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| 31 Jan 2016 10:44 AM |
Characters: Light Side Zachary Bender, a 13 year old boy. Mr.Bender,zachary's dad Mrs. Bender, zachary's mom Jason Bender, 16 year old boy and zachary's brother Amelia Bender, 11 year old girl and zachary's sister Mrs. Harriet Mr. Elliot Edward Jones, Mr.Jones son 10 fighters for the light side
Dark Side
Mike Rider, Zachary's long lost twin from the dark side that is owned by Mr.Rider Mr. Brown, the first police officer Mr. Johnson, the second police officer Mr. Jones, the doctor 10 fighters for the dark side Mr.Rider _________________________________________________________________________________
Zachary is the main character. This roleplay will begin when every role is taken. If you choose a fighter role you can name them whatever you want. I will be the narrator. DiamondGirl20000 |
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| 31 Jan 2016 10:46 AM |
Ok, attempting to post an RP with no experience and a small post count was brave enough, but this is just going too far. Get out.
Nothing is finite, not even the potential amount of alts I can make in the next few years! |
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| 31 Jan 2016 01:55 PM |
| What do you mean "No experience"? And also you can't tell me what to do |
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egonoia
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:02 PM |
I don't even know the story! What the characters are/do! The rules! The CS! |
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:24 PM |
Rules: The roblox rules
___________________________________________________________________________________ CS for fighters
Name: Age: Dark or Light?: ___________________________________________________________________________________ |
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egonoia
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:27 PM |
I don't even know the story! What the characters are/do![2] |
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:28 PM |
Actually don't use that CS use this one. And all characters need to make a CS
Name: Age: Dark or Light?:(if you are not a fighter skip this) Appearance: |
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egonoia
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:30 PM |
I don't even know the story! What the characters are/do![3]
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:31 PM |
| Diamond this is REALLY vague. What's the story? What do the characters look like? not trying to be mean, like someone I know... But this needs more detail. I'd be glad to help |
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:33 PM |
| The story is about the light side and dark side fighting for the planet. The light characters are the good guys and dark characters are the bad guys. |
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| 31 Jan 2016 02:37 PM |
| What's the planet's name..? |
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| 31 Jan 2016 03:13 PM |
| These things could have been in the description... |
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| 31 Jan 2016 03:24 PM |
Hon, this entire post needs a few (thousand) things to make it better.
1. Better and more od/troll proof rules
2. A more in-depth and interesting story
3. A REASON they're fighting for the Earth
4. A reason it's a rip-off of Star Wars
5. A better writer
6. A more precise time, year, and setting
7. People would respond to it if it was written by someone who didn't make a West Oaks School RP where she was the diplomat.
8. There are no mafia, or better known as the red chinese c0mmunists
9. WHAT IS THE PLOT
10. WHY ISN'T EVERYTHING NEEDED TO BE KNNOWN ABOUT IN THE FIRST POST
11. It's made by the person who made a High School RP. That would be acceptable in the early 2006/2007s, but not now. |
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| 31 Jan 2016 03:29 PM |
| ugh why do you haters keep on posting |
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| 31 Jan 2016 03:36 PM |
You should write a much more descriptive plot, to be honest. This just won't cut it if you want people to join, especially people from this forum. It's much too vague.
You also might want to add more than just "the roblox rules". Don't you want to prevent godmodding? Or other boundaries you think people might try to overstep? |
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| 01 Feb 2016 10:54 AM |
We didn't hate to begin with, but this is getting persistent.
Nothing is finite, not even the potential amount of alts I can make in the next few years! |
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| 01 Feb 2016 11:14 AM |
diamond they're just trying to help you by giving you advice on how to make this rp be the best as it could be. i know you can be great, and i know you can do great things, but you just have to listen and learn.
they aren't hating on you, they're just giving you criticism so you know what to fix. please listen, alright? we'd like you to stay and improve as a person and as a writer.
*Sitting Alone In A Corner* [Diary Entry #932] Well Im Here, Last Man On Earth I Used The World Scaner No One's Here, No one to Talk To, No One To Go Outside With Me I Think This Is It For Me, Goodbye World. |
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| 01 Feb 2016 11:16 AM |
| Someone who thinks constructive criticism is hate needs to learn what life is. We are helping you, we're telling you that you need to do more. We aren't trying to be mean. Hate is mindless, but the points people are making are true and helpful. Please PLEASE listen. |
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| 01 Feb 2016 11:19 AM |
And with the negative attitude against me for making a point made me start to see you in a negative image, OP.
Nothing is finite, not even the potential amount of alts I can make in the next few years! |
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| 01 Feb 2016 01:03 PM |
| I thought this was gonna be a Star Wars roleplay at first. |
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| 01 Feb 2016 01:19 PM |
@evil
Same though.
Who wants to join the RPquisition? |
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benzo2
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| 01 Feb 2016 01:25 PM |
^ Still working on that. Looot of Codex entries to copy over, and I broke my monitor screen, sooo gonna take even longer via phone. I'd say almost a quarter of the way? lol |
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| 01 Feb 2016 01:28 PM |
oh jeez benzo that sounds like a story
how did you break your monitor screen?
*Sitting Alone In A Corner* [Diary Entry #932] Well Im Here, Last Man On Earth I Used The World Scaner No One's Here, No one to Talk To, No One To Go Outside With Me I Think This Is It For Me, Goodbye World. |
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| 01 Feb 2016 01:30 PM |
Haha, it's actually rather simple; Too much 420 one night and tried to carry it downstairs to do a wee bit of writing. I dropped it along the way. |
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