TopDesign
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| 20 Dec 2015 11:45 PM |
http://topdesignrblx.deviantart.com/art/Light-Test-579242505
What can I improve to it?
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| 20 Dec 2015 11:49 PM |
| Looks ok; I don't do GFX, so I have no comments. |
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NekoPunch
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| 20 Dec 2015 11:51 PM |
i think it would be better if u made the character sharper
and also so that the shadow wasnt just directly behind him on areas where theres nothing but air |
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Avodent
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| 20 Dec 2015 11:52 PM |
Coming from a adept graphics designer, I think you shouldn't put your character underneath the background stock whatever you used, and I think text needs a little style.
Render is decent ( possibly a little ambient and global illumanation? )
What I dislike is the thumbnail is to plain, see this thumbnail I made?, I added a lot: http://avodent.deviantart.com/art/Electro-Legion-Avodent-578071443 http://avodent.deviantart.com/art/Zapirian-Avodent-578070928
I also am selling packs, and stuff :)
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Swoof
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TopDesign
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:00 AM |
Thanks for opinions guys. Any ideas about how to make the character more sharp? It has been a while since I have done thumbnails. I forgot a lot.
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NekoPunch
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:01 AM |
"Coming from a adept graphics designer, I think you shouldn't put your character underneath the background stock whatever you used, and I think text needs a little style."
it doesn't really look like he used any stocks over his character to me and the overall simplicity is fine since it's simply a lighting test
however, what's wrong with it is that 1. the character's shadow isn't placed according to the light source 2. his shadow is being shown on the air 3. the character is blurry |
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NekoPunch
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:02 AM |
"Thanks for opinions guys. Any ideas about how to make the character more sharp? It has been a while since I have done thumbnails. I forgot a lot."
what did you do to make it blurry |
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:04 AM |
| top can i get free thumbnails plz xD |
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TopDesign
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:05 AM |
I don't know, I just used many different effects in C4D.
I did: Stereoscopic Ambient Occlusion Color Correction Lens Effect Meadian Filter Object Glow
I also used Unequallys Lightroom.
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NekoPunch
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:06 AM |
| can you show me a picture of your render before you added everything else |
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TopDesign
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:09 AM |
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NekoPunch
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:12 AM |
ok the render wasn't blurry, so it was probably one of these two:
1. you resized it 2. you used and effect or added something that blurred it |
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TopDesign
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:14 AM |
It was probably a resize. I will try some different things with it. Thanks for the help!
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NekoPunch
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| 21 Dec 2015 12:16 AM |
when it comes to adjusting the size of the character, it's something you should avoid doing
instead, you should set the image size of the character before you render and then adjust everything else accordingly
that's what i do, at least |
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