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| 08 May 2016 11:02 AM |
"We need more men! DAMN IT" said PoliticalDefiance. Political was walking near WintrrBullets then the JC HR Night and Visual came. "You Bounty Hunters picked the wrong day to fight the Cobra's we slither in the grass and will bite your azz" said Night. Pulling his gun forward. It started out as a 12v12. It Waa a tough battle. At the beginning "Damn the Ravens! They got the flag to 1000!" "I need more Cobra's! Now!" Said Visual. "Sir! I know what to do! Let's kick some of them and claim they were invisible!" Said the soldier. "That's a good idea!" :BAN alleiu
This made the bounties mad. "WHY DID YOU BAN HIM" WinterBullets said. "I seen him go invisible in front of me and sword glitch." Said Visual. JC has captured the terminal. "Damn those Cora's" Political said glocking his gun and aiming it towards Visual. "Libree's is here, yay for all!" Said Winter. Raven's recapture the terminal. "JC THIS CANNOT HAPPEN WE ARE OUTNUMBERING THEM WHAT THE HELL!"
"I guess RA isn't that bad since we own the term now outnumbered" said GetTheJobDone. "To hell with them! I'm leaving" said a JC soldier. "DONT YOU FREAKING LEAVE GUYS DONT YOU DARE" said Night. "Damn you Night!" A soldier said and left. 5 soldiers left. It became unofficial for some reason. "DEMOTION FOR ALL OF YOU! WE CAN'T BE EMBARASSRD BY RA THEY ARE SUPPOSE TO BE BAD NOT THIS GOOD, WE ARE JC WE BEAT VAK! HEY HEY HEY HEY DON'T YOU DIE ON ME MAN NO NO VISUAL!" Visual died and respawned. Onur and 5 more RA comes in. "Did I miss the party guys" said Onur. Onur was a GF god he, and WinterBullets and Libree's and Zero embarrassed JC.
"THE DAMN FLAG IS AT 1300 FREAKING RA! IF WE LOSE EVERYONE GETS!" Said Night. "WHY WHY WHY! HOW THE HELL IS THERE SO MANY OF RA ITS LIKE 40 THAT CAME!" Said Visual. "THE TERM IS AT 1400 THIS IS OUR LAST CHANCE JC PUSH!" Said Visual. "Raven Allegiance push through! GOGOGOGOGOGO THIS IS FOR THE ALLEGIANCE THAT WILL NEVER BE BROKEN!" Said WinteR Bullets. *BOOM* "TO HELL WITH JC THEY SHO MY HELI DOWN"
"100 MORE SECONDS COBRAS DONT FAIL ME OR DEMOTION."
"Raiders Won"
"ALL OF JC WILL BE DEMOTED 5 RANKS HOW DID THIS HAPPEN!" |
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| 08 May 2016 11:34 AM |
| Let me write this next time jk I'll prolly get banned LOL |
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| 08 May 2016 11:37 AM |
| Did you guys win...BC you always raid in week days when I can't F'ING get on my PC on the weekend |
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| 08 May 2016 11:46 AM |
| Good o_o how's the database you freak :3 |
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| 08 May 2016 11:52 AM |
who are you kids
what do you even do
also do you even know JC HR names cause you cant spell |
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| 08 May 2016 11:54 AM |
We defeated them
No need to rage
We are bounty hunters
Top notch
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zdude3000
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| 08 May 2016 11:57 AM |
not mad
just never heard of you
do you even dort fang
come on scamp |
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| 08 May 2016 11:58 AM |
im more mad about the poor writing than anything.
climax was ehhhh
no real character development
also the dialogue is formatted weirdly
usually in conversations/dialogue
the phrases get their own lines |
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| 08 May 2016 12:01 PM |
| Wrote it through phone sir |
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| 08 May 2016 12:01 PM |
..............what the hell LOL
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| 08 May 2016 12:12 PM |
| I remember the 2007 car at the fort blew up |
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