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Re: The Light Side and The Dark Side

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DiamondGirl20000 is not online. DiamondGirl20000
Joined: 30 Aug 2015
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31 Jan 2016 10:44 AM
Characters:
Light Side

Zachary Bender, a 13 year old boy.
Mr.Bender,zachary's dad
Mrs. Bender, zachary's mom
Jason Bender, 16 year old boy and zachary's brother
Amelia Bender, 11 year old girl and zachary's sister
Mrs. Harriet
Mr. Elliot
Edward Jones, Mr.Jones son
10 fighters for the light side


Dark Side

Mike Rider, Zachary's long lost twin from the dark side that is owned by Mr.Rider
Mr. Brown, the first police officer
Mr. Johnson, the second police officer
Mr. Jones, the doctor
10 fighters for the dark side
Mr.Rider
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Zachary is the main character. This roleplay will begin when every role is taken. If you choose a fighter role you can name them whatever you want. I will be the narrator.

DiamondGirl20000
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Danonymous is not online. Danonymous
Joined: 21 Jun 2012
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31 Jan 2016 10:46 AM
Ok, attempting to post an RP with no experience and a small post count was brave enough, but this is just going too far. Get out.


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DiamondGirl20000 is not online. DiamondGirl20000
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31 Jan 2016 01:55 PM
What do you mean "No experience"? And also you can't tell me what to do
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egonoia is not online. egonoia
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31 Jan 2016 02:02 PM
I don't even know the story!
What the characters are/do!
The rules!
The CS!
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DiamondGirl20000 is not online. DiamondGirl20000
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31 Jan 2016 02:24 PM
Rules:

The roblox rules

___________________________________________________________________________________
CS for fighters

Name:
Age:
Dark or Light?:
___________________________________________________________________________________
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egonoia is not online. egonoia
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31 Jan 2016 02:27 PM
I don't even know the story!
What the characters are/do![2]
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DiamondGirl20000 is not online. DiamondGirl20000
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31 Jan 2016 02:28 PM
Actually don't use that CS use this one. And all characters need to make a CS


Name:
Age:
Dark or Light?:(if you are not a fighter skip this)
Appearance:
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egonoia is not online. egonoia
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31 Jan 2016 02:30 PM
I don't even know the story!
What the characters are/do![3]

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scarletjewl1 is not online. scarletjewl1
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31 Jan 2016 02:31 PM
Diamond this is REALLY vague. What's the story? What do the characters look like? not trying to be mean, like someone I know... But this needs more detail. I'd be glad to help
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DiamondGirl20000 is not online. DiamondGirl20000
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31 Jan 2016 02:33 PM
The story is about the light side and dark side fighting for the planet. The light characters are the good guys and dark characters are the bad guys.
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scarletjewl1 is not online. scarletjewl1
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31 Jan 2016 02:37 PM
What's the planet's name..?
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DiamondGirl20000 is not online. DiamondGirl20000
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31 Jan 2016 02:50 PM
Earth
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scarletjewl1 is not online. scarletjewl1
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31 Jan 2016 03:13 PM
These things could have been in the description...
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Mystiquettic is not online. Mystiquettic
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31 Jan 2016 03:24 PM
Hon, this entire post needs a few (thousand) things to make it better.

1. Better and more od/troll proof rules

2. A more in-depth and interesting story

3. A REASON they're fighting for the Earth

4. A reason it's a rip-off of Star Wars

5. A better writer

6. A more precise time, year, and setting

7. People would respond to it if it was written by someone who didn't make a West Oaks School RP where she was the diplomat.

8. There are no mafia, or better known as the red chinese c0mmunists

9. WHAT IS THE PLOT

10. WHY ISN'T EVERYTHING NEEDED TO BE KNNOWN ABOUT IN THE FIRST POST

11. It's made by the person who made a High School RP. That would be acceptable in the early 2006/2007s, but not now.
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DiamondGirl20000 is not online. DiamondGirl20000
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31 Jan 2016 03:29 PM
ugh why do you haters keep on posting
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SirBookington is not online. SirBookington
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31 Jan 2016 03:36 PM
You should write a much more descriptive plot, to be honest. This just won't cut it if you want people to join, especially people from this forum.
It's much too vague.

You also might want to add more than just "the roblox rules". Don't you want to prevent godmodding? Or other boundaries you think people might try to overstep?
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Danonymous is not online. Danonymous
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01 Feb 2016 10:54 AM
We didn't hate to begin with, but this is getting persistent.


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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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01 Feb 2016 11:14 AM
diamond they're just trying to help you by giving you advice on how to make this rp be the best as it could be. i know you can be great, and i know you can do great things, but you just have to listen and learn.

they aren't hating on you, they're just giving you criticism so you know what to fix. please listen, alright? we'd like you to stay and improve as a person and as a writer.

*Sitting Alone In A Corner* [Diary Entry #932] Well Im Here, Last Man On Earth I Used The World Scaner No One's Here, No one to Talk To, No One To Go Outside With Me I Think This Is It For Me, Goodbye World.
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scarletjewl1 is not online. scarletjewl1
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01 Feb 2016 11:16 AM
Someone who thinks constructive criticism is hate needs to learn what life is. We are helping you, we're telling you that you need to do more. We aren't trying to be mean. Hate is mindless, but the points people are making are true and helpful. Please PLEASE listen.
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Danonymous is not online. Danonymous
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01 Feb 2016 11:19 AM
And with the negative attitude against me for making a point made me start to see you in a negative image, OP.


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evilboo10 is not online. evilboo10
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01 Feb 2016 01:03 PM
I thought this was gonna be a Star Wars roleplay at first.
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Tailsdahfox136 is not online. Tailsdahfox136
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01 Feb 2016 01:19 PM
@evil

Same though.

Who wants to join the RPquisition?
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benzo2 is not online. benzo2
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01 Feb 2016 01:25 PM
^ Still working on that. Looot of Codex entries to copy over, and I broke my monitor screen, sooo gonna take even longer via phone.
I'd say almost a quarter of the way? lol
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TheDeadDemon is not online. TheDeadDemon
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01 Feb 2016 01:28 PM
oh jeez benzo that sounds like a story

how did you break your monitor screen?

*Sitting Alone In A Corner* [Diary Entry #932] Well Im Here, Last Man On Earth I Used The World Scaner No One's Here, No one to Talk To, No One To Go Outside With Me I Think This Is It For Me, Goodbye World.
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benzo2 is not online. benzo2
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01 Feb 2016 01:30 PM
Haha, it's actually rather simple; Too much 420 one night and tried to carry it downstairs to do a wee bit of writing.
I dropped it along the way.
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