Loyal2One
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:05 PM |
For ro-rappers, lyricists, or poets, so we have it all in one place,
Post youe lyrics here for critique!
"I was twenty minutes late for a Sunn O))) concert. I missed the first note." |
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:18 PM |
I,I, DEMENTIA IN YOUR MIND! CREATOR OF DECISIONS, VIOLENT VISIONS AND LIES!
-whitechapel
Where we come from THE SAW IS THE LAW |
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| 03 Jan 2016 08:26 PM |
| DIE DIE DIE DIE BLEED DIE DIE GORE AND MUTILATION BREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE |
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Loyal2One
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| 03 Jan 2016 08:28 PM |
Such genius.
"I was twenty minutes late for a Sunn O))) concert. I missed the first note." |
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YungSmoke
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| 03 Jan 2016 08:53 PM |
here's an actual song i wrote recently:
You sleep alone in my head While I lie awake It's half past midnight now
Didn't see you there in the blind spots They're getting bigger
Are you leaving soon? I will graduate on my own, in 2019 Three more years 'til the slate's rinsed clean
Again (x4)
Pack your bags and leave me be I have no need for you Holding me back, arms stretched out in front of you
Again (x4)
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| 03 Jan 2016 08:54 PM |
| BREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE |
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Otokyo
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| 04 Jan 2016 12:53 AM |
WAKE GREG UP. WAKE GREG UP INSIDE. CANT WAKE UP CANT WAKE GREG UP INSIDE. SAVE GREG.
"Pope hug me I'm scared."-2016 |
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| 04 Jan 2016 01:05 AM |
| CALL GREG'S NAME AND SAAAVE HIM |
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chanteus
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| 04 Jan 2016 10:59 AM |
Tire marks, tire marks, finish line with the fire marks When it really starts I'm a runaway slave. Master shtn' on the past gotta spit it like a pastor After, basher, did like doe like dasher, faster-motorbike faster
Iggy gotta get a bch watch for my rapture White bch go, 'bout to blow like the wind Penthouse too roof top at the wind When I win, when I win I win, no when I wid 'em they good like shin
Got h0es on call, got h0es on call to come through take a pro-to-call Just damagin' that's my protocol Dismantle ya, australians on slauson, no camera, I don't care who you are No coming back gotta give it to you raw
Pitchfork point better pass me the joint Gotta twist this beat I'ma sprang my joint Straight crack rock, go to the PA PA PUM Pumo jiggy rap city, no tiggy, yeah, shorty do illa' I'm raw no digga'
What's my mother4ckin' name it's Iggy, not jiggy GURL Don't compare me to her, throw the bch in the eminem Ruff ruff ho, could da bch I'm big Sewed the game up stapled up in a stitch
Click-click pow drops game my click Look at my heels lv on it, ignorant art, everybody on it Everybody want it, 666 got a three car garage driveway be the omen Boss like cowen?
Hate me, chordz 3D can't see me, Packets better than a h3, I don't see you like mace-me, ugh D.r.u.g.s click, oh, and we on hater On these h0es hairs no activator, whres 4ck up when he activate-her
Cuz I'm goin' out with my hand raised 'Bout to smack, smack, smack till my hand cave On the bch may, honey I'm paid, I'ma get laid 4ck yer man cave Ya act like ya girl b-real, (ta'sun)
Kinda spaced-out you bche's be duckin' Better than ya girl, than the best, make the competition rest Unless it's sx no less, I'ma 4ck a hoe game I'm best With my strap on, my vbrtor, 'bout to bust-a-rhyme, no violator
Course no, I'ma feel myself I'm a masterbeytr like, uh, uh, uh, uh-4ck me, 4ck me Now I'm off beat, my head hurts, I murk sht, I gets paper Wash my mouth, I curse like a sailor, bch! |
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Loyal2One
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:28 PM |
Very nice, Tourest :)
Me, personally, I prefer my lyrics to be timeless so I'd take out the part about 2019, but it may be for an effect I am unaware of. |
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Loyal2One
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:29 PM |
| Chant....I'm not wntirely sure how to critique yours...You and I have a very different writing style. |
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chanteus
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:31 PM |
you know its an iggy cover right??
its called D.R.U.G.S https://youtu.be/cFPUqXrztS8 |
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Loyal2One
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:32 PM |
| Not into popular music...definitely not my style. |
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Mxddison
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:33 PM |
Lyrics Here:
http://www.roblox.com/atr-cult-official-cult-logo-picture-decal-thing-item?id=321761967 |
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chanteus
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:36 PM |
its only popular bc a random guy turned it into a meme lmao anyways i dont like iggy sooo
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:37 PM |
| yooooooo dog, i am dropping sick beats right now, reference to drugs, reference to something hp and cool, reference to how rich I am |
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Loyal2One
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:39 PM |
| we have a rap hit right here. |
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:48 PM |
"Me, personally, I prefer my lyrics to be timeless so I'd take out the part about 2019, but it may be for an effect I am unaware of."
it's mostly there to give a more 'personal' feel to the song (as i do, in fact, graduate in 2019) and as the song itself is trying to get rid of your past self, i think it works |
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chanteus
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| 04 Jan 2016 02:51 PM |
youare is professional
she is top topissimo |
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Loyal2One
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Zeluka
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| 04 Jan 2016 04:41 PM |
the only thing that moves faster than light is me kicking your ass as high as a kite when people look up you'll just be another star in the night.
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| 04 Jan 2016 04:59 PM |
| ^^^^^ at least hes a star cause I mean you certainly are not |
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Finn102
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| 04 Jan 2016 05:03 PM |
I wrote this little thing for my gf
as I travel through this endless tunnel known as life in search of someone that I can call my wife I stare into my mind to peep inside this brain gone mad oh how the sane go insane when you deal with this thing called love is it bad- is it bad that my heart melts and all I wanna do is shove- shove my tongue into your lovely little mouth I've found you in this tunnel and I just wanna caress your face and then afterwards go a little down south -our hearts in a race- all I wanna do is feel your embrace
it would seem that you could stop me in my tracks but I still walk on, along with you we'll be doing everything together, living life to the max our hands locked into place, fingers interlocked my face will be red and my soul won't be blue my heart shall be docked in your arms
I love you
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