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Re: Yung Slaya Feat lil $hotta- Real goblins

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antontrucksgaming is not online. antontrucksgaming
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11 Mar 2016 04:16 PM
(verse 1) Lil $hotta
See i'm the real goblin
I ain't talkin the green goblin,
Look at that boy he sobbing
Now he over here slobbing
Problem solving we mobbing
Cashing out i'm always shopping
He still talkin crazy stuff still
so it's time to get to stomping,
Double 00 Gxng yea we the real goblins
(hook x2)
Real goblins killin everythin real goblins
(verse 2) yung Slaya
Real goblins everytime I step through I kill a verse
pick up the whole song and put it in a hearse
[N] I'm a real curse
Everyone thinkin they make real rap but they don't
They say I suck let me hear your crap
then they stutter and say uhh maybe sometime later
SO I tell them they aint real they just haters
No one can get to my level
Especially when they sell they're soul to the devil
(hook x2)
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Lord_Sinister is not online. Lord_Sinister
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11 Mar 2016 04:17 PM
We are a good collab that was tight.
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antontrucksgaming is not online. antontrucksgaming
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11 Mar 2016 04:23 PM
Rates?
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perspectiveVEVO is not online. perspectiveVEVO
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11 Mar 2016 04:23 PM
2/10
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BENSTILLHAUNTS is not online. BENSTILLHAUNTS
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11 Mar 2016 04:25 PM
"2/10"

LOL
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antontrucksgaming is not online. antontrucksgaming
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11 Mar 2016 04:27 PM
how is this song a 2/10
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perspectiveVEVO is not online. perspectiveVEVO
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11 Mar 2016 04:29 PM
Your rhyme is bad and stretches too long, the entire song is not even half the length of a proper verse.

It is formatted horribly too and your stage names are cringy.

There is lots of room for improvement. I'll update my rating, to be generous... 3.5/10 :)

Perhaps spend more time on your writing, more complex rhymes, longer verses and double-checking grammar.

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Lord_Sinister is not online. Lord_Sinister
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11 Mar 2016 04:32 PM
I appreciate the tips but it's above a 3 but it's your opinion so i don't have say over you. But would you like to do a song together if you ro rap?
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perspectiveVEVO is not online. perspectiveVEVO
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11 Mar 2016 04:35 PM
you're not good enough to collab with me sry

there are a few equals on this magical mystical place called rorap proboards though, namely a man called Ilwiri or something along those lines ;)
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Lord_Sinister is not online. Lord_Sinister
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11 Mar 2016 04:37 PM
I am good, but you don't have to be rude and what ate proboards..?
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Lord_Sinister is not online. Lord_Sinister
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11 Mar 2016 04:37 PM
What are*
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Troubleddd is not online. Troubleddd
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11 Mar 2016 04:52 PM
rorap.proboards

.com


and garbo.
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omahgosh345 is not online. omahgosh345
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11 Mar 2016 04:55 PM
goblin/10


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cooldisposableheroes is not online. cooldisposableheroes
Joined: 27 Jul 2013
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11 Mar 2016 04:57 PM
This is a -10/10
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xabi is not online. xabi
Joined: 31 Aug 2008
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17 Mar 2016 07:25 PM
when yung slaya tries to pretend he's never been on the proboards

don't play

this was horrible
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mastergyroosandwich is not online. mastergyroosandwich
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17 Mar 2016 07:26 PM
The fact that theres no beat makes it a 1/10 for me. Lyrics wise? 2/10 very boring s**t.
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TixxTheRapper is not online. TixxTheRapper
Joined: 06 Sep 2014
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18 Mar 2016 12:13 AM
"you're not good enough to collab with me sry"

idk why but that triggers me a little....
That's pretty arrogant. Remember that everyone starts somewhere, and you were just as bad as him too at one point.
He's not asking to be on your album either, rather for you to do a song with him for his benefit.
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tori15738 is not online. tori15738
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18 Mar 2016 12:23 AM
1/10
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