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| 27 Nov 2015 04:12 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/games/280751163/Japanese-Garden
Project I've been working on kind of on and off for a few months from some stuff off google images
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Lewkkzor
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:13 PM |
| looks barely changed from when i last saw it lol |
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Lewkkzor
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:14 PM |
idk 10/10
-THE BASEBALLER OF RT @yogurtsfalling |
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:14 PM |
mecha ik i've been kinda slackin' xd
i've added things though
i want to actually finish it soon |
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:15 PM |
Improve on your building skills, it doesn't look "good" enough but that's okay. We all used to build like that (or not, in some cases) |
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heyjess32
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:17 PM |
| 8/10 you should remove the fireworks bc i lost my limbs |
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:19 PM |
tru lol @jess
had them in there to make the game a bit more interesting until it was done but ur right |
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dj1072
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:19 PM |
6.5/10
A poem written by dj1072 |
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:21 PM |
cool for a start 9/10
if highschool had a theme song it would be this http://www.roblox.com/Napoleon-Dynamite-Bus-Rider-item?id=142499062 // add 2000 posts |
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:27 PM |
4/10
only interesting thing is the lion
also why is jumping disabled |
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:36 PM |
jumping is disable cuz it's supposed to be a calm place
i tried it before with jumping and it was a mess |
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Slamdunks
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:38 PM |
6/10
Realistically.
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Slamdunks
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:39 PM |
What you can do is a little bit more detail in the scenery.
Anything ranging from more flowers/vegetations to adding the smallest details on the building.
If you do that I'll probably rate 9 or 10. But yeah, the building is really good compared to majority of other peoples builds.
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:39 PM |
its really cool
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:40 PM |
I like the idea here though. There is a sense of aesthetics here.
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:42 PM |
aight slamdunks, thanks
I'll keep that in mind as I continue building |
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:43 PM |
I found these in my models and thought they might come in handy.
Tree and grass mesh isn't by me.
http://www.roblox.com/Nature-forest-set-item?id=279707425 http://www.roblox.com/Lily-pad-item?id=200742465
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Jack1278
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| 27 Nov 2015 04:49 PM |
make the roof look a bit more like a pyramid (not too much) and add some shingles to it also, add more scenery and more flowers and more plants etc put furniture in the house. 9/10 |
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