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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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10 Apr 2016 06:57 PM
Any other ideas?
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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11 Apr 2016 09:58 AM
Let's see what people say today.
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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11 Apr 2016 03:31 PM
Just trying to keep this poem alive.
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OdardAkari is not online. OdardAkari
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11 Apr 2016 08:00 PM
Come along my brother
We chase our cars like we chase our shadows
Running from ourselves like a moth flies from a flame
Run and run we go
No end in sight
We chase our flickering shadows
Forget our sins tonight
Why do we struggle when we prevail?
We run from success and hell
But oh my brother,
When will our shadows see?

Chasing Shadows, by OdardAkari


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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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11 Apr 2016 08:52 PM
That's not bad
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LyricLynx is not online. LyricLynx
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11 Apr 2016 09:04 PM
I like that, Odard or whatever you name is. Just the ending should be better.



-- The Meager Human Fish --
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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11 Apr 2016 09:09 PM
What is the meaning of that poem he wrote anyways?
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Jabbathepug is not online. Jabbathepug
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11 Apr 2016 09:11 PM
Yay Black!
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Jabbathepug is not online. Jabbathepug
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11 Apr 2016 09:13 PM
Is my poem bad?


Today I feel Happy and Glad
When I peeked out the window
My friend came In Wet!

The clouds are grey
People use umbrellas
The sky is dark

Dark is pretty
Light is handy
The day is beautiful when it rains
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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11 Apr 2016 10:06 PM
OMG HEY JABBA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


gloria says she likes mine better tho

but anyways i would rate it 6/10

"my poem sucks like pine sap" - jabbathepug
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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14 Apr 2016 09:09 AM
It's odd that every time my threads get reached to 2 pages it becomes dead.


And yes I do wake this poem from the dead sometimes.
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WolverineBoyScout593 is not online. WolverineBoyScout593
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14 Apr 2016 09:11 AM
actually nice.
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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14 Apr 2016 09:13 AM
Why thank you!

Someone said my last poem was cringe-worthy.
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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15 Apr 2016 10:52 AM
And I just woken this poem from the dead..
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Stxrry is not online. Stxrry
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15 Apr 2016 11:03 AM
is gud





There are some jewels you can't buy.. like OT.
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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15 Apr 2016 11:05 AM
thank u


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LyricLynx is not online. LyricLynx
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16 Apr 2016 12:42 AM
why do you keep bumping this
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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16 Apr 2016 12:52 PM
and why do you have a problem?


i'll just go and bump your threads then
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BlackAngelDeath is not online. BlackAngelDeath
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21 Apr 2016 04:42 PM
and again
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