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Re: Abusive Shelter [RP]

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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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24 Nov 2015 06:29 PM
Orphanage RP. ABUSIVE orphanage rp...
The caretaker's called Ms. Lola.
CS:
Name:
Age:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Appearance:
Short backstory?:
Personality:
Parents (if you want them to come back):

Mine:

Name: Yuki
Age: 9
Likes: Her orphan friends, the fact she has care
Dislikes: Ms. Lola, bully orphans, etc
Appearance: Yuki rather has a dirty look. She came in with a white shirt and shorts, now they look grey and dusty. Her white shirt says "Monmy'll Be Back" in permanent marker, but it looks rather invisible and almost invisible. She is 4 feet tall and very light, not exactly sure about her weight. Her blonde hair looks as messy as rat's fur. Her hazel eyes glisten in a distance when there's sun. Poor Yuki is always seen with ashes on her face, hands and legs.
Short backstory?: A quite sad backstory. Since Yuki was born, her parents made a promise never to leave her and abuse her. At the age 6, this promise stopped. She asked a simple question, "Do you love me?", and her dad answered, "Yes, we do! But we're too busy right now, we're planning to give y-"...Silence started as Yuki's mother jumped in and screamed "Dont tell 'er!" Since then, arguing continued every day and Yuki once locked herself in the basement. When she was 6 1/2, her parents made a decision. While she was sleeping, they pushed her into the car and drove to a small boat leading to an orphanage. They put her on the boat softly. As they waved to their poor baby...the boat left... They both made a bad decision. They jumped into the water to get their baby and drowned. Ever since she was in the orphanage, she was told to clean clean clean. Less food, more cleaning!
Personality: Positive! Always positive her parents will come back! Suuuuure, she's in an abusive public care house, but that doesnt mean she can escape? Despite her backstory and all that, she's positive. On some days, orphans bully her of her optimism, that lets her down, but the thought of her parents coming back? NO! No way. Every day, she says "You'll get adopt'd an' all that!" But yeah....
Parents (if you want them to come back): no
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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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24 Nov 2015 06:33 PM
oh

oh my

i might be joining just because though

so :>

homework = hard and i refuse to do any of it
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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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24 Nov 2015 07:17 PM
op please accept me

Name: Karla
Age: 16
Likes: Good food, a nice bath, luxuries she hasn't experienced in a long time.
Dislikes: Most of everything. You can easily call her a misanthrope, but perhaps that would be a little too far.
Appearance: Karla is unusually tall for a girl her age, being 5'11" tall, and is also rather skinny as well, having a flat chest, bony hips, and long legs. Her hair is a dark black, cropped short above her neck, messy and filled with curls. Her eyes are a dull brown, deep, like the dark sky of the night, and are often very tired and exausted. Typically, she wears worn out clothes, which are loose fitting on her, with a heavy blue T-shirt with holes within it and a skirt which reaches below to her knees. Karla is barefoot, and doesn't wear footwear of any kind.
Short backstory?: Karla would rather not say, to be honest. She was proked and prodded, starved and unable to see the light of day. She was neglected and locked up in a room for nearly ten years of her life, by her both parents, until they suddenly one day disappeared at the age of 14. Afterwards, someone came to get her, and here she is, in an orphanage, all alone with no one she knew in her life, and with a lack of socialization, she easily became the target of bullying. She was sad, at first, and she was sad her entire life, but now she's mad. Now everyone just ignores her if they can.
Personality: Karla is agressive and violent to say the least. She's also quite always on the edge, always irritated and tense, and rarely relaxed, and very mistrustful. Of course, this isn't to say she isn't social, no, she is willing to initiate and talk to other people, though she isn't exactly the most graceful at socialization. No, sometimes she's unintentionally insensitive, and is crude as well. She's also quite hesitant to really open up to people, and refuses to show her vulnerable side, assuming those people would want to actually talk to her. Of course, she can sometimes bully other people as well, though it's mostly out of a lack of outlet for her stress, she can still be pretty mean if she wants to.
Parents (if you want them to come back): of course not

homework = hard and i refuse to do any of it
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happysupercooldude99 is not online. happysupercooldude99
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24 Nov 2015 07:29 PM
CS:
Name: Lacey

Age: 15

Likes: Swimming, food, animals.

Dislikes: Blood (he has a phobia), war, disease.

Appearance: He has ruffled-up brown hair that goes to his ears. Green eyes, and was sent in with a blue t-shirt with a picture of a happy family and jeans. They're both bent and battered now. He stands at a normal 5'8. His bright skin is covered with dirt and ash.

Short backstory?: Lacey's parents vowed that they would always love him and take care or him. Sadly, at 4:00 in the morning when he was 7, his parents both died in a gas station explosion. He was transported to the orphanage by one of his uncles, and is here to this day.

Personality: Mostly negative. He always tries to find the bad things about a situation when he comes across one; he's been changed by the orphanage. Although, deep inside him exists a nicer, warm side. He secretly has a heart of gold. Appeal to him, and he'll be nice.

Parents (if you want them to come back): ha ha, no.
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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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25 Nov 2015 04:16 PM
(Both accepted :p let's wait for about 2 people then start)
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PickachuGirl is not online. PickachuGirl
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25 Nov 2015 04:17 PM
thanks!!

homework = hard and i refuse to do any of it
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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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25 Nov 2015 04:32 PM
(BUMP)
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JeckyllAndHyde is not online. JeckyllAndHyde
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25 Nov 2015 04:50 PM
wht kind of emo RP is this
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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25 Nov 2015 05:05 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eal4fep7pK4

time to crotisize

Plot:
"Orphanage RP. ABUSIVE orphanage rp..."

...That's it? No setting? No reason why it's an abusive orphanage? Why is it a orphanage? Cliche much? Mary stu much?! Location? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"The caretaker's called Ms. Lola."
This supposed to mean something?

Total rating:
Considering I can't do setting, time period, etc., I give it a 0/40. Join other roleplays before making your own. Ask for help.
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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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25 Nov 2015 05:19 PM
(^ The rp hasn't started yet. I'm adding a special intro and plot twist. Why are you even here posting if you don't like this? IGNORE.)
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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25 Nov 2015 05:23 PM
"The rp hasn't started yet."

And?

"I'm adding a special intro and plot twist."

And? (2) That doesn't mean anything if you have absolutely no setting whatsoever, or plot.

"Why are you even here posting if you don't like this? IGNORE."

If you hadn't noticed, I'm trying to help you. I don't do this often.
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JeckyllAndHyde is not online. JeckyllAndHyde
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25 Nov 2015 05:24 PM
@awesome

"IGNORE!"ing criticism isn't gonna get you far in the RP community. Instead of being arrogant, take some advice and improve your roleplay.
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Z0rr0w is not online. Z0rr0w
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25 Nov 2015 05:26 PM
>plot twist.
But you don't have a plot to twist.
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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25 Nov 2015 05:27 PM
10/10 roast
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happysupercooldude99 is not online. happysupercooldude99
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25 Nov 2015 05:28 PM
ooh, mama

she'll need some water for that roast right there
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SagePakkana is not online. SagePakkana
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25 Nov 2015 05:30 PM
To this thread, and to the owner.....THIS IS BULLS##T! WHERE'S THE STORY?! WHERE'S THE SETTINGS?! WHO THE F##K IS MS.LOLA?! HALLELUJAH! HOLY S##T! ZAGIT!

*leaves room, slams door*
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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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25 Nov 2015 05:33 PM
You guys were starters before? Everyone starts out. And even if your first piece is good, congrats! You were successful! If I were you, I would move on. Cause, it's just a game, boohoohoo. And, I can plot twist whenever I like. You don't have any control over me so, why try?
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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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25 Nov 2015 05:35 PM
And actually, before you even try to get your hands on that keyboard, listen. If you tell someone they need some help, help them yourselves! You say to get help, well, you must be a pro at this. Well then, help others before you even try to criticize! Tell them what's wrong and help them develop!
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SagePakkana is not online. SagePakkana
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25 Nov 2015 05:36 PM
Oh you think that's so funny? HAHAHAHAHAHA NO! F##K YOU! This thread feels incomplete....very. This is s##t! You're bulls##t!

*mental breakdown*
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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25 Nov 2015 05:37 PM
Lolno
Yes, we were starters
Bet you know what makes us different from the average "starter"?
We tried every day to improve ourselves
Make our rps better
Make our characters unique
Most of all
Deal with whatever someone says you do wrong by learning from it
So do what we did
Ask what you did wrong
Improve, improve, improve
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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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25 Nov 2015 05:37 PM
And don't be rude, follow the roblox rules Mr. I-Think-I-Know-Everything. It's right there. Go up, up, a little more up and CLICK. Simple huh?
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awesomejaydelle2 is not online. awesomejaydelle2
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25 Nov 2015 05:38 PM
i just realize u won



ok



sorry




lets start over



writing a new into now
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SagePakkana is not online. SagePakkana
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25 Nov 2015 05:38 PM
Dude....f##k the rules.....some. But Rock is still right, you need improvement....a lot.
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rockmax2112alt is not online. rockmax2112alt
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25 Nov 2015 05:42 PM
Since you need a lot of help, I'll party you.
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JeckyllAndHyde is not online. JeckyllAndHyde
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25 Nov 2015 08:33 PM
@awesome

nobody is antagonizing you, were just saying that you should take some advice
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