Nenno
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| 26 Jun 2016 07:27 AM |
Red = Raiders
Black = Defenders
Add your own flag in the last building
if you want me to add anything specific to your group, I'm open to suggestion
Finally, it's a gunfight/swordfight mixed fort. I don't recommend only putting swords on this fort.
Look around, and PM me if you like it.
https://www.roblox.com/games/423873398/Nennos-Place-Number-73 |
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UncleAli
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War_Force
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| 26 Jun 2016 07:41 AM |
I would recommend you try and practice building a fort before releasing anything for sale.
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Nenno
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| 26 Jun 2016 07:42 AM |
"I would recommend you try and practice building a fort before releasing anything for sale."
Could you point me to all the mistakes I made? |
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UncleAli
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| 26 Jun 2016 07:44 AM |
your terrain walls are too blocky, and the whole design is generic. There is nothing unique or special about it
also your colors and boring
and your lighting is still default
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Nenno
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| 26 Jun 2016 07:47 AM |
"your terrain walls are too blocky, and the whole design is generic. There is nothing unique or special about it"
Agreed, when I showed it to a friend he actually thought it was buildings. They were intended to be mountains. Any way to make terrain look like mountains without using actual terrain?
"also your colors and boring"
Yes, I've noticed that myself, you're right. No excuse for that.
"and your lighting is still default"
I really don't know how to change that in studio. If you could tell me how to, I'll use it in my next build, which will, belive me, be better than this mess. |
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Nenno
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UncleAli
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:00 AM |
in studio go to lighting, instead of workspace, and toy around there
use different shades of gray on yor walls
rotate the walls every so slightly everytime
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Nenno
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:04 AM |
"use different shades of gray on yor walls"
Okay, I'll do that.
"rotate the walls every so slightly everytime"
Interesting.
Thank you. |
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UncleAli
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:12 AM |
check out this build of mine, and notice how the grey walls are all tilted and rotated in different ways https://www.roblox.com/games/371609197/sujin
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Nenno
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:15 AM |
"check out this build of mine, and notice how the grey walls are all tilted and rotated in different ways"
It looks quite good, I've also noticed that you use a different skybox, and more exciting colors. My build basically looks like a bore fest.
I think it's important to note that this was my first large scale build. |
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UncleAli
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:18 AM |
yeah well using a skybox is always important, and i've increased saturation because i wanted my build to feel really colorful, which i managed
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Nenno
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:21 AM |
"yeah well using a skybox is always important, and i've increased saturation because i wanted my build to feel really colorful, which i managed"
Okay, thank you. |
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UncleAli
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:24 AM |
also leave pinewood builders, waste of ur group space
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Nenno
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:25 AM |
"also leave pinewood builders, waste of ur group space"
Yeah, I'm wondering, because I was promised a PM about a position I had a chance to join, but it never did, so I'm wondering the legitemacy of this group. |
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A_stral
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:35 AM |
Could use some more updated work
Once a Sleet, always a Sleet |
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| 26 Jun 2016 08:38 AM |
Yeah, adding on to the other dude, add some texture to your mountains
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