Inevera
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| 03 Jan 2016 06:36 AM |
Inevera Everius founded the UAC in 2035. As a young boy he was always interested in all sorts of technology and outer space. Obsessed with it, he spent as much time as he could reading about many types of engineering. During Colledge he majored in Entrepreneurship. Even did a little bit in Physics. Inevera graduated and thought he could turn his love for technology into something great.
Can someone point out any grammar mistakes pls |
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Inevera
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iZetrox
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Inevera
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:09 AM |
| This is part of a lore and I need y'all to find my grammar mistakes |
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Graffyboo
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:24 AM |
| Not really interesting enough. |
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Inevera
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:24 AM |
| It's not even finished bro |
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:26 AM |
But it could affect the whole lore so try finishing it first. :)
Then we might be able to understand. |
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Inevera
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:27 AM |
| So hard trying to change a lore from a video game in your own image tho :( |
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| 03 Jan 2016 07:31 AM |
Really, people will see the story different in their own imagination but it's still the sane story, they just see it differently. :)
Unless you're making a comic then that's different |
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Inevera
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