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CounterforceStudio is not online. CounterforceStudio
Joined: 17 Nov 2013
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24 Jan 2016 09:16 AM
I'm being paid a sparkle time fedora to build a modern-style cafe on a tropical island. So far, I've spent 1 day (~5 hours) working on this project. Thoughts?

http://www.roblox.com/games/347125700/place
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Tigeon is not online. Tigeon
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24 Jan 2016 09:23 AM
your getting payed 200k+? sounds like the other ends gonna scam you


bill
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hoIIyxo is not online. hoIIyxo
Joined: 06 Nov 2012
Total Posts: 60
24 Jan 2016 10:56 AM
Amazing build, I could really need somone like you atm, but it does soudn like they are going to scam you, I doubt anyone would give 200k+.
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SimplyGrammatical is not online. SimplyGrammatical
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24 Jan 2016 11:05 AM
You should be paid more than a sparkle time fedora for this.



#code print('Fledgling Game Developer')
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CounterforceStudio is not online. CounterforceStudio
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24 Jan 2016 12:58 PM
Thank you for all the (if not too) generous feedback! If you could spot a couple building imperfections and let me know, I would greatly appreciate it. Don't worry about me getting scammed, I've built/scripted for multiple people and I know how to not get scammed.

Also, I added some new stuff, so you might want to check it out again.
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DetentionRun is not online. DetentionRun
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24 Jan 2016 01:23 PM
With building u need to think like in roblox studio or first make a stretch to think or even ask people in random games like watching kind of game do u like to play
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DetentionRun is not online. DetentionRun
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24 Jan 2016 01:25 PM
Wow counter a fedora just for the place I wonder how much robux and tix ur make from the game
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DetentionRun is not online. DetentionRun
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24 Jan 2016 01:27 PM
I'll maybe play the game once it's out of beta and devolpment
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DetentionRun is not online. DetentionRun
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24 Jan 2016 01:28 PM
Holy the game is AWESOME
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GreatOculus is not online. GreatOculus
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24 Jan 2016 01:28 PM
It's a great build, but I honestly doubt anyone would give 200k for a build this small. Not to mention, if they plan to give it to you via trading, it won't work since ROBLOX put a cap on the difference of value in trades quite a while ago. Along with that, you run the risk of someone sniping the hat if he intends to shortly sell it for a very small amount - A very real risk, since I would be willing to bet that there are multiple bots constantly waiting for the hat to drop to a certain price.

TBH I don't see this ending well for you in any scenario.

Pretty stellar build though (Other than the ship. The ship is God-awful).

Much love -GO
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DetentionRun is not online. DetentionRun
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24 Jan 2016 01:30 PM
Yea it nice correct
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CounterforceStudio is not online. CounterforceStudio
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24 Jan 2016 01:32 PM
@Great:

I've worked for my client before, and I think it's safe to say that he's trustworthy. We plan on transferring the limited through trade. I'm pretty sure that if you set your Trade Quality Filter to "None", you can trade expensive limiteds for cheap limiteds.

Any ways I can fix the god-awful ship? It's not done, but I could use some ideas for ways to improve it.
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GreatOculus is not online. GreatOculus
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24 Jan 2016 01:34 PM
Alright man. Just trying to watch out for a fellow GDer.

As for the ship, the proportions seems pretty off in regards to length-width. i.e. making it longer could do it some justice. The front is also a little too sharp.

Much love -GO
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Musiq is not online. Musiq
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24 Jan 2016 01:41 PM
Who's offering that much? I doubt you'll ever see it, mang.
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Marezer is not online. Marezer
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24 Jan 2016 01:42 PM
Be careful.

The building is decent, and he's overpaying for it.


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CounterforceStudio is not online. CounterforceStudio
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24 Jan 2016 02:09 PM
Okay, I'll be extra careful.
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tornadozebra is not online. tornadozebra
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24 Jan 2016 02:17 PM
4/10

Water is shaped to oddly at the waterfall.

Add more diversity to the cliffs, having the same 2 angled bricks looks bad.

Yacht needs to be more rounded, things being too sharp looks strange.

More defined trails

Terrain should be less even, gives it more authentic-ness.

Add something on the large flat mesa.

More plants, trees, flowers, bushes, grass, etc.

Idk, I wouldn't pay a STF for this, be careful mate...
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CounterforceStudio is not online. CounterforceStudio
Joined: 17 Nov 2013
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24 Jan 2016 06:15 PM
@Tornado: I will add much more detail to the terrain later on. I just quickly built the foundations for the buildings since my client wanted to see the buildings first. Thanks for the feedback.
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gunop is not online. gunop
Joined: 28 Jan 2011
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24 Jan 2016 07:10 PM
It looks and feels really nice, but considering he's paying 200k you might want to add a bit more detail or be more careful. That doesn't mean it's bad though, I still like it a lot!
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CounterforceStudio is not online. CounterforceStudio
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24 Jan 2016 07:39 PM
Yes, thank you. I am well prepared for combatting scammers.
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