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| 24 Jan 2016 08:50 AM |
It is now night. iikatpixie decides to check the corncopia for anything left. As she finally gets there, she sees a sight she hoped would not be there. Her dead friend mystiquettic is lying facedown with a huge slash mark through her back. She swears vengeance on whoever did this. Ponymaster100 comes at the same time and instead of fighting they make an alliance. They grab some swords and head back into the forest. On the other side of the arena a single arrow is shot and hits TheLegoGamerDude1 in the face. He falls into the ground clutching his face as blood pours out. Icemadroblox was the one who shot the arrow. The cannon goes off as TheLegoGamerDude1 dies. Roxasthedemon is hidden in a bush near ice and heard the scream of pain. He jumps out and stabs icemadroblox, then takes his bow and runs off. He meets Ponymaster100 and iiKatpixie and they make a team of three. Although as they are walking a bolt of lightning crashed into a tree in front of them. It sets on fire and crashes down on top of Pony and ice. iiKatpixie runs off in terror as forest begins to burn.
District 1: (Kharryk),(Nixtrogen)[INJURED] District 2: (Ari4Ari),(TheEmareldMaker) District 3: (LeBlaster200),(icemadroblox)[INJURED] District 4: (mycousinblade),(diamondgirl20000) District 5: (KhaanRaptorex),(iiOreoMadness) District 6: (TheLegoGamerDude1)[DEAD],(coolboysvery) District 7: (ponymaster100)[DEAD],(killczar13)[DEAD] District 8: (iikatpixie),(mystiquettic)[DEAD] District 9: (Roxasthedemon),(eikoopmit)[DEAD] District 10: (craigteev17),(MajorGeneralBlox2K16) District 11: (cippisweet),(ThatBlazingPony) District 12: (North1233),(missmassdestruction) |
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eikoopmit
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| 24 Jan 2016 09:00 AM |
You suck at writing stories. Pretty much all that you're doing is describing gruesome deaths in not enough detail to make people annoyed at how gruesome they are. I recommend taking a creative writing class or two or attempting to mimic the writing style of a published author so that your writing isn't complete crap.
De jongen drinkt de melk. All you need to know is that "Jongen" means "Boy" and you've learned yourself some Dutch. |
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| 25 Jan 2016 02:26 AM |
| ^ he definitely can, or at least well do better than Canada cow |
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eikoopmit
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| 25 Jan 2016 03:44 AM |
"you make one then"
You must be new here.
"he definitely can, or at least well do better than Canada cow"
That grammar is appalling.
De jongen drinkt de melk. All you need to know is that "Jongen" means "Boy" and you've learned yourself some Dutch. |
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| 25 Jan 2016 06:49 AM |
God damnit you guys I'm not trying to publish a book here. I'm typing quick un-detailed story's on my phone. You ALL can probably do better then this. Part 3 soon. |
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| 25 Jan 2016 12:18 PM |
"You must be new here." Don't be arrogant. Arrogance is a weakness because it makes you blind and delusional.
"That grammar is appalling." You seem like a great person, turning on someone trying to defend you.
Anderson, don't talk out loud. You lower the IQ of the whole street. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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| 25 Jan 2016 12:53 PM |
He's Tim, he doesn't need any help, he is like God but with sadistic intents.
Nothing is finite, not even the potential amount of alts I can make in the next few years! |
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| 25 Jan 2016 02:33 PM |
| If tims like god, then we'd all know how history actually went and how soard is the devil. |
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North1233
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| 25 Jan 2016 03:05 PM |
Where's the first part?
[If Windows made a resturaunt, would it serve Mac and cheese?] |
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Kharryk
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| 25 Jan 2016 08:40 PM |
| I'm still here, can you let me play now? |
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| 25 Jan 2016 09:07 PM |
| Blaster, shut up and go die. |
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| 25 Jan 2016 09:09 PM |
| Cool, I've always wanted to die. |
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Pruz
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| 25 Jan 2016 10:55 PM |
| If Tim was god, my family would be atheists. |
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eikoopmit
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| 26 Jan 2016 03:31 AM |
"Don't be arrogant. Arrogance is a weakness because it makes you blind and delusional."
You must be new here.
"You seem like a great person, turning on someone trying to defend you."
That grammar is appalling.
"He's Tim, he doesn't need any help, he is like God but with sadistic intents."
What Dan is trying to say is that I'm like God but just the Old Testament stuff.
"If tims like god, then we'd all know how history actually went and how soard is the devil."
You forgot that I'm a proper noun.
"If Tim was god, my family would be atheists."
I assume that they're atheists? If not, convert them or risk being wrong.
De jongen drinkt de melk. All you need to know is that "Jongen" means "Boy" and you've learned yourself some Dutch. |
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| 26 Jan 2016 05:35 AM |
Saying soard is the devil implies Tim atleast liked him at a point in time, starting off as god's second in command and most powerful angel then Satan was like ' Can I be a god to?' God was like ' Nah bro I'm the only God ' Satan was like 'okay' but was secretly mad "if I can't be the ruler of heaven, then I'll be the ruler of earth! " God was like 'lolnope you can be the ruler of hell tho, also you can't escape '
But the key is at one point Tim would have to at least respect soard and vice visa |
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| 26 Jan 2016 06:03 AM |
everyone shut up
no one likes anyone on this stupid-azz thread.
So everyone
go to hell |
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| 26 Jan 2016 06:05 AM |
| I already live in hell so should I leave and come back? |
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| 26 Jan 2016 08:08 AM |
| If Soard is then trapped in hell, Tim is in here with him. Because everyone knows rpf is hell. |
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| 26 Jan 2016 08:09 AM |
"If Soard is then trapped in hell, Tim is in here with him. Because everyone knows rpf is hell."
There's a lady who's sure all that glitters is gold And she's buying a stairway to heaven. When she gets there she knows, if the stores are all closed With a word she can get what she came for. And she's buying a stairway to heaven.
And then she'll let me use said stairway because I'm not Soardlo.
De jongen drinkt de melk. All you need to know is that "Jongen" means "Boy" and you've learned yourself some Dutch. |
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North1233
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| 26 Jan 2016 02:38 PM |
Guys...
Please answer my question and quit arguing about religion.
[If Windows made a resturaunt, would it serve Mac and cheese?] |
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| 27 Jan 2016 08:37 AM |
"You must be new here." Irrelevant. I'm still correct. Do you have any original responses?
"That grammar is appalling."
Do you have any original responses?
Anderson, don't talk out loud. You lower the IQ of the whole street. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) |
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| 27 Jan 2016 05:54 PM |
"rrelevant."
You must be new here.
"I'm still correct."
No, you're not.
"Do you have any original responses?"
You must be new here.
"Do you have any original responses?"
You must be new here.
De jongen drinkt de melk. All you need to know is that "Jongen" means "Boy" and you've learned yourself some Dutch. |
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