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| 06 Mar 2016 05:42 PM |
This was the first one: http://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=184827266
if you want to be in the next post here along with any character traits then track this thread cuz i'll post the link to the story on here |
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allyza8
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| 06 Mar 2016 05:50 PM |
ricechex i am so beautiful im long tan and handsome |
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| 06 Mar 2016 05:51 PM |
i wanna be the guy who dies during the prologue but then suddenly comes back at the end because plot needed me
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baskind
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iLogan32
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| 06 Mar 2016 05:52 PM |
hello
♥ RT's Official Weeaboo Trash ♥ @iZynno ♥ |
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Reithe
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| 06 Mar 2016 06:16 PM |
Hey, are you still writing the other parts of that other story?
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| 07 Mar 2016 06:43 PM |
http://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=184956703
@snowy only if ppl actually read it |
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LettuceGO
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| 07 Mar 2016 06:43 PM |
mememeem
lettuce http://www.roblox.com/lettuce-item?id=378970831 |
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Inhale
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royaltoe
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| 07 Mar 2016 06:46 PM |
next time you write a story, use more descriptive words instead of cramming dialog. but i like it. and i'd love to be in your story.
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| 07 Mar 2016 06:47 PM |
@royal
my second one is less crammed I think |
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