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| 31 Jan 2016 03:40 PM |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nMXJTyqLcaA
Made a song with my cousin. He did the guitar and electronic drone, I did the piano, vocals and the noise |
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Heishin
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| 31 Jan 2016 03:48 PM |
| It's awesome. You and your cousin did good. |
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:00 PM |
| Thanks, what should I do to improve it? |
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Heishin
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:15 PM |
| Maybe bring up the volume on your vocals and piano. Maybe have a guitar playing the chords to your piano gently in the background? |
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Heishin
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:16 PM |
I said maybe too much in that reply.. sorry.
The guitar was just an idea though. This is your song after all. |
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circirak
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:26 PM |
noise??
i can't hear it. whatever it is.
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:27 PM |
| Well I was thinking of adding a guitar part in with the vocals. But it'd prob be more riffing rather than just chords. I'm probably going to add trombone in as well towards the beginning of the song |
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:28 PM |
| Well I'm not gonna have the noise overpower everything. Sorry, coward live version is not my goal in music. I'm confused on how u can't hear the noise tho. It's pretty loud, especially around the piano. It cuts in an out, it's not on the whole time |
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:30 PM |
@sidd
im not asking for the noise to overpower it. im asking for it to be at least noticeable
like, all i hear is the guitar, and a hum.
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| 31 Jan 2016 04:32 PM |
Is it the sound in the start of it?
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| 31 Jan 2016 05:38 PM |
| you should add a memerap verse |
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| 31 Jan 2016 07:03 PM |
| This is horrible. Completely disgusting. You two have no talent whatsoever LOLOLOLO HAX M8 MUM GET THE CAMERA OHOOHOHHOHHOHOHOHOHOHOHODB W&&D DGS^G S EAT MY POOPS |
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| 31 Jan 2016 08:46 PM |
| It's the static that's obviously added into it. It's at the beginning cuts out a bit into the guitar, comes back before the piano, continues until the end |
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| 31 Jan 2016 09:20 PM |
| it's good. try not to play the same sequences over and over too much. |
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| 01 Feb 2016 08:16 PM |
| Please tell me how any of those three parts were the same? |
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| 01 Feb 2016 09:34 PM |
tbh i liked the electronic drone.
and the noise was nice and subtle, not too much, but just enough to be a nice addition.
u did good
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| 19 Mar 2016 03:47 PM |
| I'm saying at the beginning I grew impatient from listening to the same sound. Other than that, it was great. |
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| 19 Mar 2016 03:55 PM |
| I like it a lot haha. Love the chill vibe created by the guitar and the drone. Maybe just increase the volume of the vocals, or project it yourself because it was hard for me to hear it. I had to re-listen to it to get what you were saying. That being said, I like the sound you two produced and you guys have a lot of potential. Keep producing music! ^-^ |
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| 19 Mar 2016 04:59 PM |
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@circirak That remark was too complicated for me. We were talking about lives. Try adjusting the volume control. I know it is. jk I don't mean it
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| 19 Mar 2016 06:18 PM |
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jk I don't mean it
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| 25 Mar 2016 12:27 PM |
| Thanks for all the suggestions. |
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