Digtzy
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| 05 Apr 2016 10:48 PM |
it's really bad and i need some cringy material to insert into the third chapter
the story is titled "The bond!" by new2u check it out
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| 06 Apr 2016 01:14 AM |
| Throw in Undertale references |
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| 06 Apr 2016 01:15 AM |
Throw in a "it's called a hustle, sweetheart" quote
My cat never gives me doritoes |
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SAHK
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| Joined: 29 Mar 2013 |
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| 06 Apr 2016 01:17 AM |
| throw in someone with baggy overalls |
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| 06 Apr 2016 01:23 AM |
"Throw in a "it's called a hustle, sweetheart" quote"
this quote should be immediately followed by "SHE HUSTLED YOU GOOD" |
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| 06 Apr 2016 01:24 AM |
""Throw in a "it's called a hustle, sweetheart" quote"
this quote should be immediately followed by "SHE HUSTLED YOU GOOD""
yes
My cat never gives me doritoes |
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Digtzy
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| 06 Apr 2016 02:52 PM |
this is good content but it needs to be able to follow the first chapter in which lukeskywalker proclaims that darth vader is his daddy with a guest star appearance from java the hutt, the second chapter is literally just the american bill of rights copy and pasted into it... i will be writing the 3rd chapter more suggestions though, i'll post what i get here |
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| 06 Apr 2016 02:53 PM |
| self insert FiMfiction about Star Wars |
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Digtzy
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| 06 Apr 2016 02:53 PM |
@coolest
which final smash should i do or should i make up my own for the character |
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