Guan_Yin
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| 02 Jun 2016 12:50 PM |
(This is based off an old RP from a few years back)
Around in the time of the Assyrian Empire, there use to be a gateway to a different realm. Assyrians guarded it 24/7 until a mysterious sorcerer took over the gate during the war with the Chaldeans. The sorcerer encrypted several symbols of power on the notches of the gate. It opened with a burst of fire.
A vampire walked out from the smoke, then a dragon, unicorn, werewolf, then tons of what people thought were mythical creatures flooded out in rage from being trapped forever. The sorcerer was trampled and death came upon him. The Assyrians were caught off guard and their empire fell.
Months later, yet another sorcerer trapped them back into the gate to never return. Sorcery soon drifted away after the closing of the gate.
Now, in modern times, a mysterious force reopened the gate releasing the nightmares again. The humans started to fight back as they knew they could not be taken over again. It was truly chaos.
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This RP takes place about two weeks after the gate opened. The creatures within the gate, dubbed "monsters" by some, are at war with most of humanity. In addition, the creatures have spread throughout most of the world.
Oh and the gate somewhere in modern day Iraq.
Playable Species: You can be either a mythical creature of any kind or a human from any country.
Rules: ROBLOX rules, as usual Standard roleplaying rules (ex. no godmodding) No starting out with major weapons. Hybrids are allowed except for half human hybrids. You can be a human on the mythical creatures side and vice versa. You may also be neutral
The character sheets- * means optional
Mythical Creature CS:
Name: Gender: *Age: Species: Appearance: *Weapon(s): Abilities: *Bio: *Other:
Human CS:
Name: Gender: *Age: Appearance: *Weapon(s): *Bio: *Other: |
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Guan_Yin
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Accedo
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| 03 Jun 2016 03:09 AM |
Name: I forgot.
Gender: N/A
*Age: Let me think about this.
Appearance: Is there a recent photograph I can look at?
*Weapon(s): Um... The one that does damage?
*Bio: Biochemistry, Biometrics, Biome, Haphazard, Biochemistry.
*Other: What. Why?
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Accedo
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| 03 Jun 2016 03:10 AM |
the auto correct is cancer.
Biohazard.
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| 03 Jun 2016 07:32 AM |
No effort, cliche.
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Guan_Yin
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| 07 Jun 2016 09:55 AM |
It's super short and you could have elaborated a whole lot more. Plus, there are so many cases follow this plot:
*ancient people close gate of evil monsters*
*dormant for many years*
*GATE IS MAGICALLY OPEN AGAIN* |
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Guan_Yin
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| 07 Jun 2016 09:59 AM |
| First of all, I deliberately made it simplistic so that newer RPers wouldn't find it difficult to read. For instance it's most definitely not lore heavy, like that mecha RP where you have to describe every last detail of your mecha. I didn't mean it to be cliche, because there are almost no current RPs like that, if any. |
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| 07 Jun 2016 10:07 AM |
| Cliche plots are not limited to RPs only. It's a plot that has been used in countless movies, books, and stories. I just think you should have added a spin on it instead of following the exact same pattern. |
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