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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
Joined: 01 Jan 2014
Total Posts: 154
07 Jun 2016 03:27 PM
Hey there,all!
If you'd like some review and constructive notes on your place,leave the URL here and I'll check it out!

In return,all I ask is you tell me how my profile/places are looking. I'll leave the review on this forum,or,if you tell me when you post the URL,I'll message you my thoughts.

Thanks and happy building,
Epic
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
Joined: 01 Jan 2014
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08 Jun 2016 04:54 PM
Bumpitty bump bump
Bumpitty bump bump
Over the hills I go
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Anth75 is not online. Anth75
Joined: 23 Jun 2014
Total Posts: 75
08 Jun 2016 06:13 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/417038487/The-Experiment-Alpha-W-I-P

Currently in development. Let me know what you think about it, leave me as much feedback as you can, thanks for your time. Much appreciated.
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
Joined: 01 Jan 2014
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08 Jun 2016 06:38 PM
Anth75-
I like your map and I like your idea. You're a good builder,and you know how to set up a good map.Useful skill,that. I'd like to see a bit more detail on the innards of your buildings. For example,you could put some stairs in the hotel,have only a few rooms open on each floor. Give it a creepy feel. So,just a bit more on the inside of your structures,a little country scenery(rocks,trees,stuff like that)and you're good to go.

Hope I helped,
Epic


P.S.-Add a few hostiles,for fun and challenge. Always spices things up to run into them going around corners.
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gun67 is not online. gun67
Joined: 17 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 517
08 Jun 2016 06:40 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/427078939/Roulette

Its till being built but just review the sign it will be resized in the final version also review the building no done yet its supposed to be western
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
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08 Jun 2016 07:01 PM
gun67-
You certainly seen like a Robloxian with a plan. I like the sign;just put the letters a tad closer together. The building looks pretty Western as well,but I'd put different shades of brown into the woodwork,make the building pop a bit. Overall,my opinion is that I can't wait until the Roulette house is open for business,and I'd love to see more. Save me a spot at the tables,partner.

Until I ride into town again,
Epic
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kindcdog09 is not online. kindcdog09
Joined: 18 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 2421
08 Jun 2016 07:25 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/397916904/Sword-Dash-Pre-Alpha

It's currently in development. It's not in Alpha quite yet, but you'll get the basic idea about what the game is about.

It does work, although there might be a couple of bugs, which would be the shop bug where you can't buy any weapons yet. You press 'M' to open up the shop.


#code print("I was fire but then I turned into ice")
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zekey101 is not online. zekey101
Joined: 08 Aug 2011
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08 Jun 2016 07:30 PM
http://www.roblox.com/games/420326453/End-of-the-Line-v11-4a

It's in alpha, near beta I think it has potential, but I want to know what you think! ^-^ thanks!



https://www.roblox.com/games/420326453/End-of-the-Line-v7-2a
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Bereghost_FanX is not online. Bereghost_FanX
Joined: 20 May 2016
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08 Jun 2016 08:00 PM
Hey, been working on this a LONG time! My first attempt ended after accidentally adding some corrupted trees witch ruined all the other models. Afterwards I fixed it and had to delete and re-add the models witch were ruined. It has not been finished yet and I need a scripter to add cat morphs, along with a day/night cycle, and a spawning system witch allows you to pick witch clan/group you start out with. This IS a roleplay map and I just want feedback on how it looks, thanks!

https://www.roblox.com/games/427277689/Warrior-Cats-The-two-clans
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
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08 Jun 2016 08:03 PM
kindcdog09-
You've got the beginnings of something great. There are quite a few swordfight games on the market,but I think you have the skill and talent,along with your group(Arise Studios,am I right?) to rise above them all,if you haven't already. I'd breathe a little more life(color,scenery) into the maps,but not much. Spice up the lobby a bit as well. Keep going with your plans,and I daresay I'll be seeing you on the front page one of these days.


Keep rising,
Epic
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hotrod56478 is not online. hotrod56478
Joined: 04 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 279
08 Jun 2016 08:11 PM
I think you have to be more critical with their work, you can't compliment everything they do. You need to tell them a specific rating 1-5 on their building quality along with scripting if they do that as well.
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
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08 Jun 2016 08:11 PM
zekey101,
Wow. Just wow. I've never seen anything like it,and never has it occurred to me to think about a 2D PvP arena. But it's clear the idea is in good hands. I didn't play for long,so I'm not sure if there's more than one map(if not,I'd advise adding a few) and keep adding weaponry. Basically,keep doing what you're doing well,and later add the things you used to only dream of.Good advice for anyone,but I'm giving it to you in hopes you'll claim your place up front.(My regards to Frozen Flame Studios as well,you guys are awesome.)

Keep the fire cold for me,
Epic

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zekey101 is not online. zekey101
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08 Jun 2016 08:18 PM
Oh my god, thank you so much.


https://www.roblox.com/games/420326453/End-of-the-Line-v7-2a
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
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08 Jun 2016 08:18 PM
Bereghost_FanX,
Personally,I'm not a big fan of the Warrior Cats thing in general,but since this is you,here's my opinion. I like where you're starting from. I'd expand the map,of course,and tone down the decals.(Might be just me,but I always love to see creative work shine rather than pics of it.) Once you get the scripting in you're good to go;I'd think of it as a pushoff point. From then on out,do greatness.

Keep on catting,
Epic

P.S.-Give it a bit of story as well,whether the books or your own. Everyone loves a good narrative,a reason to roam/roleplay.
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
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08 Jun 2016 08:21 PM
hotrod56478,
I'm not gonna hate on you,I think it's a good idea to be a bit more critical,and I'll take that into my thoughts when I review. I'm trying to nurture what I think are brilliant ideas from brilliant people,so I tell them what they're doing right and why. But I'll see what needs improving as well whenever I hop into the next game or place,deal?

Thanks for the advice,
Epic
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RecurringNightmare is not online. RecurringNightmare
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08 Jun 2016 08:26 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/272685054/BETA-Hands-of-Death


If you feel like buying access: https://www.roblox.com/games/408158225/PRE-ALPHA-Battlemage


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Bereghost_FanX is not online. Bereghost_FanX
Joined: 20 May 2016
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08 Jun 2016 08:31 PM
I'll be honest, I do like the idea of making my own Warrior roleplay, but before I made this map I had been working on a game called "Alive" Where one person would play as a ghost and try and kill four humans. I had made a lobby and three maps but I never got around to coding it and fell back on to the warriors roleplay witch I had been working on. So in you'r opinion, witch would draw in more players? I could activate the "Alive" lobby and you could check that out if you want. The codes that need to be implemented are the map choosing, map spawning, weapons, character models, menus and so forth. I am going to start learning how to code soon so I can start doing that myself but I'm not sure what to stick with... "Alive," or "Warriors."
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Wolverine1206 is online. Wolverine1206
Joined: 27 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 59
08 Jun 2016 08:31 PM
One Piece game,btw it's still in alpha so there will be glitches.

Game:https://www.roblox.com/games/342884345/One-Piece-Final-Destiny-Alpha-Stage
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icecreamboy1234665 is not online. icecreamboy1234665
Joined: 13 Sep 2015
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08 Jun 2016 08:40 PM
My place is Zombie Takeover http://www.roblox.com/games/429395136/Zombie-TakeOver

PLeaz check it out thx Bai
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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
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08 Jun 2016 08:45 PM
RecurringNightmare,
I like the plot idea,and it looks like a fully functioning,well made RPG. I'd throw a bit more detail into the buildings,maybe put a statue in the meadow at spawn,and give each class an identifying hat,like a hood for the rouge or a pointy wizard hat for the wizard. Keep up the work you put into the awesome title and graphic,and you'll be rising above the rest of the RPGs out there.(And expand the map some. It's cool,I think,that you put the forum up for people who want to make sections,but add one on periodically if nothing new comes in.)Oh,and my thanks to the people at Nightmare Studios.Keep it up!

Don't haunt my dreams,
Epic

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TheCoderOfLua is not online. TheCoderOfLua
Joined: 12 Apr 2016
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08 Jun 2016 08:45 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/401006340/Eels

Its 3d slither.io.

click the green box at the bottom before you start to make a different pattern.

still alpha.

Thanks :)
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hotrod56478 is not online. hotrod56478
Joined: 04 Oct 2009
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08 Jun 2016 08:56 PM
Yep, It is nice that you are doing reviews for these players. I wasn't being rude to you, I was just giving advice :P
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RecurringNightmare is not online. RecurringNightmare
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08 Jun 2016 09:00 PM
@Epic
xD Thanks. Battlemage will be much better - I hope you get the R$ to check it out sometime.


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EpicSheep3 is not online. EpicSheep3
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08 Jun 2016 09:13 PM
Wolverine1206-
Having no knowledge of One Piece,I'd say you're doing quite well. If I had the knowledge I'd go into a thing on how it compares,but I'll skip that. So,from what I was able to see,you're maintaining a style of building,and a good style it is. I didn't get a chance to try the various fruits,but it sounds like you're doing well with them.Your class selection system is fully functioning and rather nice as well. Keep on trucking,and I bet I'll see wonders.

Hope you stay in one piece,
Epic
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Wolverine1206 is online. Wolverine1206
Joined: 27 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 59
08 Jun 2016 09:18 PM
@Epic,thanks for the review,if you want to test the fruit I could give you a preview of them.The reason they're not released is because,the animations are not added yet.Otherwise,thanks for the review! :)
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