Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:34 AM |
How does Audax look from the view of a outsider? What can I improve? Also for some reason my thumbnails wont get accepted..
http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=2555752
LordKroxon gave me this idea.. |
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:37 AM |
Name seems original enough, so that's a plus.
Logo looks okay, could use improvement.
Description would use some work, looks a little vague.
Your uniforms don't really appear as though they fit your groups theme or color scheme that I'm seeing in the logo.
RIP ladyvengeance - 7 day'd |
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:38 AM |
| Thanks lady, but are you talking about the red uniform? Because the gold one is a High Rank one. |
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:41 AM |
Oh, I was only seeing the yellowish gold ones. Yeah, the red ones look fine for now. I'd suggest eventually getting new uniforms for both HR's and LR's though as they look a bit boring.
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:45 AM |
| Yea, thanks for the suggestion |
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VaIoric
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:47 AM |
Make the places "a group game"
Then they will appear before "clan" So people can raid/defend and know where to go. |
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falcondg
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:49 AM |
that looks cool
http://forum.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=180590174 |
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:57 AM |
lol
way to copy my post almost exactly
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-LK |
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Kadios
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 09:11 PM |
name seem original, nice logo, rank names are alright, uniforms are decent but could be better, desc could have a little more information
other than that it seems like a good group that id join |
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 09:12 PM |
| Thanks I am trying to come up with a more creative description. |
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Kadios
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:51 PM |
Conquest through Vigilance ═───────────╡⚔╞───────────═ Audax, a medieval sword clan, was built upon the bitter struggles and hard work. This nation is now amidst the most respected in its corner of the world
Skill, loyalty, and courage are only some of their greatest resources ═───────────╡⚔╞───────────═ ⁃ HANDBOOK TBA ═───────────╡⚔╞───────────═ ⁃ NEWS First event will be December 27th, 7:00 PM EST ═───────────╡⚔╞───────────═ ⁃ WAR STATUS At peace ═───────────╡⚔╞───────────═ For more information on the clan, please PM Kadios |
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:53 PM |
thats a new blurb or description you can use
honestly change news or whatever to BULLETIN and HANDBOOK to ALMANAC
almanac is medieval latin for handbook Bulletin sounds better
inside bulletic can be links like information, official places, or any of the sorts plus it can hold news |
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:57 PM |
neat
the uniforms could use a bit of work, although.
dream big sleep late |
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 10:59 PM |
| yea well my orginal uniform maker scammed me so yea |
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Kadios
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| 29 Dec 2015 11:08 PM |
| I used the almanac, but I am gonna try to figure out another description |
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