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Re: A rap in which I have no name for

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HawkTempz is not online. HawkTempz
Joined: 27 Jun 2014
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31 Jan 2015 09:25 PM
Skill so ill it'll devour all those hours your spent writin' that shxt
I blitz the next wack act of rap that knocks on my door, endin' your legacy
soon as I'm done with the first verse you'll be screamin' "CHECK PLEASE!"
As you can see I'm hectic as can be, always goin' around checkin' for challenges.
Everytime I open my jaws don't expect nothin' but lyrics that are raw, thinkin'
about savin' my rhymes since everytime I go against somebody it's always a
slow spittin-pre written kid thinkin' he's so slick, so I constanly have to use
my chi like DBZ to penetrate his teeth till he can't speak! Deployin' my rhymes,
destroying these mimes! 'Cause They can't talk the talk, and they just fake the walk.
And I'm a marksman, aimin' my scope at supposedly dope rappers, sneak into the autopsy
after that disaster, take the body and bury it under the floor boards of
Norman Corwin, have 'em write a story 'bout that! Though I must confess,
those truly were the golden days of CBS. Too bad I'm too hyped to give a fxck
in fact I think I just struck gold and all I had to do was touch mold! 'Cause
I can adapt any rap like a bat adapts to it's surroundings. My heart stopped
pounding in 2010 since I've been rappin' I'm 11/10. My hella cool lyrical
miracles are so un-intervenable that it is hysterical that anyone thinks
they could beat me, and must I mention why I pay no attention to those who
commit ascension, it's cause I'm better then all my competitors, feelin' like I'm
Dylan from Columbine shooting you in your spine, and no I don't mind taking
your guts out, spreading it across the room post a pic then send it to the league
of doom! My application to that corporation shows a mega correlation, basically
there is a differnece in me compared to these other villains killin', with blood
spillen', with guns drawn, and knive unsheathed, instead I'm comin' at you like
a wildebeast, sharp teeth, and a beef I need to settle. I throw you in a kettle
in the middle of the meadows, and I leave you to die with with skinned corpses of your peers, last words you'll ever hear is me sayin' "Cheers!"

At first it was kind of a normal cocky rap but then I started talking about
some gory stuff... All I had today was apple sause so I can't tell if I
made myself lose my own appetite or if I'm really hungry. I never actually
plan out any of this, I just write what comes to mind without paying
attention to what I'm actually doing but I still think I did a good job
with the lyricism and making sure the syllables were just right. So tell
me what you thought about it, this is the first time I've ever actually
publicly shown any of my lyrics. If you don't like it please leave
constructive criticism so I know why. Or just rate it.
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kingofrobloxx is not online. kingofrobloxx
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31 Jan 2015 09:58 PM
zomg this is so dumb wtf n00b
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HawkTempz is not online. HawkTempz
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31 Jan 2015 09:59 PM
Ok mom :c
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slayer9991 is not online. slayer9991
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31 Jan 2015 10:01 PM
wack as hell son
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HawkTempz is not online. HawkTempz
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31 Jan 2015 11:20 PM
k
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HawkTempz is not online. HawkTempz
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31 Jan 2015 11:21 PM
But sadly I could care less for people who use words such as swag :c
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slayer9991 is not online. slayer9991
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31 Jan 2015 11:25 PM
shut up your raps are lame
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HawkTempz is not online. HawkTempz
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01 Feb 2015 12:07 AM
Mhm... So, do you have any constructive criticism or are you just a butt hurt kid on the internet?
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slayer9991 is not online. slayer9991
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01 Feb 2015 12:10 AM
no your track is just wack no offense

and im not butt hurt because my raps are way better just sayin..............
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HawkTempz is not online. HawkTempz
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01 Feb 2015 12:31 AM
Could you send me a link of one of your verses?
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slayer9991 is not online. slayer9991
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01 Feb 2015 12:35 AM
"Could you send me a link of one of your verses?"

no
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HawkTempz is not online. HawkTempz
Joined: 27 Jun 2014
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01 Feb 2015 02:04 AM
So I have no reason to respect your criticism.
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kingofrobloxx is not online. kingofrobloxx
Joined: 27 Oct 2010
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17 Dec 2015 06:13 PM
anyone else excited for fallout 4
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superdude3740 is not online. superdude3740
Joined: 19 Apr 2009
Total Posts: 7571
17 Dec 2015 06:14 PM
my name is cool cat and im the coolest cat
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SimpleWayfarer is not online. SimpleWayfarer
Joined: 12 Apr 2014
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17 Dec 2015 06:15 PM
"Inspirational. Powerful. This poem moved me." - The New York Times

"..." - The New York Mimes
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ElectroMagenetic is not online. ElectroMagenetic
Joined: 28 Jan 2012
Total Posts: 2019
17 Dec 2015 06:22 PM
a cringe-worthy 0/10
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D18Alt is not online. D18Alt
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Total Posts: 2726
17 Dec 2015 06:26 PM
just another white surburban kid trying to act hard on the internet 10/1,000
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