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Re: UAFs coats done

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Purely_Artistic is not online. Purely_Artistic
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08 Apr 2016 02:33 AM
https://twitter.com/42mgUniforms/status/718340878226571265

YEAH!!!
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5ancu is not online. 5ancu
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08 Apr 2016 02:37 AM
why are there cogwheels on the sleeves

we're not tgi ffs
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5ancu is not online. 5ancu
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08 Apr 2016 02:38 AM
besides, shading on the arms and legs is so much worse than on the body

don't do it 50% kid, go in 100% ffs

it looks unfinished
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The13thHippie is not online. The13thHippie
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08 Apr 2016 02:38 AM
Looks nice. The gears seem awkward being placed there, though. If that was an actual uniform irl, I'd imagine the gears being on the shoulders or something instead.


-Common Sense: Use it.
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Purely_Artistic is not online. Purely_Artistic
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08 Apr 2016 02:40 AM
Will see how he likes it when he replies,
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5ancu is not online. 5ancu
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08 Apr 2016 02:40 AM
overall review:

the COAT on the body looks nice, the rest looks kinda meh
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Purely_Artistic is not online. Purely_Artistic
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08 Apr 2016 02:41 AM
@Sancu, you might be
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zepenguin4 is not online. zepenguin4
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08 Apr 2016 02:49 AM
not really a fan of it


as you can see he missed shots but then started hitting when aimbot kicks in...
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5ancu is not online. 5ancu
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08 Apr 2016 02:50 AM
suggestions on improving the coat overall:

- remake the shirt on the body, it's just nowhere near the standard of the coat (on the body, the parts of the coat that isn't the body is meh as well, read on). perhaps just make a nicely shaded, lighter grey shirt, without the tie.
- the flippers on the coat on the body that have a blue/grey-ish shade, make them uniform (like, the same shade of black/dark grey) with the color of the coat.
- the red...whatever it is that goes across the top of the coat, from shoulder to shoulder, what purpose does it serve on the coat? instead of just a line, try to make a design out of it, or a shoulder pad, you could even make it those...what are they called...frayed shoulderpads (unsure if that's the correct term)?
- shade the arms and legs so that they work with the coat on the body, which is nicely shaded imo.
- at least bother to reverse the arm on the right (from viewers perspective)...
- remove the cogwheels, they were tgi's thing, not uaf's. if you want a button there, just make some darker or lighter buttons to add detail.
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Purely_Artistic is not online. Purely_Artistic
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08 Apr 2016 02:52 AM
[4/3/2016 2:06:28 PM] moo.jl: so like suits and ties, but we're lower level so they have like, a button up shirt and a tie on under their trenchcoat? it sounds dumb but I have a custom kinda like that

MOOJL wanted his royal tie
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5ancu is not online. 5ancu
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08 Apr 2016 02:53 AM
then you do that, but that's only criticism for the shirt though
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Purely_Artistic is not online. Purely_Artistic
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08 Apr 2016 02:54 AM
yeah ur opinion is invalid
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5ancu is not online. 5ancu
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08 Apr 2016 02:54 AM
the tie isn't all too good either, it's too wide to look professional

you know who wear wide ties? fat people, to make the tie seem in proportion with their bodies
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5ancu is not online. 5ancu
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08 Apr 2016 02:55 AM
i'm not saying you should change THAT uniform, i'm pointing out some rather obvious flaws in your design, so that you may improve yourself

you're not good with criticism, are you?
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NychtaCorona is not online. NychtaCorona
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08 Apr 2016 02:58 AM
shading on torso is great. everything else, not so much.


the gears look awkward [2]
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SilencedArchangel is not online. SilencedArchangel
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08 Apr 2016 03:01 AM
Looks like a Gears of War uniform or some sht.

But it looks alright, good job.



Oldest of the old; Father Archangel.
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Purely_Artistic is not online. Purely_Artistic
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08 Apr 2016 03:03 AM
@San thanks for the criticism
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Purely_Artistic is not online. Purely_Artistic
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08 Apr 2016 10:41 AM
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OnMyWorstBehavior is not online. OnMyWorstBehavior
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08 Apr 2016 10:42 AM
Meh


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