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a shorty narrative about a post-apocalyptic society

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WhippedCream2 is not online. WhippedCream2
Joined: 11 Jul 2008
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04 Mar 2016 11:07 PM
A man with a heavy jacket and beanie hat wondered towards the front gate.

An officer shouted: "Sir, please stop walking towards us."

The man continued to trail on. Backpack on, as he drew closer it was apparent that he had been hiking in the dense snow and freezing cold for an extremely long time.

"Sir, PLEASE stop walking. [To his walkie:] Civilian is not complying, Stage 1."

All of the armed guards in front of the checkpoint raised their weapons and focused their attention on the man.

The man seemed determined and was clearly not intimidated. He pressed on, at least slowing his speed.

"Sir, STOP walking. That's an order! [To his walkie:] Further noncompliance, Stage 2."

Officers came from inside the checkpoint, and the ones already standing there steadied themselves and got a better angle on the man. Safeties came off, and those who has not done so previously readied their weapon.

The man seemed a bit distraught, but he didn't stop moving. He slowed to a crawl, but he didn't stop.

"Sir, this is your LAST warning. Stop moving or we will kill you. [To his walkie:] Extreme recklessness, Stage 3."

A spotlight hit the man, and machine guns on top of the wall of the checkpoint were pointed directly at him.

This, finally, got the man to stop.

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i have more to the story if you're really that concerned about what happens



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FrigidusIncendium is not online. FrigidusIncendium
Joined: 28 May 2012
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04 Mar 2016 11:13 PM
Excuse me
what
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WhippedCream2 is not online. WhippedCream2
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04 Mar 2016 11:15 PM
sometimes i write short stories and im really bored so i put the concept of one of them here.



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TimeDrFreeman is not online. TimeDrFreeman
Joined: 24 Jan 2016
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04 Mar 2016 11:18 PM
Eh. It's okay.
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WhippedCream2 is not online. WhippedCream2
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04 Mar 2016 11:20 PM
@time please keep in mind this is not a fully fleshed-out scene. its just a concept for a scene. bare-bones



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seafishy625 is not online. seafishy625
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04 Mar 2016 11:21 PM
I think it's pretty dang good! Nice Work. :)
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