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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 12:24 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/414804275/Metro

WIP but I got a lot done, please I need some hard criticisms.


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Fungamerjack1 is not online. Fungamerjack1
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15 May 2016 01:21 PM
Cool! but, what is it?
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 01:24 PM
It will be train map, for this game https://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=189163484


This map is basically the train station


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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 02:00 PM
zzzzzz


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Boxxeh is online. Boxxeh
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15 May 2016 02:01 PM
Needs a little something in the open spaces. Like perhaps a bench or a potted plant.
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 02:02 PM
Will do thanks, please ill take any suggestion i can get


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TeenLifeBruh is not online. TeenLifeBruh
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15 May 2016 03:04 PM
Pretty detailed, refering to what one person said, in the spaces maybe you could ask like a hobo asking for money, or benches, etc.
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 03:11 PM
ty more advice pls


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Zech9005 is not online. Zech9005
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15 May 2016 03:16 PM
You did good detailing for the ceiling, as well as the floor. However the walls a still bland. Try either adding things to the walls or doing a unique design for them.
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 03:28 PM
i'm not trying to be super detailed because we intend on using it for games with huge huge servers, so thank you for the advice but i dont think ill take that specifically.


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PressurizedSphere is not online. PressurizedSphere
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15 May 2016 03:31 PM
to open area and the big black wall are too bland


r+://410248986r+://410249238r+://410249397
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 09:09 PM
I used their advice I need more thank you


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BossLaw is not online. BossLaw
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15 May 2016 09:11 PM
looks great


www.youtube.com/c/BossLawRBLX
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 10:07 PM
zzz


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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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15 May 2016 10:26 PM
zzzzzz


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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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15 May 2016 11:29 PM
bevel the tiles with unions, ad some slight variation in color for the tiles, plant pots are floating slightly, add more accents around pillars and walls, more benches, not enough grunge and props, no ceiling lights, needs better lighting design.

even with my criticisms great build
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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16 May 2016 08:33 AM
Thanks will do when I get home. Taking more criticism.
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DjKnicks is not online. DjKnicks
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16 May 2016 11:17 PM
zzzzzzzzzez


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