now.

The exterior is fine for now, upgrades to make it look better can be done later. I think you should work more on the interior. Add more things such as a desk and maybe some bookshelves. If you need some more ideas on what to put, there are many popular showcases that are perfect for you.
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matriex2 is not online. matriex2
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09 Jul 2016 12:18 AM
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09 Jul 2016 12:23 AM
@USA, Ok, will do; Thanks for the feedback :)
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Awsper_Evoluted is not online. Awsper_Evoluted
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09 Jul 2016 12:42 AM
Not bad, I like it, but add more detail, and upgrade the place a bit, but its on the right tracks :)


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supexlo is not online. supexlo
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09 Jul 2016 03:15 AM
Really good, atmospheric.
I love how there's volumetric air effect and how the exterior looks.
You could improve on the interior, make it realistic.
More objects, and details can be added.
Use decals/textures, it's essential.
Well done.


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Uncomfortably is not online. Uncomfortably
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09 Jul 2016 12:33 PM
@Super

Thanks! I will be sure to improve on the interior.
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Uncomfortably is not online. Uncomfortably
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09 Jul 2016 04:35 PM
Bump,

• Added decor in house
• Remade bed
• Removed first person lock
• Added window frames
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09 Jul 2016 11:52 PM
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10 Jul 2016 01:49 AM
Bumpity :)
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supexlo is not online. supexlo
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10 Jul 2016 02:06 AM
Everything is looking good now.
With the help of scripting, make the television play videos.
I would also recommend turning off the computer (no decals on screen).
Experiment with particle emitters, they can be useful in your showcase.
Want to consider changing the outside to terrain?
It would increase the realism of the showcase.
(script the bees on the outside to fly around too).
Nice work.


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Uncomfortably is not online. Uncomfortably
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10 Jul 2016 02:56 PM
@Super

Thanks for the feedback :)

& Bump
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10 Jul 2016 05:20 PM
The house is in the middle of nowhere. If you're going to have paths, at least add closed off entrances / gateways so it makes a little more sense. Right now, the paths head straight into the rocks.
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10 Jul 2016 05:45 PM
@Counter

Thanks for the feedback, I'll include this in the next update!
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11 Jul 2016 01:51 PM
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Otherworldliness is not online. Otherworldliness
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11 Jul 2016 02:30 PM
Behind that waterfall would be an amazing place for a little secret area.

Just saiyan. ;)
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UnderworldFPS is not online. UnderworldFPS
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11 Jul 2016 10:07 PM
Pretty cool and the atmosphere is nice.

I would just like to see more details and don't be afraid to take your times making your stuff sometimes I waste 1 hour building a simple details because it's not enough good at my eyes so I remake it 10 times until it's like I want.

For example: Your not good at building trees. No problem! Take a day and build trees and others tress you'll become good :P

It's nice really, keep up the good work and add more details since it's a small place.

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12 Jul 2016 12:35 AM
@underworld, thanks for the feedback; although I was going to do this anyway.
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12 Jul 2016 07:09 PM
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USArockssoccer15 is not online. USArockssoccer15
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12 Jul 2016 07:40 PM
Definitely looking much better.

The interior is still looking empty.

The house's exterior is messy. It's the only thing bothering me right now. There are many amazing showcases of houses. When your bored, visit one. Look at the way the exterior is built. Go through more showcases until you come up with one that you feel fits your style.

One last thing: After you feel like you've finished expanding your house, a roof would look nice.
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Uncomfortably is not online. Uncomfortably
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13 Jul 2016 12:04 AM
@usa

Thanks! Your feedback in particular always means a lot to me, so I'll make sure i improve on these things.
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13 Jul 2016 12:15 AM
It's looking pretty well.

The interior of the house could definitely be added onto.

I'd also recommend making the dirt path outside the house look a little more 'shined up' for lack of a better term. Basically make the curve look better, perhaps branch the path out a bit to different areas, that type of thing. Maybe even side the path with small stones?
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