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| 28 Dec 2015 11:25 PM |
How does TCD look from the perspective of an outsider?
http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=1039845
What can I improve on?
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:26 PM |
It looks very well off. I couldnt say what to improve.
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:26 PM |
looks awesome
the "Too scared to fight TCD" makes you look like 8 year olds though
and the type of people in the group(based off clothing) could be better |
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:26 PM |
Good gfx and looks like decent HRs. However, it appears that there are too many ranks for that small of a clan.
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:28 PM |
"too scared to fight"
thats bad
other than that its k |
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:28 PM |
I guess i'll remove the "too scared to fight"
Never was really fond of it in the first place.
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teslobo
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:29 PM |
| Someone that is smart enough to ask that question has the potential to be a great leader. |
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:31 PM |
Thank you, all! I appreciate the constructive feedback.
-LK |
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mcclos
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:32 PM |
(uniforms are the only eh thing)
RIDE OR COLLIDE |
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Kadios
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:34 PM |
New uniforms are being made as I type this.
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Kadios
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:40 PM |
| In all honesty, TCD looks appealing to an outsider's perspective. I would advise you to re-create the introduction of your group's description, as well as remove the "Too scared to fight" list. Also, make sure to fix the errors with the brick placement at your fort, which I showed you, such as the stairs by the body of water. Other than that, it looks outstanding. |
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| 28 Dec 2015 11:41 PM |
Thanks Shock. I suggest you check out our fort right now. Major updates were made to the city section.
-LK |
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| 29 Dec 2015 02:25 PM |
I was asked to give constructive criticism in regards of the group, and to begin my 'critique'.. I'll begin by the ranking structure. Personally, I feel as if there are a lot of ranks within TCD that may not be necessary.
You currently have 13 ranks, and I'm unaware if the separation of authority has already been considered for your higher command. You don't need too much structure, but at the same time too many ranks may warrant mistrust and the separation of authority will be harder to control.
That is really my only complaint as of far, as I'm aware you have a lot of things centering way towards TCD development. I'll critique more after the fact.
Aside from that, a good pro - TCD was the first ally to really Avaden in our state of hardship. This renders respect, and allegiance regardless of what you are. :) |
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| 29 Dec 2015 03:15 PM |
Thank you so much, Raviz!
-LK |
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