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| 14 Dec 2015 07:46 PM |
This is my first ever Rp. So, if it doesn't make sense/ I made a mistake, plz tell me and I will attempt to fix it. I also will N
We all know of the rebellion against the Galactic Empire, how Darth Vader was slain. How the Rebels took over and ruled fairly. But now, that has all changed. The new ruler, Avlakin Skywalker, has changed everything. He returned to the old ways of the Sith, and the Galactic Empire. Now, a new Rebellion has arrived. And the only planet supporting it is Naboo. This Rebellion has Jedi, Troops, Vehicles, Aircrafts. But the Empire has that, double the size, triple the strength.
Rules: No godmodding No Mary/Gary Sue No "Darth Vader" Or any other character from the movies/comics. No Trolls I am fine with Romance Keep swearing to a minimum Please keep Balance with the CS's. I cant do a RP if everyone is Jedi/Sith.
Jedi/Sith CS:
Name: Allegiance: Powers: Appearance: Bio(optional): Other:
Rebel/SkyTrooper(equivalent of stormtrooper)
Name: Allegiance: Appearance: Bio: Other: Rank(Will change throughout RP):
Story: With the War starting a couple days ago, the Rebel's spared no time making a move. Since the Avlakin Empire had a major supply of weapons and such on Tatooine, they decided they would make their first move there. Knowing it would be heavily guarded, they had alot of units moving there. |
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| 14 Dec 2015 07:49 PM |
| I forgot to add Races, you may add a race to your CS if you'd like. |
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| 14 Dec 2015 07:50 PM |
i cant believe this no ok im gonna stop u there im gonna point out some KEY ERRORS in the rp |
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| 14 Dec 2015 07:59 PM |
"The new ruler, Avlakin Skywalker, has changed everything. He returned to the old ways of the Sith, and the Galactic Empire."
Avlakin Skywalker: 1) im sure if luke had a child with GOD KNOWS WHO, he wouldnt rise up against his father
"Now, a new Rebellion has arrived. And the only planet supporting it is Naboo. This Rebellion has Jedi, Troops, Vehicles, Aircrafts. But the Empire has that, double the size, triple the strength."
LIKE HOW MANY JEDI? 1?
naboo isnt a military based planet! how could they be supplied with all tbhose things
"double the size, triple the strength"
if thats the case the rebellion couldnt stand a CHANCE against the empire
"No godmodding"
gl w/ THAT
"No Trolls"
gl w/ THAT (x2)
"I am fine with Romance"
let us stop yet another galactic war for some lovebirds kissing
"Please keep Balance with the CS's. I cant do a RP if everyone is Jedi/Sith"
gl w/ THAT (x3)
"With the War starting a couple days ago, the Rebel's spared no time making a move."
we will create an army to stand up against the bigger and badder galactic empire, and we will have all the supplies we need within a few days
"Since the Avlakin Empire had a major supply of weapons and such on Tatooine, they decided they would make their first move there. Knowing it would be heavily guarded, they had alot of units moving there."
we will create an army to stand up against the bigger and badder galactic empire, and we will have all the supplies we need within a few days (x2)
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| 15 Dec 2015 02:35 PM |
1. This, I forgot to post, took place lots of decades after Luke. The namesake "Skywalker" has been kept to honor the names legacy.
2. You really think a rebellion could win against an empire in this universe with 1 Jedi? How stupid can you be?
3. I said I was NOT following the lore of Star Wars. Please, pay attention.
4. The same case was with the Rebellion in the movies.
5. If they did godmod, then I can simply remove them from the Rp.
6. If there were trolls, we could just ignore them.
7. Even if I said that, I highly doubt there will be romance.
8. I can decline CS's you know.
9. I never said that the rebel's would win. And they would most likely destroy the supplies even if they did. They wouldn't risk an attack.
10. You think they would attack a heavily guarded military camp with 2 units? again, how stupid can you be? |
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| 15 Dec 2015 06:54 PM |
"1. This, I forgot to post, took place lots of decades after Luke. The namesake "Skywalker" has been kept to honor the names legacy."
then why is he a Sith
"2. You really think a rebellion could win against an empire in this universe with 1 Jedi? How stupid can you be?"
so they WONT win
"3. I said I was NOT following the lore of Star Wars. Please, pay attention."
then whats this where did u get skywalker from where did u get jedi from where did u get any of this star wars terms from
"4. The same case was with the Rebellion in the movies."
yeah but the empire wasnt "double the size, triple the strength"
"9. I never said that the rebel's would win. And they would most likely destroy the supplies even if they did. They wouldn't risk an attack."
so the WONT win x2
"10. You think they would attack a heavily guarded military camp with 2 units? again, how stupid can you be?"
we will create an army to stand up against the bigger and badder galactic empire, and we will have all the supplies we need within a few days (x3) |
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| 15 Dec 2015 07:12 PM |
1. I never said he was a Sith. And, that does not mean he did not respect his forefather's. I just said he changed the way of the Empire he controlled.
2. This is a RP. I won't decide. The way it plays out will decide. Get off this forum if you cant understand what an RP is.
3. NONE of this makes sense. please, look up the meaning of LORE before you speak about it. "Skywalker" is a family inside the Star Wars UNIVERSE, not LORE. Same with jedi. Star Wars terms are inside the UNIVERSE. NOT the LORE.
4. Actually, yes, the Empire was.
5. Again, this is a RP.
6. Same thing. I don't think you understand strategy. "we will create an army to stand up against the bigger and badder galactic empire, and we will have all the supplies we need within a few days." IS how they want it to be. Again, I shall take the movies as an example. They gained all those guns, ammo, vehicles, within a few days of the war. |
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| 15 Dec 2015 07:16 PM |
You're both mentally handicapped.
"Sure"~Romuluz 2014 |
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North1233
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| 15 Dec 2015 07:17 PM |
@kill
Give up already, you're not holding your ground.
"They gained all those guns, ammo, vehicles, within a few days of the war." "all those guns, ammo, vehicles, within a few days " " within a few days" "few days"
They can't just magically appear.
Learn your privileges, sir. |
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| 15 Dec 2015 07:18 PM |
"This is an rp i dont decide"
Well obviously im sure none of the rpers would wanna die So theyre gona GODMOD I guess the war will b stalemate until the "twice as big and twice as strong" empire uses their force to destroy the rebellilon
"Look up the lore"
lore- a body of traditions and knowledge on a subject or held by a particular group, typically passed from person to person by word of mouth
"They gained supplies within a few days"
GIT UR FACTS RITE M8 |
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| 15 Dec 2015 07:20 PM |
[I shall take the movies as an example. They gained all those guns, ammo, vehicles, within a few days of the war]
What the hell are you talking about? The original trilogy started on an escort vessel with Imperial plans being gunned down by a massive flagship. In none of the movies did we see how the rebellion started out. |
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| 15 Dec 2015 07:23 PM |
@stilts
x2
also hey how u doin m8 its been a while |
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