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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
Joined: 18 Jun 2009
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06 Jun 2016 04:34 AM
Alright, I'm a clothing designer and I want to see what everyone thinks, criticize everything here, Thanks!


https://www.roblox.com/EC-MR-item?id=288689750

https://www.roblox.com/ECAF-UNIFORM-item?id=280814325

That one was for a war group, It was kind of simple for me and such, But to get to the better ones:

https://www.roblox.com/Plasmuss-Custom-item?id=317257900

https://www.roblox.com/Plasmuss-Custom-item?id=317396549

A design for a friend, A custom and it was done in eight hours, from scratch.

https://www.roblox.com/template-1-item?id=292970014

https://www.roblox.com/Template-1-derp-item?id=292970217

My first trench coat that I really wanted to over-shade, It turned out really good and it took 15-20 hours.


https://www.roblox.com/Damage-Inc-Top-standard-item?id=388640908

https://www.roblox.com/Damage-Inc-Bottom-Standard-item?id=388641270

This one, It took days on end of me working on it, And since i'm a hard worker I never stopped and I got it done, the green isn't really that shaded and it doesn't blend too much in because at first he didn't want a green, and instead wanted it to be transparent.


https://www.roblox.com/Acheo-Staff-Jumpsuit-item?id=410690157

https://www.roblox.com/Acheo-Staff-Jumpsuit-item?id=410683822

This is one of the newer things and simplistic clothing I have done aswell, I also outlined the whole thing by hand, it took hours.


https://www.roblox.com/Test-Test-Test-Test-item?id=383198559

And then this one is just a bonus thing I made a long time ago, to test if I could do a nice shade on a t-shirt

Anyways, Thank you for looking at this if you do, It means a lot for you guys to criticize my work, I just want to know what others think.
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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 01:19 AM
pls criticize me
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IVIasterofRoblox is not online. IVIasterofRoblox
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07 Jun 2016 03:17 AM
Poor use of "shadowing".
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Brick_Wizard is not online. Brick_Wizard
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07 Jun 2016 03:21 AM
wow ur good, pls do a youtube vid on this i will pay u


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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 03:36 AM
Shadowing? I've never heard that term, and um.. I mean I can teach people how to design yeah, but I don't know, youtube tutorials are very hard seeing as there are many things you can teach and many things you have to learn aswell, If you do on the other hand want one on one lessons, I can do something like that, Just PM me and we can work something like that out.
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Brick_Wizard is not online. Brick_Wizard
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07 Jun 2016 03:39 AM
Just do a video of u making a shirt and u dont need to talk over it or anything, ill pay ya if u make vids like that =D


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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 03:40 AM
Just to watch?
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Brick_Wizard is not online. Brick_Wizard
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07 Jun 2016 03:40 AM
yup!


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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 03:41 AM
I guess I could do something like that, but designing what?
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Brick_Wizard is not online. Brick_Wizard
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07 Jun 2016 03:47 AM
anything! a uniform for a group, etc


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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 03:48 AM
I mean, if you know something I should design or remake or such, I can video that.
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Brick_Wizard is not online. Brick_Wizard
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07 Jun 2016 03:50 AM
ok, do a medieval knights armor?


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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 03:59 AM
Do you have any examples for it? If you do I can re-make them and such.
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Brick_Wizard is not online. Brick_Wizard
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07 Jun 2016 04:03 AM
Maybe this? (Remove the *'s)

http*s://gya*zo.com/4aa1*72cc92e79e*e40b2210a04d0cc9b


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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 04:05 AM
It didn't come up, I don't know why.
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Lightmerish is online. Lightmerish
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07 Jun 2016 09:21 AM
I think the guy means you don't shade in very well, the designs are great just practice with the shading and you'll be a great designer.


Let me guide you to the light -LM
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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 09:25 AM
Oh, I mean I know other ways to shade, its just I try to do my own unique design, thus being either simplistic or over the top, and i'm also experimenting with some more things, just depends I guess.
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Kishero is not online. Kishero
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07 Jun 2016 09:42 AM
Poor shading and many angles are too sharp to work well with the poor Anisotropic filter that ROBLOX uses.
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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 09:58 AM
thank you for telling me, anyways, Which one is more preferred to you guys?

https(:)//gyazo(.)com/5ee25cef5369602df09ae9cb305fef70


Remove the "('s"
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cowsoncows is online. cowsoncows
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07 Jun 2016 10:28 AM
I prefer the first one, but both of those are the same shading technique...
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FarmerJonn is not online. FarmerJonn
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07 Jun 2016 11:02 AM
actually they arent, one is by using brush, one is by using pencil, and by you liking the first one, it means you like the brush more, instead of the pencil that I use almost all the time, thus making it so that technique I used for pencil is very outdated or you could say "futuristic" and used for stuff like trenchcoats and such.
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