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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
Joined: 31 Aug 2013
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15 May 2016 01:57 PM
post your game link bellow and I will play them and then give you some advice

you should check out my game to https://web.roblox.com/games/407188433/Dont-Die#!/about
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Zooptia is not online. Zooptia
Joined: 23 Apr 2016
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15 May 2016 02:01 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/410578436/The-Madness-Murder-BETA
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daireb is not online. daireb
Joined: 16 Nov 2012
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15 May 2016 02:37 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/180398746/ROBLOX-Parkour
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 02:41 PM
zooptia I honestly don't know what to say.
it looks amazing and its probably perfect(sorta)
you just need to advertise it
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violetbrute4 is not online. violetbrute4
Joined: 21 Dec 2012
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15 May 2016 02:49 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/412722029/2D#!/about I started working on it a few days ago, It's not even being close to being done, i just wanna know what you think.
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itachi0111 is not online. itachi0111
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15 May 2016 02:56 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/207279563/Summer-Resort Looking for some criticism in lighting/mood and overall placement of objects.
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 02:57 PM
daireb looks amazing and I love the animations
just make the music more lively(maybe Megalovania?)
make it compatible with the arrow keys
and the gun you added keeps making me look down
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daireb is not online. daireb
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15 May 2016 03:00 PM
XD thr gun isn't supposed to be there, guess that's what I get for using team edit
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 03:08 PM
violetbrute4 it looks really good just needs some colour and decoration I really like how you can still move the camera up and down and zoom in and out(Im pretty sure not many 2d games do that) also on level one:

A. I spawned in a different place after I died the first time

B. When on the moving pads to progress the lava they started spinning and moving plus its to small making the level to hard

other wise looks great so far keep up the good work
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violetbrute4 is not online. violetbrute4
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15 May 2016 03:17 PM
Alright, thanks I also fixed the spawning glitch, thanks for telling me about that as well.
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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
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15 May 2016 03:18 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/413605408/Cluster-Truck-DEMO
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Mada754 is not online. Mada754
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15 May 2016 03:19 PM
https://www.roblox.com/games/413548186/wip-game

It's a remastered game, and pretty much everything is temporary.
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 03:21 PM
itachi0111 so I am assuming its a showcase and I can already see your building skills are wonderful.
the lighting is really well planned since looking around its giving a nice realistic look.

Thinking of the mood I guess it looks quite horror since the creepy basement place and the dark lighting(and I suppose the only source of natural light coming from the entrance). If you really want there to be a mood then add music

the placement of objects is really good since you just have these ominous stacks of boxes just laying there and the few building tools. you just need to add some colour to the objects and add texture.

but from I can already see you are a great builder and can make some good looking things. so whatever your going to make from this I am sure its going to be great

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Mada754 is not online. Mada754
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15 May 2016 03:29 PM
By the way, you need 2 people to play, but I'll change that for now.
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itachi0111 is not online. itachi0111
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15 May 2016 03:30 PM
Thanks coolrob. I'll be looking into this new color correction thing to make the objects appear different and it's actually not a showcase. It'll be part of a base ;).
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 03:34 PM
icewinglord71 so first of all copying games isn't to much of a bad idea since some people might just want to play actual games on a free site since its...well free. Secondly I had quite a bit of lag when first playing it not sure if its my computer or your game but I had lag.

now you should probably add some kind of menu at the beginning instead of just spawning and wait for the map to load before you can even move your camera(also why did I spawn in my climbing animation?).

you should also make it so the trucks only move when you move(maybe use some player torso CFrame check?)

and finally why did I see a group of 5 trucks move in the exact same direction while inside of each other?

but so far it looks quite good and it will probably be playable once the trucks move in different directions and not ALL run into a wall
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 03:37 PM
Mada754 I am not paying to check it for you and what is it even supposed to be there is nothing to even say what the game is
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Mada754 is not online. Mada754
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15 May 2016 03:43 PM
It's in early development.

And there is quite a bit to it.
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Mada754 is not online. Mada754
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15 May 2016 03:45 PM
I still need a name
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 03:46 PM
Mada754 can you at least lower the price then.
plus WHAT IS IT?!
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icewinglord71 is not online. icewinglord71
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15 May 2016 03:49 PM
thx and ik it's being worked on not really done with that also it's the trucks that lag we are trying to reduce that in studio the trucks are in their own places but when u play it the trucks lag and go every where also we already made a menu just havent updated the DEMO we only added it the the real game that's being worked on release date : june 20
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Mada754 is not online. Mada754
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15 May 2016 03:51 PM
oops sorry
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 03:52 PM
you know id appreciate it if some of you tried my game to.
I really need the feed back.
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coolrob1928 is not online. coolrob1928
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15 May 2016 03:59 PM
Mada754 so it actually looks really good so far just make the lobby further away
from the arena since that doesn't really good and remove the lava on the outside of the arena since something about it just isn't right.

but overall it looks really good(especially the GUIs) you should just add more things to do when fighting since just a sword is kind of boring and that annoying beeping when there is a count down is just SO annoying.

but if there were other people I would defiantly play it for a while.
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golangoal is not online. golangoal
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15 May 2016 04:20 PM
http://www.roblox.com/games/343346464/Little-Fighter

Ignore the menus I know they look very bad :P
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