zepigeon4
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| 28 May 2016 12:36 AM |
https://www.roblox.com/games/398719745/Olympus
Read the description first, and please leave any comments or suggestions you have on it in the replies to this thread, the comments section, or you can PM me.
I really appreciate feedback. Thanks!
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Necrosys
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| 28 May 2016 12:58 AM |
| Cool. Needs more detail but the potential is there. |
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| 28 May 2016 01:06 AM |
Needs more detail where?
The part before the red line is already extremely detailed
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| 28 May 2016 01:11 AM |
| That room is fine as is but yeah I meant about past the red line. My bad didn't read your desc. |
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Necrosys
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| 28 May 2016 01:24 AM |
| Its great so far you gotta see it through. |
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| 28 May 2016 02:30 AM |
b going to bed
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| 28 May 2016 02:41 AM |
play around with some of the visual effects like sun rays (those are nice gj) maybe a small blur or some color effects would be something worth playing around with.
i'd also suggest looking into smoke particle effects to give the place the ancient/underground feel.
there's a lot of empty spaces around the main room though. could use more rubble, more columns, a combo of both, idk. it just feels empty to me.
i like the theme and the way its going though, good job |
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| 28 May 2016 01:39 PM |
Ya I used sunrays
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