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| 21 Mar 2016 11:41 PM |
1. Chiefs I have chiefs at #1 but it's debatable. I like the way this team is headed. Birmie is leading chiefs in the right direction and I think this could be their year. Record 7-1
2. Steelers Steelers are a stacked team, But that doesn't always matter if they aren't active. We will just have to wait and see. Record 7-1
3. Packers Finally a NFC team! Djdavis is bringing this team in the right direction and I think they have a chance to make it to SB. But it's to early to tell. Record 6-2
4. Cardinals Cardinals are the 2nd best in NFC but AFC dominates this season. Record 5-3
5. Patriots Patriots led by mega, This team is going to surprise us I think but we will just have to wait and see. Record 5-3
6. Falcons Falcons dominated the Preseason and looked like a good time coming out, but they didn't beat anyone good. Lets see if they can win this week. Record: 4-4
7. Panthers Panthers are starting to develop into a better team although they are 0-3 combined this season they may have a chance to go far in the playoffs. Record 5-3
8. Ravens Ravens are one of the worst 1-0 teams but that doesn't mean they can't have a winning season they might suprise us. Record 3-5
9. Cowboys I have confidence in the 0-1 cowboys they have PieHD who is a good Head coach and can find them a playoff spot. Record 3-5
10. Bengals Bengals are a very questionable team they have a good roster with mccoy at QB but is that going to land them a playoff spot? Record: 2-6
11. Seahawks This is a tough team to judge they aren't very organized nor good so they could be last place. Record 2-6
12. Broncos Broncos have the worst Oline in the league by far, It's a ugly mess in Denver.. I see this team winning 2-3 games maybe.... A inactive coach won't bring you far in this league. Record 1-7
13 Texans Texans can change their season, this team has the potential to be very good but will they? Record: 2-6
14. Giants Don't even have a head coach this just looks like the worst franchise so far.... Record 0-8
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| 21 Mar 2016 11:42 PM |
why everyone puttin chiefs at #1 they lowkey suk
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| 21 Mar 2016 11:49 PM |
for falcons I meant Team not time lmao...
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| 21 Mar 2016 11:57 PM |
these r lowkey bad, 1 sentence about every team, like us*cowboys* have one of the best wr cores in =nfl= and we almost beat steelers by 1 point xd, I see us going legit 6-2 or 7-1 lol, we got one the easiest schedules to imo
ITS JUST ROBLOX BUT WE ALL GOT FREEKING PROBLEMS - HUNTERHARMONYTHEDOG |
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| 21 Mar 2016 11:57 PM |
Bruh I wasn't going to spend 5 hours on this maybe next week or like mid season
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| 21 Mar 2016 11:59 PM |
maybe 5-3 lowkey, but we beaten most of those top teams in scrims lolol, I mean we blew out seahawks preseason w1 and beat ravens preseason w2 worlf
ITS JUST ROBLOX BUT WE GOT FREEKING PROBLEMS11
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:00 AM |
I know cowboys are good but those team both sk rip
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:25 AM |
overall they look good, but in my opinion i think that the cowboys go 4 - 4 at worst, and personally i think the falcons might be able to make an undefeated run.
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:28 AM |
I might be underestimating them we will just have to see.
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:34 AM |
^adding onto what i said
falcons are probably #1 and #2-#3 is a heated debate about steelers and chiefs. either way for the most part, pretty accurate.
also, some things i noticed with your grammar. im not gonna be a grammar n@zi, just give you some basic tips on how to keep people interested in your writing.
for 1, try and write small paragraphs describing what you know about each team. typically, i'll do a description for the first seven and then just rank the last seven without a description. for those last 7 teams, their needs are *generally* going to be pretty similar.
secondly, try and switch up the words and phrases you use. i notice a lot of repetivity in your work, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but try and spice it up. for instance, i noticed multiple times in this that you said "we'll just have to wait and see." repetitive in this case is fine, but not if you use that exact phrase over and over again. try to add some new words to make it sound like it's a new sentence, but really it's just something you've said before put into a different way of saying it.
the only real problem i saw besides the ones above was punctuation but it was mostly comma placement, something most people struggle at anyway.
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:35 AM |
I wrote this @1Am + I know rip Ill try and make it better next time lmao I kinda rush through it.
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:36 AM |
its fine, i make a lot of grammar mistakes late at night as well.
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:37 AM |
Ill make a better one seeing that people enjoy these.
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| 22 Mar 2016 07:06 AM |
Trash ass rankings
1. You don't go into detail
2. Too 3 is steelers patriots and Falcons (no order)
Chiefs ain't #1 they're garbage
And why is cardinals/packers ahead of us? That's a neck
Falcons #6? Cmon dude lol |
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| 22 Mar 2016 07:28 AM |
Hunterharmony is not online. Hunterharmony
Joined: 22 Jun 2014 Total Posts: 55 Saxon Sunbirds … 21 Mar 2016 11:57 PM these r lowkey bad, 1 sentence about every team, like us*cowboys* have one of the best wr cores in =nfl= and we almost beat steelers by 1 point xd, I see us going legit 6-2 or 7-1 lol, we got one the easiest schedules to imo
ITS JUST ROBLOX BUT WE ALL GOT FREEKING PROBLEMS - HUNTERHARMONYTHEDOG
You beat is by 2 points... u wbed the whole time i didnt lol im not saying we woulda won but we probably would of if i stayed and qbed |
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| 22 Mar 2016 07:29 AM |
| and 3 what makes you think the ravens are so bad... Im creating a better detailed one later today |
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| 22 Mar 2016 10:01 AM |
| When the Patriots have the best WR for in the entire league and their still #5. Proof? Babatron, TheSlice, dawad, and aku. When the Patriots haven't allowed a score against them all season. We should clearly be in the top 3... I don't know what else we need to prove. |
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| 22 Mar 2016 10:16 AM |
Prow too @intox
Not to mention our dline alone already having 10+ sacks, and oline not allowing one yet |
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:03 PM |
jez I am just writing what I hear and see from each team. Ravens lost to cowboys in preseason so that's why I think ravens are not good. Thank you And patriots are good I know but they are not #3 they could be but like I said I am writing what I see from the preseason and first game.
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:08 PM |
We ain't #3
We arguably #1. If not, then steelers or Falcons are, but us 3 are too 3 in the league without a doubt.
Patriots #1/2 at least but whatever floats your boat lol |
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:09 PM |
| Embarrassing that you even thought of putting Chiefs or packers ahead of us though like seriously? They cupcake.... |
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:10 PM |
I wanted to get NFC teams atleast 1 in TOP 3 but like I said AFC is dominating this season.
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:27 PM |
"Wanted to get 1 NFC team in top 3"
How biased do you think that sounds rofl... |
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:28 PM |
e.e Shhh I didn't want 4 AFC's teams in top 4....
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| 22 Mar 2016 12:36 PM |
Yea don't do predictions then if you're gonna include a random team from nfc over a powerhouse afc team knowing that they're not good whatsoever
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