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| 11 Apr 2016 09:58 AM |
| Let's see what people say today. |
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| 11 Apr 2016 03:31 PM |
| Just trying to keep this poem alive. |
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| 11 Apr 2016 08:00 PM |
Come along my brother We chase our cars like we chase our shadows Running from ourselves like a moth flies from a flame Run and run we go No end in sight We chase our flickering shadows Forget our sins tonight Why do we struggle when we prevail? We run from success and hell But oh my brother, When will our shadows see?
Chasing Shadows, by OdardAkari
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LyricLynx
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| 11 Apr 2016 09:04 PM |
I like that, Odard or whatever you name is. Just the ending should be better.
-- The Meager Human Fish -- |
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| 11 Apr 2016 09:09 PM |
| What is the meaning of that poem he wrote anyways? |
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| 11 Apr 2016 09:13 PM |
Is my poem bad?
Today I feel Happy and Glad When I peeked out the window My friend came In Wet!
The clouds are grey People use umbrellas The sky is dark
Dark is pretty Light is handy The day is beautiful when it rains |
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| 11 Apr 2016 10:06 PM |
OMG HEY JABBA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gloria says she likes mine better tho
but anyways i would rate it 6/10
"my poem sucks like pine sap" - jabbathepug |
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| 14 Apr 2016 09:09 AM |
It's odd that every time my threads get reached to 2 pages it becomes dead.
And yes I do wake this poem from the dead sometimes. |
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| 14 Apr 2016 09:13 AM |
Why thank you!
Someone said my last poem was cringe-worthy. |
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| 15 Apr 2016 10:52 AM |
| And I just woken this poem from the dead.. |
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Stxrry
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| 15 Apr 2016 11:03 AM |
is gud
There are some jewels you can't buy.. like OT. |
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LyricLynx
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| 16 Apr 2016 12:42 AM |
| why do you keep bumping this |
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| 16 Apr 2016 12:52 PM |
and why do you have a problem?
i'll just go and bump your threads then |
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