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| 30 Dec 2015 05:21 PM |
Hello all! I love writing, and I have decided to do some now for roblox!
Do you have a roleplay OC that you want a backstory on? Do you need a description(long), for one of your OCs? Do you have a roleplay you want to turn into a story?
If you answered yes to any of these questions or would to something close to it...enter all your info below and I shall start working!
Make sure to post a minimum to maximum length...to me 'short' may mean 20 pages!
Thank you for reading! I hope you have something for me to work on. |
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ZeMeeM
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| 30 Dec 2015 05:24 PM |
no thanks
only posting because i love the reading ability |
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jhewoi
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| 02 Jan 2016 03:56 AM |
Alright, I see that you're excited! I'm willing to oblige!
Would you like to write a long and detailed story? I can give you a rough idea of the plotline, and you may tell the tale however you like. There will be no boundaries on how long it is! |
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jhewoi
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| 02 Jan 2016 08:58 PM |
| But here's a problem. It's kind of a... adventure thing. Violence might be expected. If you don't want violence, I can give you a modified version. |
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| 04 Jan 2016 06:34 PM |
I think there's like, one period in this entire post by you. The rest are question marks or exclamation points. Just saying.
Also, mind giving an example of your writing, perhaps? |
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| 04 Jan 2016 06:50 PM |
| Sure, I'll give an example. One sec. |
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| 04 Jan 2016 07:18 PM |
Examples:
Love: Jake stared into Luna's golden eyes."I'm sorry, I have to go." The crestfallen girl dipped her head in sadness. "No, you can't," She whispered. "I still have so much to do, it isn't over!" she drifted her gaze over to the horizon. "When you will you go?" "Tonight, I'm sorry Luna..." he grasped her hand. "But it isn't over, I promise," Together they stared across the lake. It was the lake that had brought them together, but it was the lake that would forever set them apart. "I'll never forgive those who sent you away," her eyes were ghostly with fear and haunted with hate, but they too were misty with love.
Fighting: Scarlet pools stained the grass and the sky cracked in a split second of bright light. Cries of anguish and yowled of pure hate echoed across the land. Anger seemed to linger in the air. It had come. It waiting in the shadows, as peace and quiet rained, than pounced, like a cat for it's prey. Waves crashed like they too had been infected in fury, and flames leaped from pure air, grabbing helpless victims.
Passion: "No, we don't care, we will fight for what we came for!" yowls of battle sung the chilled air. "Though blood may drip from your very souls, we will get what we came for, or die a true, magnificent death."
For another other samples, please let me know! Those are short sample I grabbed from some of my writing. Those are human stories, but I can do any animal. |
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jhewoi
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| 05 Jan 2016 04:15 AM |
Good examples. I see you have a talent for writing.
About the violence, it would be full-on violence, as in decapitation, maiming and the like. |
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| 05 Jan 2016 09:36 AM |
| Personally I would prefer to tone down the violence. I can write it, if it is needed, I would just rather not. |
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jhewoi
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| 06 Jan 2016 03:30 AM |
| Right. Toned down, no mutilations. |
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| 06 Jan 2016 06:43 AM |
| tbh when i saw this i thought this was a necrobump |
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| 06 Jan 2016 09:39 AM |
| Damn, the op should be welcomed with open arms.. Her talent is amazing, in the posts of-course, we'll have to see how she does in a real rp however. |
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| 06 Jan 2016 10:08 AM |
why are you all lying straight through your teeth wtf is a roleplay bio why are we welcoming bad newcomers when have we ever welcomed a newcomer |
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| 06 Jan 2016 11:30 AM |
| ^ First of all, I am not a newcomer to roblox,or writing. Thank you to those who said I have talent, yer very nice <3. To those who said I am a newcomer to these roblox threads, this is true. Mostly on roblox I do warrior cat role plays, or things like that. I completely respect your opinion if you don't like my writing, or me doing this. Just please don't post mean things. Thank you. |
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| 06 Jan 2016 01:37 PM |
| @Rock The only reason I'm welcoming her is because, through all the sheit newcomers, this one came halfway decent at writing. Through a wee bit more training, she could be good.. maybe. |
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| 06 Jan 2016 03:33 PM |
| ^ Um.....thank you for the compliment? |
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| 06 Jan 2016 06:17 PM |
I would agree, actually. The writing quality is pretty good. We need more people like this. |
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jhewoi
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| 07 Jan 2016 03:25 AM |
| No, but seriously, the writing is strong with this one. Even on my creative days, I only manage a page or two, maybe three before I lose momentum and stop entirely. |
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darkline1
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| 07 Jan 2016 06:21 AM |
| I would like à cool description for my prison |
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eikoopmit
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| 07 Jan 2016 07:15 AM |
"Make sure to post a minimum to maximum length...to me 'short' may mean 20 pages!"
No offense, but you don't come off as someone able to write more than a paragraph or two of decent backstory at the best of times. I would've been a bit harsher, but after seeing the examples of your writing that you supplied, I'd be willing to say that a few paragraphs of backstory is the best you can do. Now, if you write unnecessarily complex and highly convoluted backstories I would understand where you'd be able to fit in maybe a page or two on Microsoft Word, or about four-six pages in a book, but even the most generous of my estimates can't put you as doing anything more than three pages of bio for one that would be ridiculously overcomplicated to the point of near-hilarity.
De jongen drinkt de melk. All you need to know is that "Jongen" means "Boy" and you've learned yourself some Dutch. |
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| 07 Jan 2016 09:06 AM |
@dark Thanks great! Do you have any sort of description you want me to know beforehand? Name? How long? |
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