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| 26 Mar 2016 03:23 PM |
I am selling this for 1.5k to wickedlaughs
Tell me what you think
Link: http://www.roblox.com/games/375778577/Jack-In-The-Box |
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| 26 Mar 2016 04:26 PM |
ew thats worth 250 robux tops
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| 26 Mar 2016 05:14 PM |
Of course for someone that uses free models to get place visits a real build looks ugly, maybe you should start building your own things instead
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| 26 Mar 2016 06:25 PM |
| He's right, it's not worth 1.5k. It needs a lot of work, its too blocky, undetailed, and small. |
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| 27 Mar 2016 05:14 AM |
Maybe you should do a bit more research because I sell games for 10k robux. If you''re going to judge me on a game I made last year for some funds, then you can get out.
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| 27 Mar 2016 09:59 AM |
gross a triangle, i aint paying squat for that
.. well maybe like a robuck but thats it |
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| 27 Mar 2016 11:15 AM |
Its only worth about 250 to 300. Not really well built IMO.
Whats a Signature? | http://www.roblox.com/my/sets.aspx?id=1519902 |
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| 27 Mar 2016 11:22 AM |
Did wicked see this before he agreed to buying it?
Whats a Signature? | http://www.roblox.com/my/sets.aspx?id=1519902 |
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blugote
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| 27 Mar 2016 11:28 AM |
I'd buy for like 100 R$
Please tell me he didn't buy it yet...
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| 27 Mar 2016 12:55 PM |
not even worth 15 tix lmao
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| 27 Mar 2016 01:12 PM |
These replies show the community of Roblox Not one nice comment, the hate is real xD Man I miss the good old days |
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blugote
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| 27 Mar 2016 01:23 PM |
You asked for critique and we gave it to you, then you complain.
And you're right. The community has changed, just as the perception of what is good building style has.
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| 27 Mar 2016 01:37 PM |
| look guy, we're not saying it's bad, we're saying that you are charging 1k for something that took a couple hours to make. 1k is for days worth of work at a decent pace, not a few hours. |
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| 27 Mar 2016 10:13 PM |
Meh, I do appreciate some of the critic, the one that was helpful, but none was helpful in this thread, people had nothing better to put than " IS THIS A 5 YEAR OLD THAT MADE IT?" If someone could just say why they did not like it I would of gotten better, but since people just feel like insulting I did not get the productive critic I needed.
btw I did spend a fair amount of time on it, more than a day |
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| 28 Mar 2016 02:24 AM |
"none was helpful"
" It needs a lot of work, its too blocky, undetailed, and small."
Yeah.
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im_normal
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| 28 Mar 2016 02:50 AM |
Alright structure, need to make it more detailed and realistic. Also the signs are a bit hard to read.
I am the ocean you are a glass of water
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| 28 Mar 2016 05:11 AM |
GameSins
1. This would have looked awesome... In 2010! 2. What happened to the front entrance?! 3. Lonely, about 16 pieces of furniture in the... Restaurant? 4. Really?! 1.5k? I would buy this for a ticket! 5. Is this a restaurant? Or... 6. Jack In The Box, Middleofnowhere, ROBLOXia. 7. I think... This took less than 2 days with no effort whatsoever. 8. Wow, a guy is buying it for 1.5k... He's gonna regret it. 28. Plus 20 more sins because you made it.
TOTAL SINS: 28 SENTENCE: WickedLaughs |
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hunall
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| 28 Mar 2016 07:59 AM |
I like it. But not 1000 robux.
The Main problems are:
- Its not detailed enough. Detail shows skill. - Needs better color scheme or better lighting. - The furniture is rather sparse and bland. - Overall it doesn't show any love. The building looks like it was rushed and the builder just wants to get paid. It doesn't give you the feel that the builder (you) really enjoyed building it or put any of his own essence in it.
I hope this review helped. Keep up the good work and practice, you will get it. Look at me. I found out about Roblox Studio less than 8 months ago. Its all about practice.
In the end id say this place is worth no more than 200 Robux.
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| 28 Mar 2016 10:01 AM |
@Hun
I took a long time making the structure, so I understand that it might look rushed, this is the kind of criticism that I wanted, it helps me see what I did wrong, thank you :) |
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hunall
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| 29 Mar 2016 10:38 AM |
My pleasure. I remember being a new builder and how rude and inconsiderate people are.
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| 07 Apr 2016 03:51 PM |
| lol he gives a good long explanation ad you say no gg |
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