Mvgnifico
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| 22 Jun 2016 08:08 PM |
https://www.roblox.com/games/374196020/Build-World
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Mvgnifico
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| 22 Jun 2016 08:26 PM |
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mu_2
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| 22 Jun 2016 08:40 PM |
They look pretty good
The bridge is the best in my opinion
The seats in the room you spawn in is the worst due to the seat pieces being too close (i jump to get out and land in another)
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Mvgnifico
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| 22 Jun 2016 09:47 PM |
Thanks!
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FPSPwnz0r
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| 23 Jun 2016 04:53 AM |
Freaking sick
also HOW DID YOU MAKE THAT CONE SHAPE ON THE SCOPE I'VE BEEN WONDERING FOR SO LONG
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Mvgnifico
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| 23 Jun 2016 03:09 PM |
Made it with Studio Build Suite, really good building plugin. All you have to do is rotate the parts around the pivot until you have a circle, then Rotate Object. This will make them fold inwards or outwards.
And thanks!
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Mvgnifico
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| 23 Jun 2016 05:16 PM |
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Ocks67
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| 23 Jun 2016 05:58 PM |
Your guns have nice details but the proportions are meh. Never saw such an awkward handle on your sniper rifle.
I suggest you practicing more on proportions. Using decals as backgrounds to build on or sometimes just in order to set the elements positions such has magazines, handles, sights, and others.
Everything else is good (On par with my average skill level) or awesome, like that bridge. |
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| 23 Jun 2016 06:00 PM |
im gonna be honest, they suck.
3.5/10 stars -TMIR |
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Mvgnifico
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| 23 Jun 2016 09:34 PM |
@Ocks, thank you! It's funny though, I think I had the decal for the sniper rifle stretched too much.
@Trust, any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? Just telling me that they suck isn't helping.
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Mvgnifico
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| 24 Jun 2016 05:25 AM |
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| 24 Jun 2016 04:15 PM |
Good overall, here are some notes:
Ace 23: Magazine is too long Handle is strangely proportioned
Bridge: Overall very good Maybe some more substance on the path
Spawn building: Nice overall No entrances or exits |
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FrazzIed
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| 24 Jun 2016 04:30 PM |
| Where did you get that water? I want to know how you made it. |
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| 24 Jun 2016 05:47 PM |
| I like your models. Very creative. |
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Mvgnifico
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| 25 Jun 2016 06:44 PM |
@Andrew I didn't recognize the ACE magazine was too long. Thanks! And the building isn't supposed to have any entrances or exits.
@Frazz It's smooth terrain water, I made it fir the map with the Part to Terrain plugin
@Ordinary Thank you!
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