Malenz
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| 13 Feb 2016 05:50 PM |
Could you give some constructive criticism in the comments or on this thread? It would really help, as I'm stuck and don't know what to add.
It's here: http://www.roblox.com/games/359351114/Lakeside-Limbo
Before someone comes on and says that I just want tix, no. I don't. I would just really appreciate some of your opinions on if it's alright, bad or good, or anything.
The song in the game is composed from David Wise and the song title is "Stickerbush Symphony".
Thanks, everyone! |
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Vortilis
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Malenz
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| 13 Feb 2016 05:51 PM |
| Also, yes, this level takes heavy inspiration from the, "Donkey Kong Country" series of games. |
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| 13 Feb 2016 05:53 PM |
The build is very nice but 2 things irk me.
1. The beginning floor tile pattern is either uneven or glitchy, and this irks me because I was diagnosed with ODC.
2. The roof in the beginning area is glitchy
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Malenz
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| 13 Feb 2016 05:54 PM |
Alright, thanks Pixel. I'll get on to fixing those. |
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Erythia
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| 13 Feb 2016 06:01 PM |
I like it, just the bright yellows and oranges aren't really appealing to my eyes, try a lighter brown perhaps?
Becca is really cool || R$12,951 |
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