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Re: [FoA] The End of Days [PART 1]

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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 12:24 AM
[More back story on this later.. for now, this is all you get to speculate with :)]



CHAPTER 1
A FALLEN NATION


"Father, what is to become of Arcadia?" A young boy, approximately eight years old, looked up with innocent blue eyes towards a much more elegant and war scarred father. The father sighed.. the child could tell he was depressed. Something was wrong, he knew. Yet his father would not say. The father once again turned his back on his child. Once again, the boy persisted in his questioning. "What happened that day, father? I want to know. Tell me what the battle was like." The father was quiet for a moment, then he sighed, a knelt down to the boy's eye level. "I can see there is no fooling you. You persist continuously, and in honor of your patience, I shall tell you the truth." He sighed once again, and collected the words he though the child should get out of the horrible situation Arcadia was in.

"Our honorable nation has... crumbled. Despite our best efforts, we could not keep Arcadia alive. I know this will be difficult for you to understand.. you are too young right now... but hear me out... Our nation was a glorious nation. Full of leaders and men of joy. Men who did anything for their nation, even.. taking it upon themselves to sacrifice them-self for a greater cause. When Arcadia fell, it was not taken lightly. We wept.. but we continued on.. as we must do now. The great nation I fought to raise you in has changed... but as always, we will get back on our feet. Remember that. If you take anything with you from today... it's that this isn't forever." "Arcadia is our home, it will always be that way, I want you to know that. Do you understand me?"


The child nodded, and his father sighed once more. He paced around the room a little, looking out the window. The city once full of life and beauty was now full of flames and anarchy. "Pack your things...we're leaving." The child grabbed his bag, and packed all he could... and then they were off. The child stopped at the door step of the elegant officers house that he and his father had called home. Everything from the entire life he had known was in there. His toys, his life, the last scent of his mother. Everything. "Lucas. Come on. We have to go." The boy took one last look at the house, and then, reluctantly followed his father down the trail and into the fog.
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ScarredArrow is not online. ScarredArrow
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30 Jan 2016 12:28 AM
Did someone say Scarred?
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ReversonaI is not online. ReversonaI
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30 Jan 2016 12:31 AM
Nice.
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AbstractRed is not online. AbstractRed
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30 Jan 2016 12:40 AM
noice

kinda reminds of those one shot comics made for Halo Reach
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SparrowSeverloh is online. SparrowSeverloh
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30 Jan 2016 12:44 AM
very nice


Crusader of Gr8r Arkadia
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Melenius is not online. Melenius
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30 Jan 2016 12:58 AM
I sense a bit of Killzone: Shadow Fall.


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30 Jan 2016 01:02 AM
LOL WOAH EPICK STORY BRO
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30 Jan 2016 04:29 AM
I'd rather have the Father and Boy pill out out reapers and have a all out gunfight with whoever is raiding.
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30 Jan 2016 04:30 AM
pull
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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 10:44 AM
@Melenius I got some inspiration from there, it was one of the things I fought about while writing this story. I don't play the game, but I I've watched a few videos of it, and I really enjoy the way they pull off the creation of the first chapter. So I figured, hey, why not pull some inspiration from it?
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johnsnic333 is not online. johnsnic333
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30 Jan 2016 10:50 AM
If this was a full book, I would read it.

~Storm~
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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 11:53 AM
^Thanks!

I'm currently working on part 2! Once I post it, I will provide the link here.
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30 Jan 2016 12:03 PM
I liked it
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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 01:32 PM
I just typed out the new one.. it's going to be pretty long of a read.
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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 01:40 PM
http://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=182689613

This is the contest that I will be entering this story into.


Thank you for your support so far everyone!
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meepo44 is not online. meepo44
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30 Jan 2016 01:41 PM
I cringed a bit.
But still ok comparably.
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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 01:44 PM
^Where at?

I take any constructive criticism into account in order to make the story better.
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30 Jan 2016 01:53 PM
Did someone said "war SCARRED"


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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 02:19 PM
Hahaha.
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KiIIah is not online. KiIIah
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30 Jan 2016 02:20 PM
>arcadians
>white

XDDDDD


Killah with 3 i's
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30 Jan 2016 02:23 PM
nice


♬ slim thick wit cho cute ass! ♪ ♪
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BoostPowah is not online. BoostPowah
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30 Jan 2016 02:59 PM
@ killah

tbh i've always pictured arcadians having an olive, mediterranean complexity in lore

probably to parallel with arcadia being a greek thing but w/e

http://www.roblox.com/You-got-boost-power-item?id=280732303
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enzo90 is not online. enzo90
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30 Jan 2016 03:17 PM
^ I think that's more of how they are depicted, but Arcadians also have a high population of multiple races. Majority though are Olive skinned/White (Or in this world Greek/American.) As for the characters in this story, I encourage you to use your imagination.
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Inductive is not online. Inductive
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30 Jan 2016 03:19 PM
How do you know it's based out of Greece as opposed to that town in Silicone Valley?

Seriously, though, I've always pictured Arcadians as pretty much being white.
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30 Jan 2016 03:19 PM
Nevermind, not Silicone Valley, it's by LA or something.
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