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FactionGuerrilla is not online. FactionGuerrilla
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05 May 2016 04:37 PM
(ISRP thread here: https://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=188603012 )

Adam. A force-wielder. Not just an ex-Jedi, but one who had run away from his training. One who had decided to venture out and become a mercenary. It seems like that was a grave mistake.

"Adam Hirasawyah, is it?" The voice paused for a moment, then realized his- or its, God knows whether or not it's just automatic or not- mistake in pronouncing your name.

"No, Hirasawa. I am sorry for that little... Inconvenience." Once again, a pause as you slowly open your eyes. You are standing over a little, strange-looking bed, which is white and round as if it was an escape pod. When you glance around you can see that you are inside a room with walls made of glass- all save the grey slab of metal to the right of you, which you presume to be the door. Above it is an oval-shaped display showing a bunch of 0s.

"Ahh, either way, welcome to your new little 'home'!" The voice announced as the lights above seemingly grew brighter.

NEW LOCATION: CHAMBER 00 [Portal]

"Now, give me a second as I begin to, er... Fiddle with these controls." The man told you, as the numbers on the display randomly began to change.

QUEST STARTED: Welcoming Committee
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05 May 2016 04:50 PM
(Aaaaand once again I manage to mess up the start. I'm going to post you and your partner's CSes for future reference:)

PROTAGONIST CS:
Name: Adam Hirasawa

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Species: Force-Sensitive

Appearance: Adam is a short man, standing at 5'5. He has, however, a powerful build and tanned skin to show for his experience fighting in the deserts of Tatooine. His eyes a dark brown color, and his short hair is almost completely black. There's a light bit of stubble starting to grow on his face, but it can't really be called a beard just yet. Dotting his face is a variety of scars from his mercenary-work on the bleak desert planet.

Adam was molded by the deserts of Tatooine and his attire reflects this. He dresses for protection against the environment, and the wretched people living in the environment. He wears a lightweight dark-grey shirt, and a thin black-painted metal chest piece over that. The chest piece doesn't provide much protection against anything besides glancing knife slashes and punches. Over that is a thin light brown duster coat that's been torn in a few places. The coat is typically worn with the buttons undone. On his hands are a pair of black gloves that go up to the middle of the forearm; his coat's sleeves are tucked into these gloves. The gloves have brass knuckles built into them, knuckles that look faintly stained with blood, knuckles that would likely be frowned upon by the Jedi Order.

Covering his legs are a pair of brown cargo pants with metal knee-pads and a brown leather belt to keep them held up, and to hold his lightsaber and blaster. The bottoms of these pants are tucked into Adam's black combat boots. Around his neck is a plain brown desert scarf that's pulled up over his mouth in the event of a sandstorm. Worn on his head is a pair of goggles framed in black leather. These are used in the same situation as his scarf, and are pulled down over his eyes to protect them during sandstorms. Though these clothes were meant for the desert, they may remain on his person for his stay in this new Universe.

Personality: TBR

Weapon(s): A blue, heavily modified lightsaber. The hilt of it has been wrapped in with dark brown wood, hiding the shine of ostentatious metal and reflecting Adam's departure from the Jedi. The blade of the lightsaber, when activated, appears unstable. He also has a modified blaster pistol, equipped with a short scope and a grappling hook, and a pair of brass knuckles built into his gloves, used primarily as backup weapons.

Power(s): Limited use of the Light and Dark Sides of the Force

Backstory/Biography: "You know, Adam, nobody's going to be on your side if you do this. You'll die out there."
"It'll be a bit better than being sent to die somewhere else."

What could make a boy abandon safety and order for danger and lawlessness? Perhaps just curiosity about the world. Or, perhaps, it's at the urging of the chaos within every man's own heart. Adam was taken from his family at birth and raised in the Jedi Temple. Then, when he was old enough to hold a weapon, he began his training. Yet, there was something in him that yearned to break away from the Jedis. The Dark Side pulled at the strings of his fragile heart, but he did not bend a knee to it, nor did he bow to the Light. Where the Light and Dark meet is Grey, and it wasn't until Adam turned seventeen that he had a chance to leave the Jedi Temple.

He remembers how he escaped. There was a ship departing Coruscant to Tatooine. It was the only ship that was leaving. Tatooine is no place for a child, but Adam was determined to break away from the Jedi Order, from the Order that took him from a family he never knew. Under the black of night, he snuck into the ship's cargo hold. When time passed at its own pace, Adam stumbled out into the desert. He looked back at the cargo hold and, seeing a set of clothes, took and donned them. Also lying in the cargo hold was a blaster, one that Adam quickly took with him as well. He was not fully trained in the use of the lightsaber, and thus wanted a bit of extra protection.

He roamed the deserts of Tatooine for a year, stopping at small villages occasionally and offering mercenary services. People were quick to want to hire him when they saw the blaster and lightsaber at his hip. In his nomadic lifestyle, he soon found himself under the tutoring of an old, decrepit man with a young and brilliant mind. This man was an inventor, and under his tutelage, Adam too became savvy with technology. He experimented and tinkered with the old man, and soon managed to modify his lightsaber. The blade of his saber became more unstable, and more powerful as a result. He also thought, for a time, about modifying the lightsaber's crystal to change it to a color other than blue. He decided against this when he couldn't think of a color he liked. Also under this inventor, he threw out those grey robes and donned something Jedi rarely wore. He fashioned for himself a lightweight set of armor with what may be considered "brutal" weaponry built into them in the form of metal knuckles.

While still living under the watchful and knowledgeable eye of the old inventor, Adam found himself once again wrenched away from his home. And, he had no idea of where he was or how he'd ever return to the Universe he left behind.

Residing Universe: Star Wars (Old Republic time-period)

PARTNER CS:
Name: Haruhi Suzumiya

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Species: God-like Human

Appearance: http://schneeblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/Suzumiya-Haruhi-being-cute-the-melancholy-of-haruhi-suzumiya-11572844-1024-768.jpg
https://rehikage.files.wordpress.com/2009/06/mazui_suzumiya_haruhi_no_yuuutsu_2009_-_13_cc37169d00541302-19-55.jpg

Personality: Refer to Wiki page at the bottom. I'd like to add, however, that if my character becomes romantically involved with her, maybe she could be more loving and tender towards my character, while keeping her brash demeanor when interacting to others.

Weapon(s): Currently unarmed.

Power(s): Incredible athleticism and strength. She also has the ability to warp and change parts of reality, but she only ever does this on accident since she's unaware of her power. Typically, this power comes to life due to her internal wishes and wants.

Backstory/Biography: Wiki page, of course. Thank God for Wikis.

Residing Universe: The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya

Other: http://haruhi.wikia.com/wiki/Haruhi_Suzumiya
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05 May 2016 08:37 PM
I gently touch the grey door, looking up at the numbers changing above it. I can feel. I don't think this is a dream. I look around the brightening room, trying to find a body for the disembodied voice. Futile. I turn my eyes down to my person to see if I have all my clothing and items on me, then bring my attention back to the grey door that keeps me confined.

I don't know where I am. I know I'll get back to where I was though. As much as a hellhole Tatooine is, it's the only place I know now. I don't think the Jedi Order brought me here, this isn't like them. I have to leave though. It doesn't matter who or what put me in this place, I'm not staying.

"Let me out of here," I demand in a level tone
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05 May 2016 08:44 PM
"Hey, I said, 'GIVE ME A SECOND.'" The voice irritatedly responded. You could hear the exasperation in his voice as the numbers continued to flash.
In the meantime, you checked yourself. You had your clothes on- at least he had the decency NOT to strip you naked while you were out. Your gear, on the other hand, was a different story. You assume he confiscated them, and they probably are hidden away from you somewhere in the perimeter.

Finally, the door beeped as the numbers reverted to zeros, and the doors slid open. Automatic.
"There. You happy now? Your stuff is outside. Make a left turn out in the hall, and it's the second door on the right." The man told you. He seemed to be trying to hide his irritation but was miserably failing.

NEW OBJECTIVE: Retrieve your equipment
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05 May 2016 08:47 PM
A left turn out in the hall and the second door on the right is probably the roadmap to me being tricked and killed. But I don't have any other real option. I don't know this place, I don't know where else I could go. I'll just have to trust this voice's directions. If it's a trap though, I have the knuckles in my gloves and the Force at my side.

Not that I have any level of mastery with the Force though. I should work on that when I'm out of here, in case I find myself in another situation without my real weapons. I wonder what I could do to really hone my Force powers though. I'll figure it out.

I pull my hand away as the door slides open. For a moment, I think about informing the voice that I'll kill his bearer soon. I'm not in much of a position to make threats right now though. I step out of the room and then, reluctantly, take a left turn in the hall and head to the second door on my right.
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05 May 2016 08:59 PM
(Heeey, er, did you check the link to your prtner's appearance? I think it may have been deleted, unless it's just my phone.)
As you enter, a loud "POP" goes off... And then confetti flies all over the place. The man laughed uncontrollably for a few moments, then regained composure.
"Oh, hey, you actually listened to me! Great job, kiddo. You can have you crud back now." The voice told you, seemingly much more lighthearted. To the left of you, a panel on the melancholy white wall opens up and unfolds to reveal your gear inside. But that was not the only thing that caught your eye...

In front of you, what appeared to be a bacta tank lay flat on the wall. Inside it was a young girl who was seemingly unconscious. She had pale skin tone and long brown hair, which floated about down to her waist. She still wore clothes on, and it seemed as if she had simply had the mask slapped onto her face, and dunked in the tank to be left there. Strange.
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05 May 2016 09:08 PM
(The links are working for me. I provided two links of her appearance, so you might've copied them both as one link.)

A girl in a tank? That doesn't seem good at all. I grab my equipment and attach it all to my belt, before bringing my eyes back to the girl in the tank. I shouldn't leave her behind here. She may be being used for strange and inhumane experiments. I should set her free, but I have no idea if that tank is keeping her alive.

"Is the tank keeping the girl alive?" I ask, keeping my tone subdued so as not to hint at my intentions to free her.
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05 May 2016 09:14 PM
(Oh, I'm an idiot. RIP me.)
The voice spoke once more, and this time you could imagine the face behind thr voice smirking as he spoke.
"More or less." He replied.
"If you dare, go ahead and free her if you wish."
The choice was obvious- free her and risk her dying, OR leave her be but leave her fate to the man. Looks like you'd have to choose.

NEW OBJECTIVE: Decide whether to free the girl
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05 May 2016 09:19 PM
(lol. Just as a question, will you have Haruhi keep her long hair throughout, or will she cut it later to fit her more common appearance? Or would you prefer not to disclose that information?)

I imagine she'll die here if I leave her behind. That or worse, if there truly is anything worse than the disappearance of life. I know nothing of this man, except that he kidnapped me. There's never a good or selfless reason for that. He's trying to test me. I know he is. He's trying to play a game with me, trying to make me struggle over this decision. I'm not playing.

Decisively, without any more forethought, I raise my left hand to the tank and focus, trying to tap into my Force abilities to telekinetically pull at the glass that makes up the tank: an attempt to shatter the glass without any of the shards flying into the tank's occupant.
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05 May 2016 09:31 PM
(I'd imagine she keeps her long hairstyle so long as she isn't asked about it. If your protagonist asks and gives a reason to cut it I think she would, similarly to her anime.)
The glass began to bend originally, but after a few moments it broke into pieces without warning. The healing solution flooded the floor as she was broken free from the tank, but simply hung there due to her mask.
"Great. Now look what you have done." The voice slash narrator irritatedly said, but something nagged at you about how he said that. Like he is one step ahead of you...

OBJECTIVE COMPLETE: Girl has been broken free
NEW OBJECTIVE: Examine the girl's condition
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05 May 2016 09:35 PM
At least I'm getting a little bit better at manipulating the Force. I walk to the broken tank, not being mindful of crushing any glass beneath my boots. Looking at the hanging girl, I pull my lightsaber off my belt and activate the unstable blade. I wrap my left, free arm around the girl's waist to catch her from falling as I cut the line that connected the mask to the tank.
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05 May 2016 09:41 PM
The cord was sliced in half like a knife through butter, and the girl collapsed on top of you. You could still feel a pulse, though, as you held her. It seemed abnormally weak, but it was there.
"Heh, so you actually did it, huh? Well, guess what? I poisoned her." The voice told you, waiting for your reaction. The doors automatically shut due to being open for so long.... Or did they?
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05 May 2016 09:45 PM
Heart's still beating. Likely weak because it's just recovering from being taken out of that tank. If she'd really been poisoned, she'd be paler and deader. This man is trying to play that game with me. I'm still not playing. There's no real reason for her to be poisoned, then kept alive in a tank.

I put my lightsaber away and roll the girl off of me, onto her back. Carefully, I stand up and pick the girl up with me, before carrying her to the door and seeing if it'll open for me.
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05 May 2016 09:49 PM
The door opened, alright. Looks like the voice had given up the charade.
"Fine," he pouted.
"But you still have to find a way to get out..." He paused for a moment, then sighed in frustration.
"You know what? Forget it. Exit's to your left now, past your stupid little bedroom. End of the hallway, with sliding doors. Just be warned that the world outside..." He clucked his tongue.
"Not what you'll expect." The voice then stopped talking altogether. The building became eerily silent as the doors remained open, waiting for you and the girl.
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05 May 2016 09:53 PM
He's finally given up, it looks like. I'm sure he has plenty of other human-toys to play with. I can't save them all. He's probably selectively locked doors he doesn't want me going into. I look down at the girl in my arms, then turn my eyes ahead as I start heading towards this building's exit.
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05 May 2016 09:58 PM
As you approach the door, it suddenly slides open, and you are temporarily blinded by a ray of light. When you can finally see you notice that the ground is made out of dust and whatnot. A fence made of barbed wire surrounded the white building you had just exited.
[Well, what a welcoming committee,] a part of you thinks.
[At least the voice had confetti.]
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05 May 2016 10:04 PM
Dust is mildly better than sand. Looks like this girl is still recovering. I can carry her for a bit longer. Blinking my eyes at the bright light, I become certain that I'm not on Tatooine. I'll find my way back eventually. I walk away from the building and through the fence's exit, before peering out into the distance for any kind of town or city.
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06 May 2016 06:56 AM
In the distance you could see something burning, something that seemed like a spacecraft but not one you could recognize. Otherwise there was no way out, although there WAS a wide gray 'path' leading towards the wreckage. And to the left of you, you noticed some strange-looking machinery.
[That, my friend, is a car.] The voice told you, and something told you that one, he shouldn't be in your head, but two, the newer, more juvenile-sounding, voice was trying to help you in some way.
[Somewhat like your average Land Speeder.]
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06 May 2016 12:24 PM
Wonder if it still works. It'd be better for me to drive that thing than to have to walk all the way down that path, carrying this girl no less. I walk to the car and set the girl down in the passenger's seat, before heading to the driver's side and trying to figure out if the car functions.
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06 May 2016 03:58 PM
You looked around in the black interior, but nothing happened.
[Keys,] The voice noted to you.
[Look up.] He said, directing you upwards to where the glint of steel caught your eye.
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06 May 2016 05:15 PM
Must've been implanted with an annoying voice when I was asleep. I'll get it out eventually when I can take a good look at myself. I turn my right palm face up and attempt to use the Force to pull the keys down into my hand. Assuming my success, I look for where to slot the keys in and do so.
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06 May 2016 05:22 PM
The keys were yanked down into your hand as the girl next to you stirred and groaned. Looks like she was starting to come to, and the first voice had not drugged her- at least, from what you can determine.
As for the slot? You couldn't find that, either, until the voice directed you.
[Underneath the wheel. Oh, and don't ask why I'm helping you- just don't.] He said, but you were a bit too busy noticing that the sky was a dark purple, something that is probably saying something, no?
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06 May 2016 05:26 PM
I hope that girl doesn't think I'm kidnapping her. I'm not. Technically speaking. I turn my attention to the sky briefly. Dark purple. I guess I know I'm not on Tatooine. Maybe the dark purple just means it's getting late. After slotting in and turning the key, I try to figure out how to operate the vehicle so I can get it moving down the grey path.
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06 May 2016 05:41 PM
The girl stirred again in her seat, her brown hair flowing on and around the passenger seat. She murmured something incoherent under her breath before falling silent again.
And as for the car? It roared to life, sounding really loud even on the inside. To the right of you a display lit up, which showed the word 'DODGE' with some red logo or something.
[Right pedal is to go, left is to stop, and the wheel is to steer. Just try not to crash off the gray road, PLEEASE.] The voice explained to you in a quick crash course.
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06 May 2016 05:45 PM
How intuitive. Maybe, before I start heading down that road, I should try to wake up this girl. It might not be good to have her suddenly wake up in a panic, attack me, and then crash this car.

I lean over and gently brush the girl's hair aside before starting to slowly shake her.
"Hey, are you awake?"
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