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marc12267 is not online. marc12267
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30 Apr 2016 11:57 AM
Through Her Eyes: Three Stooges Edition

AN: This is an old, unfinished story of mine. It was supposed to be a black comedy parody of a now-dead fanfic series based on ATF:THE (After the Flash: Through Her Eyes). It was to be about the main trio acting as if they came from The Three Stooges and getting kidnapped. Ever since, I had improved my writing, as clearly evident in Revenge Against Minty, but heck, even this is better than a few of my previous stories, such as Bioshock 3 (FanFic). Alright, so I'll tell you how I rediscovered this story.

While using the silver laptop, I suddenly had the incentive to search "stooge". So then I did, and saw that one txt file named "stooge". It was made around mid-April 2015, when I watched Three Stooges shorts. Also, I had seen royale376782 (now InsanityRoyale)'s Through Her Eyes series. For a fanfic of a meh RP game series ruined by FRPers, it's actually a bit decent. I even thought about a comedy AU where Lori is like Moe, Axe, Larry, and James, Curly.

I even wrote a fanfic of that fanfic series, but never got around finishing it because I was bored. If I wrote it today, it would be much better than this cringe-inducing mess. Anyhow, please sit back and cringe at this monstrosity. You're welcome.

P.S: "Just Rediscovered This is not the title of the story, but the one below is the real one. Also, "stooge.txt" or "stooge" is the working title. And to quote the full original AN: "Please note that this fanfic is a departure from the main story's grim tone, instead pursuing for a dark slapstick comedy style."

It is 2092. Pearl City, Hawaii was ravaged after two nuclear weapons hit it. The place is very much like a desolate wasteland, yet some people still are in it. Mutants have been living in it too. And worse of all--wait a second, what are those three knuckleheads doing there?! Anyways, they were running around in a stupid manner.

"C'mon, keep scrammin', you idiots!" Lori would yell at Axe and James Crowley. The jet-black-haired woman was aggressive and short-tempered. Of course, she'll be prone to whacking bandits in her way. The two were beginning to slow down, sweat slowly coming down from the top of them.

"But we're soitenly gettin' tired!" James said in his hig-pitched voice. The man was the goofy and dim-witted member of the trio. While running, he tripped and landed forward. Lori stopped and looked at him angrily. Axe reduced his pacing to a walk.

"Didn't I tell you to stop bein' lazy?" Lori asked in a mad tone.

"Hmmmmm! You did!"

"Then get up, James."

"Soitenly." James uttered before struggling to get up. Just when he was up to his feet again, the two heard Axe's voice not far away.

"Hey Lori!" Axe said, pointing to an abandoned mall. Axe was perhaps the calmest member of the trio.

"Ooh! Me first!" The dim-witted member said before rushing into the mall with Lori and Axe following suit. Inside the mall was deserted. The glass ceiling of the structure was shattered. Lori looked at the clothing store and said, "I'd better see what that treasures." before going inside.

Inside the store were a few knocked down mannequins, scattered clothes and static playing.

"Ugh! What's that idiotic noise doin' in here?!" Lori yelled before Axe went up to her. He said to her, "Please calm dow-"

"Scram." Lori interrupted before slapping the guy. She went to the shoes sections and found a pair of white ballet boots. She sat down, took off her shoes and put on the boots.

"Ahh, cool. Let me test 'em out." The girl said before struggling to get up. Once she finally got up, she tried to take her first step in that pair before outright falling flat onto the floor forward.

"Dawn! Can somebody get me a cane?! And I don't look like a grandma for Pete's sake!" Lori cried out.

A few minutes later, Lori is walking with difficulty with Axe and James around the mall with her cane for attempts to stop falling over.

"Umm," said Axe, "I'm pretty sure we're here to scavenge for food and supplies, not high heel boots, Lori."

"And I'll be staring with you...my pretty." The masked man said.

Lori angrily responded with, "You call me my pretty? Why, I haven't heard that phrase for years, you know bumb, I once was a tramp like you..."

"Uh-huh..."

"Ah, but it wasn't always thus, I can look back to the days of yourn when I was a very happy little girl. Then one day, that rat, who was my father, destroyed forever the happiness I ever known: My mother when I was little. She used to rap songs from Tupac before putting me to bed. I'll never forget that day. I was forced to murder countless numbers of innocent people when my father forced me into the USCPF. When I came to the camp with the girl I saw before dead, I found a note lying on the floor."

"What did it say?"

"It was one of those cold blooded notes... 'I'm sorry. I can't handle it anymore. Yesterday, my boyfriend was killed, and today I forced myself to mace myself good... It was all thanks to Niagara Foster...' And then I came face to face with the rat that ruined my life. Niagara Foster!" Lori said in a low, mad monotone voice. The man gulped.

"Niagara Foster, Niagara Foster, Niagara Foster. Slowly I turned... Step by step." Lori continued as she walked up to the masked man. "Inch by inch..." The brunette continued further with a now furious look. "I walked up to him. I smashed him, I hit him, I bonked him, I bopped him, I socked him and I mashed his face... AND I KNOCKED HIM DOWN!" Lori yelled, while she smacks the man first in the cheek, then on his forehead, then hits him hard in the stomach and then smacks the masked man once again hard on his forehead and then mischievously rips his shirt and the smacks him hard in the face before finally knocking the man to the ground. "Now let's get goin'!" She said to Axe and James before running out of the ruined one-story house. The two followed suit before the masked man got up.

"Hey! Come back, you lovebirds!" The man yelled at the escaping trio.

It's been 2 months since Lori had been killed. Oh, how unlucky she was. Her skin had been peeling off, but however, something strange ocurred. Her left hand skin and right eye skin were torn off, revealing exposures of her endoskeleton. She wasn't a real girl. She was an android the whole time. Her eyes snapped open and she slowly got up on her white ballet boots with newly-snapped off heels.

"I am back." Lori, or we'll call her LOR-3, before ending up falling forward. "Darn it! Give me a break already!" The robot said.

THE END

"Oh my god, they killed Lori!" "YOU BASTARDS!"
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30 Apr 2016 11:58 AM
Correction: Change "below" to "above the AN".

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30 Apr 2016 12:05 PM
AAAH Marc, your obsession with skates and androids expand even to the apocalypse! Whyyyyyy?

"It'll take an act of God to get through that... Or a lotta androids galore!"
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30 Apr 2016 12:09 PM
RIP. I don't do skating characters much anymore, but my android obsession worsened. Also, there was a scrapped ending where Lori dies, but it's gone now.

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30 Apr 2016 12:10 PM
I'm pretty sure Zoey, Rei and Allison all can testify to your android obsession...

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30 Apr 2016 12:57 PM
""C'mon, keep scrammin', you idiots!" Lori would yell"
"Lori would yell"

"would"


you disappoint me
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30 Apr 2016 12:58 PM
*😐 Intensifies*

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30 Apr 2016 12:59 PM
😐😑😠
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30 Apr 2016 12:59 PM
I even didn't get the hang of story grammar back then.

*shudder*

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30 Apr 2016 01:01 PM
"I even didn't"
"Even didn't"
Wat.

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30 Apr 2016 01:02 PM
RIP grammar
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k


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30 Apr 2016 01:08 PM
.._. .._ _._. _._ .

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30 Apr 2016 01:09 PM
😐😕😫😡😂😀😄😑🙁💩
"It'll take an act of God to get through that... Or a lotta androids galore!"
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30 Apr 2016 01:12 PM
It's morse code.

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30 Apr 2016 01:13 PM
gg
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30 Apr 2016 01:14 PM
no re

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30 Apr 2016 02:10 PM
beep beep

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01 May 2016 10:17 AM
also lets stop grammar n4z1-ing op and focus back to the unfinished story already

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01 May 2016 10:19 AM
inhale my dong enragement child

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Also, let's*
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28 Jun 2017 12:40 PM
LOL i just found this like a year after it was posted! this is hilarious and i'm glad i got the chance to read it :) sorry i didn't finish the fanfic i just got tired and unmotivated, but this really made my day! thank you~


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