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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
Joined: 28 Jan 2012
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18 Jan 2016 09:15 AM
I'm being paid 10k to build another trade hangout place. What do you think of it? Ways to improve?
http://www.roblox.com/games/341616528/lobby
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KitoYuno is not online. KitoYuno
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18 Jan 2016 09:16 AM
maybe you can add a waterfall near the cliffs after adding the ocean.
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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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18 Jan 2016 09:21 AM
Cliffs? What cliffs?
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iLordOfAviation is online. iLordOfAviation
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18 Jan 2016 09:47 AM
LOL YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT A CLIFF IS!? HAVE YOU GONE TO SECOND GRADE?


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Polleoh is online. Polleoh
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18 Jan 2016 10:15 AM
@above, I really have no idea if you don't notice, but he is not asking what a cliff is - rather, he is asking where the cliff is.. You yourself are pretty stupid if you do not even recognize that.
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HuskiesPancake is not online. HuskiesPancake
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18 Jan 2016 11:19 AM
@above, I really have no idea if you don't notice, but he is not asking what a cliff is - rather, he is asking where the cliff is.. You yourself are pretty stupid if you do not even recognize that.[2]

PS. 10/10 ;)
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ProjectSlayer is not online. ProjectSlayer
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18 Jan 2016 11:23 AM
@above, I really have no idea if you don't notice, but he is not asking what a cliff is - rather, he is asking where the cliff is.. You yourself are pretty stupid if you do not even recognize that.[3]
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HuskiesPancake is not online. HuskiesPancake
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18 Jan 2016 11:27 AM
I HAVE A SCRIPTING REFRENCE

@above its auctly [3] ;)
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tornadozebra is not online. tornadozebra
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18 Jan 2016 12:12 PM
3/10

1: The windows that are going up the ramp, union them, no more of those pesky lines. If you cant, find another way to make them. The lines are trash and no one wants those.

2: Make the windows line up, they aren't straight with one another, and it looks sloppy.

3: Add a source for the water, It comes from no where and goes no where, it's pointless in that sense. Add somewhere it is originating from.

4: The slanted building is honestly pointless. Slanted nature of it just makes it harder to build and navigate. If you plan on keeping it, add windows to the first floor, and higher walls to the second.

5: What is the point of the field toward the end of the map (over the bridge)? I understand this isn't done, so I won't go further with this. But if you have no plans to edit this, remove it or add something to it.

6: Flowers are too big and stick out too much, make them smaller or more subtle.

7: The particle effects for the sprinklers (or fountains, idk) are awful. Use some bricks in them, don't rely entirely on particles.

8: In the underground room, put steps instead of truss, looks nicer and works better.

9: Redo the chairs, they are too stiff, too big, and the most common one has a very odd design. I wouldn't roll with it.

10: improve flower design, make them more realistic, they look very sloppy as well.


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Fluffmiceter is not online. Fluffmiceter
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19 Jan 2016 06:43 AM
@tom:

The ugly lines in the glass are union errors
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