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Semi_Cool is not online. Semi_Cool
Joined: 22 Mar 2016
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25 Mar 2016 06:52 PM
It's still a WIP but I want to know if what I have been doing is good.

http://www.roblox.com/games/387941861/Project

Thanks!


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EmphisBlade is not online. EmphisBlade
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25 Mar 2016 07:10 PM
Seems neat so far, ground is kinda boring.
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CrixusOdalisManiatus is not online. CrixusOdalisManiatus
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25 Mar 2016 07:12 PM
If players can't see behind the thin towers, good.



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crossbar is not online. crossbar
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25 Mar 2016 07:14 PM
Assassin's creed game? Nice anyways, but maybe try to add more individual detail to the building. Really like your weapons stall .
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Semi_Cool is not online. Semi_Cool
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25 Mar 2016 07:29 PM
Okay in order:

How could I improve the ground?

So invisible walls?

Details like what?


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CrixusOdalisManiatus is not online. CrixusOdalisManiatus
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25 Mar 2016 07:37 PM
Ground: Triangle creator ->Keeps ground from being flat, adds details.


Invisible walls: What

As long as the buildings are 3d, not 2d (like a 50 by 2 (length x width)) then it should be fine, but if not, make it so they can't see behind the buildings to see that its actually not a full building lol.


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Semi_Cool is not online. Semi_Cool
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25 Mar 2016 08:22 PM
That's what I meant. If I put up walls so they can't see behind and then extend the buildings a little bit and add a window or two on the side.


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AluminumX is not online. AluminumX
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25 Mar 2016 08:34 PM
It looks great so far.

But I also agree with one of the replies, ground is kind of boring.



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Semi_Cool is not online. Semi_Cool
Joined: 22 Mar 2016
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25 Mar 2016 08:49 PM
I extended one building farther out and added some windows. It def. looks better. I also added a roof to said building. Give me feedback on that.

As for the triangle thing, can you link me to it? I don't exactly know what I am looking for.


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Semi_Cool is not online. Semi_Cool
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25 Mar 2016 09:56 PM
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26 Mar 2016 11:26 AM
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2Serie is not online. 2Serie
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26 Mar 2016 11:58 AM
It's nicely built. It still has a way to go yet, but keep up the good work. The ground is kinda boring, and some of the buildings could use a bit more detail, but overall the music mixes with the setting to create an effective atmosphere. Keep up the good work!
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Semi_Cool is not online. Semi_Cool
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26 Mar 2016 03:01 PM
bump

I changed one of the buildings up, tell me what you think.


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Semi_Cool is not online. Semi_Cool
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28 Mar 2016 11:33 AM
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TheTwinkieMaster is not online. TheTwinkieMaster
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28 Mar 2016 11:35 AM
not bad. The on building across from the guns shop place looks weird imo.


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